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abhijaan

@abhijaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi everyone!!

This is abhijaan! I'm going to be giving updates about a fan fiction called Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha. Before I tell you guys anything, it is very important for you guys to know that I won't be giving PM's at all for the updates. I'm sorry but I have a busy schedule and I hate PMing 😭

Now many of you are wondering how you will find out if there is a new update. I will update twice a week, Wednesday and Saturday! So for people who want to read this, just save my update to your favourites and every Wednesday and Saturday, you will have an update added to the index 😉 😊

I'm so sorry if there is any inconvinience! I know it's awful of me to do that but I used to have another account on india-forums and there were just too many people to PM that I had to shut down my account and I left my story in between and I don't want to do that again! So please cooperate with me please! 😊

This is a love story about young people. It has the characters, Maan and Geet!

As of now, I won't give an update until Wednesday but I will give a sneak peek so you guys can decide if you are actually interested in reading this! Please be sure to give comments and tell me how you guys are liking the story! And always be sure to click on the like button! Please it will be much appreciated and I will be encouraged! Thank you!! 😃

Kehte hain khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hain banaya har kisi ke liye, tera milna hain us rabb ka ishara manno mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye...Kuch to hain tujhse raabta, kuch to hain tujhse raabta ❤️

SNEAK PEEK/CHARACTERS-

Rohit K. Handa- A very rich businessman who is married to Sanjana. He owns Handa Business empire and is one of the richest businessmen in India. His only wish is to have a boy who will handle his business empire.

Sanjana Handa- The wife of Rohit Handa. She is a very simple and innocent woman who is willing to do anything for the happiness of her family.

Geet Handa- Daughter of Rohit and Sanjana Handa. She wants to become a business woman by studying in New York State University.

Maan Singh Khurana- A stranger who meets Geet on the plane. He's very nice and handsome. He soon becomes a good friend of Geet as they start a new journey together in New York.

INDEX

Sneak Peek/ Characters- Page 1

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2- Page 2

Part 3- Page 2

Part 4- Page 4

Edited by abhijaan - 13 years ago

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suba2011

@suba2011

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

nice...but want more maaneet moments

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

hey dear

happy that you're writing on maaneet

great concept n interesting cs

waiting for the update

continue soon

good luck for the ff

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abhijaan

@abhijaan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

PART 1
Rohit Handa and Sanjana Handa were a happy married couple. Sanjana was nine months pregnant and Rohit was super excited. He was going to be a father. Rohit didn't tell anyone that Sanjana was pregnant. He wanted it to be a surprise. Doctors had told Mr.Handa that Sanjana was only capable of having one child, but Mr. Handa didn't mind. He had full confidence.
On April 5, an angel was born.
Nurse- Congratulations Mr.Handa! It's a girl!
Rohit was shattered. A girl? He had a girl? Rohit Handa, a rich businessman, one of the biggest business tycoons of India, had a girl? What would people think? What would India think? What would people think when they found out that the next owner of Handa Business Empire is a GIRL?! Rohit couldn't let this happen.
By that week, Rohit had filed for divorce.
Sanjana- Beti hain aapki! To kya hua agar beti ho gayi?!
Rohit- SOCIETY MEIN PROBLEMS! Mera business empire. IK LARKI SAMBHALEGI? Pehli baar humare Khaandan mein aisa hua. Main yeh hone nahi dunga.
Sanjana- To main isko kaise sambhalogi? Kaise palogi? Kahan jaungi? Kahan rehungi?!
Rohit- MUJHE NAHI PATA! Lekin aajse tum meri kuch nahi lagti.
Rohit ordered the servants to pack everything that belonged to Sanjana, burn all pictures and things related to her and drop her off at the bus station. Sanjana left with her daughter, Geet. Before leaving Sanjana looked at Rohit.
Sanjana- Aajse mujhe aapki jaroorat nahi hain aur aapko meri nahi.
Main aapki jindagi mein kabhi vapas nahi aayegi aur nahi meri Beti. Namastey.
The next day, Rohit made an announcement to the public that Sanjana had died due to illness.
Sanjana left and went to Punjab. She took care of Geet, lived in a nice clean house and worked as a teacher at a Public School and taught Physics to 10th graders and even gave tutions. Geet grew up to be a beautiful, smart and caring young girl. Geet knew what her father had did but she never talked about him. If he would come on TV, she'd change the channel. She didn't care about him at all and never thought of him.
By now, Geet was a 20 year old girl. She worked for a few years after completing high school as a Swimming instructor at the local Fitness centre in Jalandhar. Then, she finally had enough money to study in a good University.
Geet applied for New York State University. It was her dream to study in a university that was out of the country as she wanted to be prepared for the real world and wanted to become modernized.
1 month later, Geet went to New York. Geet was ready to leave. Geet hugged her mom before leaving.
Geet- I'll miss you Mom!
Mom- Khush reho beti. Apna dhyaan rakhna. Be aware.
Geet- Ji Maa.
Geet left and boarded her plane.

This was the first part!! Hope you guys liked it!! Please be sure to leave comments and be sure to like!! 😃

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AmElOdI

@AmElOdI

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Nice concept
loved it
update soon dear:)

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stuti

@maangeet_rocks

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Oh god...that was a beautiful start...
Amazing story...
Jow can a father abandon his child and wife just because the child was a girl...hope he realises his mistake soon...
Continue soon...

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abhijaan

@abhijaan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys! So sorry for the late update!! My laptop's charger stopped working so I couldn't update! Here is Part 2! PART 2

When Geet boarded her plane, someone was sitting on her seat.
Geet- Excuse me?
The man looked at Geet.
Man- WOW .
Geet- Excuse me?!
Man- Yes.
Geet- This is my seat.
Geet showed her boarding pass to him
Geet- You see? 34A...that's me.
Man- Oh well actually I like this seat. Mine is 35 A, write next to you. No big deal.
Geet- Actually it is. Sorry for the inconvinience but I would prefer sitting on my seat which I paid for. I like window seats.
The man got up and let Geet sit on her seat and he sat next to her.
Man-You must be a first time flyer.
Geet- Yeah.
Man- If you get scared, don't worry. We're together for the next 8 hours.
Geet smiled.
Man- I'm Maan. Maan Singh Khurana.
Geet- I'm Geet Handa.
Maan smiled.
Maan- So where is your final destination?
Geet- New York.
Maan- Awesome!! Me too!
Geet- That's nice.
Geet kind of ignored Maan. The plane was getting to lift off. Geet was super scared.
Geet- Waheguru, Waheguru, Waheguru, Waheguru, Waheguru.
Maan- Don't be scared.
Maan's hand was on the arm rest, Geet had her eyes shut tight and also prayed to God. Geet was so scared, she grabbed Maan's hand.
Maan smiled.
Maan thought in his head- Kitni hot larki mera haath pakad rehi hain. Maan ajj to teri lottery lag gayi.
The plane lifted off and was in the air now. Geet opened her eyes and noticed that her hand was on Maan's. Geet quickly took her hand off of Maan's and quickly put her head to the other side. Maan smirked.
Maan looked up and whispered- Thank you God.
Geet turned over and looked at Maan strangely.
Geet thought in her head- Hey Babaji, 8 ghante is batameez ke saath kaise bitaungi? Babaji, raksha karna meri.
2 hours went by, Geet was busy watching a movie and was laughing uncontrolably. Maan admired her beauty. She looked so beautiful when she laughed. Geet noticed Maan staring at her.
Geet- What happened?
Maan- You have something on your forehead.
Geet rubbed her forehead.
Geet- Is it off?
Maan- No.
Geet got up and went to the bathroom to take it off. Geet came back a few minutes later.
Geet- There was nothing on my forehead except for a strand of hair.
Maan- Exactly.
Geet- Huh?
Maan- I said you had something on your face, you could've told me to take it off, so you wasted your time by going all the way to the bathroom.
Geet was silent.
Geet-Hmmm
Maan- So what are you planning on doing at the 12 hour stay in London?
Geet- Nothing. Just walk around, get something to eat.
Maan- Same here. But I kind of wanted a partner. Maybe we can go explore London!
Geet looked at Maan.
Geet- I'm sure there are alot of people in the plane who want one. I'm sure you'll find one.
Maan thought in his head- Yeh larki bhi na, samjhti ni. Chalo, land hone do, first time flyer hain, jaroor confuse ho jayegi.

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abhijaan

@abhijaan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

PART 3

The plane landed in London. Geet thought in her head- 12 ghante, London mein, akeli. Kya karoon?
Maan tapped on Geet's shoulder.
Maan- Look, I think that it would be a good idea for you to come with me. Common trust me. Agar tumhe ghumna accha na laga to fir vapas aa jana airport par. Dosti ke aage nahi baduga.
Geet thought in her head- Well ab aayi hi hoon London mein, bachpan se yahan aana chahti thi. Inna vada gabru jawan mere nal aa, mainu kis da darr?
Geet- Hmm theek hain.
Geet and Maan took a public bus from the airport towards the city.
Maan- Great! Hum bahut mazza karange. Khaana khayenge, ghumenge,aur of course shopping.
Geet- Accha bas meri ek hi wish hain.
Maan- Han batao.
Geet- Vo, yahan bahut saare museums hain! Aur bachpan se books mein dekha. Please mujhe 2-3 dikha dena!
Maan- Oh common man! Shit!!! Geet!!!! Museums? Yaar! Kitne boring hote hain. Budde budhis vahan jaate hain! Teachers chote chote bachon ko lekar jaate hain! Chod na yaar, boring hain!
Geet- Mujhe ni pata! Maine jana vahan par.
Maan- Geet! Jao, akeli jao. Maine ni jaana.
Maan thought that this would make Geet change her decision of wanting to go to the museum. Geet made an innocent face.
Geet- Tum ik first time flyer, Punjab ki bholi bhaali gaon vali ladki ko itne bare shahr London mein akele chod kar jayenge? Jab ki tum bas in 12 ghanto mein se 2 ghante museum ke liye de sakte hain aur baaki 10 ghante tumhari marzi se chalenge. Please naa..
Maan melted because of her innocence.
Maan- Accha theek hain! Bas 2 ghante! Uske baad nothing educational! Kitna boring hota hain yeh sab!
Geet jumped with joy!
Geet- Shukar hain! Thank you Maan!
Maan and Geet walked their way to London's famous British museum.
Geet- Wowww!!! Kitni bari museum hain, haina Maan? Iske andar pata ni kitna gyaan and shiksha pada hain!
Maan was totally not interested in the boring museum.
Geet- Jaante hain, is museum mein kitne saare dekhne vali cheezein hain!
Maan- Geet, look at the size of this museum. Itna bada hain. Ik ik cheez dekhne ke liye 2 ghante se bhi jiaada time lagega. Mujhe ni pata, ya to yahan apne 2 ghante bitado ya to thoda sa time yahan par aur fir koi aur museum.
Geet- Theek hain, 2 ghante yahan! Humne sab kuch dekhna hain!
Maan- Hey bhagwan, aisi sazza kyun di?
Geet- Chup ehh! Yeh sazza nahi hain! Gyaan hain! Shiksha prapat karenge! Enjoy karenge!
Geet and Maan took a tour in the museum. Geet was fascinated by everything. The beauty of the ancient past of the world was amazing to see. Maan felt like he was living in hell. The atmosphere felt boring and old. Old things were boring.
Maan- Geet, mujhe aise lag raha hain jaise main jail mein band hoon...buddhe logon ke saath. Boring cheezein ka gyaan de rahe hain. Mujhe bilkul ni mazza aa raha.
Geet- Urghh...you don't enjoy the beauty of ancient history. Men...
Maan- Women...
Geet glared at Maan and Maan kept quiet.
Geet- Ancient Greek, Ancient Rome, Saudi Arabia, the Roman Empire, Athens, Roman Architecture! It's all so amazing!
Maan- God...kill me.
Geet- Maan! Ab yahan hain to enjoy karo! Do you even know that this museum is considered as one of the world's greatest museums of human history and culture! Aisa mauka kabhi nahi milega!
Maan- Milega! Hell mein!
Geet- Oh shut up Maan! Agle 10 ghante tumhari marzi se hi chalenge! Ab mujhe to enjoy karne do!
Maan rolled his eyes to show he is irritated. He was kind of a spoiled brat.
Maan- FINE!
Geet thought in her head- Maa baap ne bigada hua is larke ko. Agar meri marzi chalti, in 12 ghanton mein hi isse sudhar leti.

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Oyee i love HUM TUM..its my all time fav movie...

waise ek baat bolu...why didnt u open this in Geet Forum?

nowadays all FFs are opened there onlyy...seldom people come to FanFiction Forum

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Wow interestng!
Chi rohit is so mean..how cn he do that?he forgot that his own mom is women and he dnt want girl child..i hate ths kind of people who underestimate girls..
Hmm finally our maaneet met..omg geet thnkng maan as batameez and our maan is care free natured..iam lovng it
cont soon

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