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Posted: 13 years ago

this part is dedicated to BKP's stalker. NEHAMCC987😃


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N_UxqHuJYY this is the perfect piece for this update. Its a short update. Sorry. But my hubby was getting mad that I am not getting enough sleep. He mixed sleeping pills in my evening chai. Yawnnn .. sorry guys. He was being mean to me. Hehe.


Part 27

as they both walked onto the deck. Their could feel their hearts beat. Dhak dhak. Dhak dhak.. harder and harder. They felt as if time was slowly slipping away from their hands. This night they wanted to last forever. Alone, in this piece of heaven earth. No tensions, no problems. No one else. But them. The sun was setting. The same vibrant colours as yesterday. Ranging from an array of orange, to red, to maroon, to violet. They both just walked silently onto the beach. Facing the water. They sat down on the cooling sand. Just feeling the presense of each other beside them. Silently facing the water. They heard the deck door open. Minta and tom both walked out. Smiling. Aranv and khushi looked at them and smiled.

Tom: hey man, I was thinking. Its a beautiful sunset, why not take some pictures. What do you say.

Minta: yeah. We can then cherish the moments forever right. She looked at khushi as she said that. Khushi slowly blinked her eyes to say thank you to her.

Aranv stood up. And held his hand out to help khushi. She shyfully put her hand in his and stood up. All four of the friends started to take pictures. Sometimes solo. Sometimes the girls, sometimes the guys. Just doing random things. But most of the time the couples. Aranv and khushi or tom and minta. They would pose infront of the water, with the sunset behind them. Khushi was ovbiously very shy to take pictures with arnav alone. She looked up at the camera, and mintas forceful eyes gave her the push that she needed. Aranv came and stood a bit closer and tilted his body a bit. His chest was now against her shoulder. He placed his hand on her back. So tom and minta wouldnt notice. Khushis eyes widened and she turned to look at him. He looked at her. Tom took the picture without them noticing.

Khushi turned her head and looked down. Aranv looked at tom and gave a huge opened mouth smile.

Aranv whispered without moving his lips much.: khushi. You look better when you smile and look at the camera. Please. Yeh pal qaid kar nay do.

Khushi looked up and smiled. She tilted her head a bit towards him. Not much, but enough. Tom took another picture. Khushi started to feel a bit awkward. Aranv noticed.

Aranv: now it is your turn. Here, I will take the pictures.

Minta: no no. we took a lot of pictures of us right now , and took a lot yesterday and today before our hike. So its fine. Tom I think I want to watch a movie. Doesnt matter which one you got. Lets watch it. Hmm. Tom agreed and they both went in.

as khushi was walking back towards the center of the beach sand area, she didnt notice arnav walking with her. She turned around and saw arnav slowly making his way to the edge of the water. Where the waves were gently coming in and out. She smiled and walked back towards him. She stood beside him. Both of her hands down by the side. She felt something. She looked down at the area in between them. She felt his index finger linger around her fingers. Slowly sliding its way to her index finger. And gently making its way between her middle finger and the index one. She lifted her index finger and they hooked onto each other. Their bond was as delicate. Their love as pure. Their emotions as connected. They didnt need their entire hands to hold onto each other. They just needed each other by their sides.

Without leaving her finger he slowly turned his body to face hers. She turned as well. First looking down. She started to raise her eyes. To look into his eyes. He moved in a bit closer. Her heart started to beat a bit faster. He looked down at her. She looked up at him. Everything was just perfect. A beautiful sunset surrounding them, warm waves gently caressing their feet. A gentle wind blowing making her hair slightly fly in the air. And them. Just them. No one else. Nothing else. Just them. This moment was theirs. He started to lean in. their faces inches apart. She closed her eyes. And her lips slightly parted. He stared at her lips. Pink, delicate, and soft lips. The scent of her breath was hypnotic. He brought his face closer. Much closer. His lips parted as well. Just millimeters apart from hers. They could feel the warmth of each others breaths on them. Her heart was beating faster and faster. His heart was no longer in his control. But something happened. Something khushi was not expecting. She felt his fingers slid along the side of her lips to the other side. Her lips pushed to one side as his fingers went from one end to the other. Until his palm was now covering her mouth. He tilted his face and gently touched his tender lips against her cheek. She took a deep breath in. he moved his head a millimeter back. Staying close to her face. One hand still covering her lips, and the other hands finger hooked with hers. He took in the aroma of her hair which was now also blowing onto his face. The silky strands caressing his eyes, forehead, nose. His eyes remained closed. she felt a tingling sensation where his lips had caressed her cheeks. this moment she would never forget.

After a few moments of treasuring this moment, he moved his head back. And opened his eyes. Hers will still closed. He gently moved his hand down. Brushing his palm against her lips. As he moved it down, her lips parted. Her bottom lip attached to the side of his hand. He felt the inside of her lip, he was now moving his hand more and more slowly away. His gaze fixed on her lips. As the last bit of her lip separated from his hand. She opened her eyes. Bringing her bottom lip up again. She left go of his finger and brought both of her hands up. And placed them flatly on his chest. She turned her head to the side and placed her head on his chest, near his heart. She closed her eyes and his heart beats. Dhak dhak.. dhak dhak.. dhak dhak... he brought his arms around her and wrapped them around her. He bent his head down and turned his face as well. Gently placing his cheek on her head. He took deep deep breathes. Yesterday, she allowed him to hear her heart. And today. He let her hear his.



Precap: minta and toms plan. And its is a success! But.. but but but.. it might have a bit of a negative affect. Hehe. And tom and minta movie scene is sweet hhe..

dnt forget to do lots and lots of comments. Hehe. If you are able to that is. Thanks :)

Edited by freezie - 13 years ago
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haha stalking really paid off ha
yay first again thrice in a row haha let's see if i could maintain this
this calls for dhink chika dhinka chaika
kya bolo mein i am speechless yaar after reading truly amazing
i really appreciate that you take time out for us too besides being a wife,a mother,daughter-in-law and you know you too have many responsibilities even though you update daily i really admire that about you.so uhm freezie what should i call u like what's ur real name cuz i kinda feel weird calling u by ur username if you like me to call u freezie then OK
oh yaar freezie i re-read the chapter and look what i noticed you wrote
"this part is dedicated to BKP's stalker. NEHAMCC987😃"
oh stalking has given me two benefits one i will be first to comment woot and get the part dedicated to me haha i should stalk everyone now,actually no i will be recognized as the weirdo then haha
how sweet of u i feel touched so sweet.haha arshi i mean khushi is getting even more comfortable around minta and tom now, yes this means their plan is working.wow i can't believe khushi agree to take pics w/ arnav that too in front tomin (minta and tom)haha created a name for them cuz tired writing it out k
yup sabar ka pal meetha toh hi hogye na hehe i am jealous of arshi and tomin becuz they r standing and seeing the sunset i never get a chance now a days, when i was little i used to go outside sit on the grass w/ friends chat and see the sunset they are so so so lucky,now to busy to.khushi is getting cuter and adorable day by day arnav say something then he pouts and feels bad then the next moment woh raazi hogye ti kya baat hai
you know khushi isn't that sharmili then she seems right she let arnav come closer to her and steal her heart.haha arnav created a new technique to kiss a girl on her gal huh.he putted his palm on her face and pecked her gal how cute.you know this is super duper romantic the sunset,their proximity,just the two of them,but the fact that they are keeping their love pure and innocent is really adorable and not taking things too fast.also for the fact arnav to not take advantage of the situation and also of khushi is so gentlemen like it makes me get emotional and over-joyed i can't tell you.oooh don't forget after he kissed her on cheek khushi kept her head on his chest. this time khushi listened to his heart.ab kushi ki baari ti huh.yes i do accept the update was short but the depth and emotions in it was better than a 20 page update seriously i can't explain how amazing the chapter was again loved it to bits.you know freezie the are tons of ff of arshi but yours has some kind of magic to it that makes you want more and really addicting i can't explain.haha i would explain this chapter in simpler words quality over came quantity.totally loved it the chapter that i can not explain.also i am truly sorry for not commenting earlier because i was really busy and tired slept yesterday at 5 am so sorry once again
p.s.dear have some sleep your health comes first for us. wow i can't believe i wrote this much lol
ok i know this is annoying now but cant help it dhink chika dhink chaika dhink chika dhink chaika
rae ae ae
ae ae ae ...
sorry guys 🤣
Edited by nehamcc987 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehamcc987

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haha stalking really paid off ha
yay first again thrice in a row
this calls for dhink chika dhinka chaika


you know what i had a feeling that before i even edit it in the first page you would have comments or reserved. hehehe. hehe..

oh waittt wait.. read the beginning again..
i am off to bed. enjoy and before i forget. ..
dhinka chika dhink chika..
Edited by freezie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: freezie


you know what i had a feeling that before i even edit it in the first page you would have comments or reserved. hehehe. hehe..

oh waittt wait.. read the beginning again..
i am off to bed. enjoy and before i forget. ..
dhinka chika dhink chika..

haha you know it i will always try to comment first even before pms haha i gonna go to bed in a little while after i comment of course
oh the dhink chika never gets old
poor readers getting confused bwt the update and comment can't blame them
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye...wot negetive??:-/ ...no pls...i dont want nething tik.g wrong from here...

NewAys...loved it to d core...though it was short bt i think i l manage coz twas worth it...

Deir photo session was jusst brilliant...and deir moments alone later were mind blowing...
I was taken...d perfect "awww" moments for me...

hav said dis umpteenth no. of times already bt i respect ARNAV ol d more...just luv him

Now toh um waiting for certAin revelations to take place...and khushi z reaction...

Muah
Dhwani
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update...
Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love this story! I like how Khushi iin this stry portrays so many girls like me and ones I know. We want to be repectful and not do anything.

Love th updates!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow tht was a beautiful update...
loved it...
u knw wenever i read this ff i hav an awesome feeling...
guys like this r very rare...
superb update...
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omg it was soo intense..this story shows how u dont need physical love to last a relationship...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update and your hubby is right you should get some sleep if you are really tired!
Edited by zoey_1365 - 13 years ago

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