FF: Be There For Me... Forever Chap5 Pg34(12/6)

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Fantastic update.. Well worth the wait.. Such powerful writing.. I felt their heartache like it was my own..

But what's this? After all this, he still won't give her his trust? Tut, tut, Arnav bitwa.. Not done.. Let go of the control for a change.. And recognise that if there is anyone who deserves your trust it's this girl..

Loved this part.. Hope you update again soon.. :)

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Awesome Update, Very wel written.. UPDATE SOON

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

YOU DIDN'T MESS THIS UP!!!!!

This was seriously AMAZING!!!!!! REALLY!!!!

I had tears in my eyes reading this!!!!

It was really AMAZING!!!!!!

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

awesome. and superb writing. A name for your Dr? How about Amit? after my favourite actor. I don't think any of the FF have Amit as character.😊😊😊😊😊😊

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barfi

@barfi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

awesome looking forward to more

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

great update loved khushi conversation woth devi maya and pleased that arnav heard it. Wow all arnav needs is khushi to get better wonder if she will agree

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Awesome update

Loved Khushi's convo with her DM :P

Loved it loadz <3

Umuahhh

xoxoxoxoxo

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Hi Nina,

Thanks for the PM, it was amazing and made a nice long read. LOved Khushi's monolgue with DM and Arnav listening to her and regretting what he has done to her.

Pls update soon.