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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

mast tha...

ab jaldi se update... kr dena

waiting for next part jaldi se...

all the best

hey thx and btw i didnt send u PM for the other FF cuz i knw u will be really sad to read kriya and karan's friendship..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey all the best for exams...n sweet update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
chotu again but loved it tons
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsme update...
loved d care d group n rey is showering on kria..
waiting for d next part eagerly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..finally Kriya opened her eyes 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 28


But wait.. she just saw something... it was her love.. Her friends and her home... and unknowingly a faint smile take place on her beautiful lips... but why were they staring at her so shocked and tensed...

She saw all of them one by one , blinking her eyes again and again...

Tears rolled down her eyes.. as if they were tears of happiness, tears of to be back at home... to be back...

To be back... and t..o..b..e..b.a.c.k...

She was feeling dizzy ...

The 1st person to call her and realize that it was real was swayam..

Sw: kriya' u' ok??

She looked at him as if he was the only one in room but someone too was there ...

She was about to hug him but couldn't move...she gulped hard and tries to speak..

K: aa...i...m..mm...ok..

She really tries to speak right but she was unable to do that.. she don't want to tense anyone ..

K: y...rr...u...lo..o..king..at..m..me...l.i...ke..t..hat???

All starts looking here and there and then again at kriya..

All this time rey was just looking at her..

Adoring her, knowing the pain she suffered and then suddenly his eyes were stuck on something..

On kriya's neck , at that deep cut..



He almost shouted

R: W*F

All were staring at him like he has killed someone... they gave him a look what- was- that??

He just looked at kriya's neck giving them the signal to follow his gaze..

All shouted: WTH..

At this kriya got scared and her face was full of fear and was scared...he gulped hard ..

She slowly , giving herself pain moved her hands and placed on her face .. her hands were shivering in pain and fear..

All feels guilty but again sets their gazes on her neck but stopped as rey gave them a stop-it-or-else-u-will-be-dead

They all start looking here and there...but again looked at her with tensed look when swayam questioned her..

Sw: kriya what happened??

R u ok?? I mean that cut on ur neck..

She moves her hand on neck and remembers all the incidents and again screamed and starts crying... all were more tensed.. she tries to speak..

K: th..that..ps...psycho ...man... H..he..did...this..to..me..

All went silent .. they were having second thoughts and same with rey... but whatever has happened he have the courage to face it but he didn't knw what was getting to start..

Rey: who.. why???

K: i'I ..

She starts coughing and rey bring a glass of water placed nearby him..

She tries to hold it but failed..

She looked at him with a dull face..

He knew what she want to say so he starts giving her water by his hands.. she feels heaven after feeling something going in her stomach.. she was dying for one drop of water and here she have gotten a full glass of water and that too by his love..it really feels heaven..

She again have a look at all of them... there she saw what.. WHATTT

Her eyes gone wide after seeing this..

Sharon'S-H-A-R-O-N and that too at my house and dazzling team too...

She was feeling dizzy..

K: I ... w...i..ll..tel...l...u...t..om.orro..w..

She said very innocently..

All of them smiled at seeing her like this and she too smiled..

But wait... she again scanned the room and shouted

K: MAMMAAA

Rey got scared and held her hand in his..

R: wat happened kriya???

Y r u shouting..

And there starts her hyper mode..

K: ma.. ma kahan hen... Ma..unhe...ye..pata chal..gaya to..no..i ..will..be..dead..

At this everyone stared at her with angriness.. she caught them staring at her like this..

K: I .. m. sorry L

All smiled and then they remembered the whole blanket thingy..1st one to start the conversation was Vicky..

V: ah guyz I will not share this blanket with any boy.. I knw u guyz always gets me wrong..

Kriya stared at him with a smile...

She starts to laugh'...

K: heheheh. v..vi..vicky..the..then..w..with..who..r.u.go..gonna...s..sh..share???

Vicky looked at neha... Neha's eyes widen..

N: noo.nnnoo..

V: yes..yes...

Sh: neha he is not gonna rape u ..he just wants to share a blanket..

N: no.. phir bhi no. neha gonna not share a blanket boy with..

V: neha I just wanna share blanket yaar.. plzzz

N: ok babu..

Then it's other's turn..they all shot glances at each other..

R: amar can I share the blanket with u???

A: ale u selious?? If ya then I will shale wilh u..

*are u serious??? If ya then I will share with u*

R: ofcorse.. thanks amar..

A: ul welcome.. *smiling dreamily at her*

Now two settled..

I knw guyz u wanna kill me at always stopping in mid but wat to do.. chappals and juttas all are welcome'..

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayy first one to comment i hope...its amazing update finally kriya spoke n awww rey giving he water n awww vicky wants to share blanket wid neha...plzzz next part jaldi update karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum prt...
Kriyansh finally spoke...
Rey comforting her..givin hr water...
Kriaz hyper active mood...viha sharing blanket...everything was perfect...
Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update nimra. thanks for the pm.
haan kitbni achi hai tu u always expect the worse .
i want next update asap .else i'll tell pari to load u with dhamkies.
thanks for the pm.
update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this update!!n thanx 4 da pam!!

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