ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Thanks for the pm dear. Lovely collage...

And thank u thank u for giving such long updates... Brilliantly written.

But honestly i was waiting to read arnav's thoughts about the previous night in the forest with her. why did u skip it?

I just hav a request. Try not to rush up with the story. Keep the pace with the original story line. But if u get a promising scenario of arhi then just take ur own sweet time to through more light on arnav and khushi's feelings for each other.

Looking up for more beautiful chapters from u.

Take care.

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indiavizion

@indiavizion

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

gr8 update

from khushi's resignation to nani appointing her to be handmaid to a heated convo bet khushi and lordy lord...and finally her new job...now waiting to see wat will be buaji's and payal's reaction upon that...and r u going to let aakash and payal meet after this update as u have almost covered every character in the ff in this update...

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Thanks a lot for the bonus updates Aqua!
Things were quite fast paced.From Kushi terminating her contract and her reappointment by Nani which will now bring both of them closer.
Now her stay at the castle will open a series of encnter,fights and may be many Rabba ves 😛 too... if you decide to gift us them????
Thanks

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

fashion-stuck flamingo..!! LOL that really cracked me. :D i loved that. hmm...you really made my saturday.! the story is building up now and m enjoying it. one thing i would like to mention is that i really love how khushi always speak about her self respect adamantly. that really made me love her and her determination even more.! *sigh* now it would interesting to see how he control his desires for her and tolerate her. and well i noticed one thing too, he loves picking up fights with her.! aww it was so cute..!! it conveys how he longs her..! and yeah thanx for PM. all in all loved it. do continue soon..

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

I just read this...loved it..is wonderful and very well written too...

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serialmaniac

@serialmaniac

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

finally back to arhasian... so in this chapter i am not going to say hes a vampire! hes a were wolf! hes a light bulb!

wait what did i type?? but as u keep showing arnav to be under some sort of spell well its likely for us to believe it to be a mythological creature.

dear lord arnav angry again?? hummm well not new...nothing is going to stop khushi from racing into your life, falling head over heels into your arms and rabba veying away at the lake (poolside)...its likely to happen

rahim chacha shoo...i was looking forwartd to the arhi fight and u interupted.

Welacome khushi ...to the lion's den

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

this chapter was just too good !!!!😊

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

waw superb update loved it sooo much

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Hey!

This was a wonderful update! To start off with, it as pretty lengthy but what's not to like about that 😊. I also like how even after being treated so harshly by Lord Arnav, Khushi still goes back to tell him that she isn't going to work for him. Many women or young girls for that matter wouldn't have done so in fear of what was to come, yet Khushi is brave. Deep down yesss she probably is a little fearful of Lord Arnav, but her anger I feel takes over that fear. Both in a sense are fiesty and full of fire, which I thiiink needs to be released. 😊

I reckon that our Lord Arnav here has a plan up his sleeve or will do soon. What I mean by that is that I think he'll try and test Khushi's patience even further and what the outcome will be ... I'm not sure. All I know is that I'm eagerly looking forward to readthe next update! 😃

Thanks for the PM! Please PM me the next update once it is ready.