Originally posted by: crazysky
yaar tere likes ki expectation quantity is increasing day by day...
n yes y not u write fab...this part was super awesome...
i just wanted to say that plz show rey a little bit concern 4 kria..
lyk she had a cut over her neck right?? n he is busy in romancing n kissing on her crook...that was little undigestable...(sorry 4 pointing out , hope u dont mind) n offcourse
i dont mind their romance..that is fab in ur ff
dude in actual he didnt see her cut as the pic i gave u about her dress covers her that part of the neck... m sorry i didnt give the brief introduction and these fights and romancing all was just to diver her mind from that tragedy as she was really horrified by this so he starts romancing and all just to diver her mind...hope u got what i want to show u guyz :) and yeah i forgot to tell this in the update...
and thats so sweet of u to point out as i aleady said any galis and suggestions are warmly welcomed... :)
Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago
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