Where's My Destiny Thread 2 Updated! - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

804

Views

82.4k

Users

106

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

Dazzling_Smile thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

NImmi... i m angry on u right now... is that the place to stop... agh... plzz update soon

NHIII *drama queen*
tum mere sath gussa nhi ho sakti..
oh GOD i gonna faint soon
Dazzling_Smile thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Arsha1994

luvd d updt..canu plzz pm me..

y not sweetheart...
i will abs. *absoultely* PM u... but i m having a rule..
those who will comment will get PM... hehehehehe
so keep commenting :)
21Neha21 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#83
amazing update...
m so hapy dat kria is back home again..hope she gets wel soon..
waiting for d update eagerly..plz update soon..
Dazzling_Smile thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Part 27

As no reply of 3 seconds, she banged it more hardly on which someone opens it without seeing whoever he is, she hugged him and fainted.

The boy was non other than rey.

He too lost his balance and fall back with kriya on him...

Every1 was shocked to see Kriya in this state.. Rey feels her shirt wet.. he turns and now he was on top of her..

He sees her tears rolled down his cheeks.. he hugged her tightly and then realized the condition of her..

He literally shouted..

WTH IS THIS'.. CALL THE DOCTOR RIGHT NOW..

Sw: han han karta hun...

he calls the doctor and said its emergency.. he called his family doctor as he don't knw abt any other..

Sw: he is coming..* he was really tensed and hyper*

Rey really tried to wakes her up by lightly slapping her cheeks but no response...


Rey hold kriya in his arms and lifted her and then places her on the bed.. his mind had already stoped working when he saw her like this..

He was literally crying' on seeing his state Smriti got tensed , she too was crying seeing her child like this but it was a new experience for her to see a boy crying like this..

All were tensed' so they didn't spoke a word' in other words they got a big shock of their life seeing this so they don't have words for this..

Swayam tells rey to remove the blood on Kriya' he looks at her mom for approval and for his surprice she just nodded in tears..

He pick a wet cloth and cleans kriya, neck and then at that time he saw the deep cut on her neck.. he touched it slowly through which he felt that she was real in front of him.. this touch of hers was a God's Blessing for him..but when he sees how deep is it ,he got tensed and called swayam to see it..

Swayam sees and then closes his eyes tightly as he can't see his best friend like this' he thought if he is going like this so what was rey's state' he can only see his dull face with fear ...

They tried their best but she was not responding...

swayam called the doctor again , but was interrupted by the bell...

he opened the door and saw the doctor which bring a faint smile on his face...

In the group , this was the first time when tears rolled down vicky's cheeks as he never experienced such things.. he went in a shock seeing his friend and his friends' love like this..

Swayam sees this and went to him and clean's his cheek on which the tear was..

You r so much innocent then I thought..


On hearing this he hugged swayam tightly and then released him

All group was crying silently..

Guyz I knw u wanna slap me to end at this point but actually I have exam tomorrow so no updates till 18 april or I will try my level best to update before it' till then keep commenting and I really love ur comments to the core.. and yup one more hing plz no bashing on short update'

Chappals and juttas are welcomed..

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago
Flame.Of.Rose thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Its amazing... Want to kill u at droping the story at this note... Bt don't wory won't do so... Cn undrstand ur exams pressure... All the best 4 ur exams... Plz update asap...
Dazzling_Smile thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: aditi061

Its amazing... Want to kill u at droping the story at this note... Bt don't wory won't do so... Cn undrstand ur exams pressure... All the best 4 ur exams... Plz update asap...

hayeee mujhe marna mat... warna mere FF ka kya hoga??
who will give u updates this lazy???
awww thx u understand ...
21Neha21 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awsme awsme...
just amazing...
waiting eagerly to know whats gonna happen next..
ekiholo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#88
ahhh it was amazing!!!!👏Want to kill u at dropping the story at this note... But don't worry won't do so... Can understand of ur exams pressure... All the best 4 ur exams... Plz update asap...n dont 4get to pm!!!
Arsha1994 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#89
amazing updt...feeling sry fr der condition...
all d best fr ur xams...try 2 updt soon if possible...
Dazzling_Smile thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: ekiholo

ahhh it was amazing!!!!👏Want to kill u at dropping the story at this note... But don't worry won't do so... Can understand of ur exams pressure... All the best 4 ur exams... Plz update asap...n dont 4get to pm!!!

hayeee 2 log mujhe marna chahte hen... nt fair...ye soch lo k mere baad ap logon ko update kon de ga... socho socho

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary · 5 months ago

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli · 5 years ago

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".