ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#561

Omg omg... I am breathing hard!!! That beautiful... Arnav saving her... The detail of the forest adventure and their encounter... M dead!! He kissed her which calmed his inner devil!!
M so excited for next!!
Thank u for the update... Muaaahhh

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dingle

@dingle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Phew! Ive had a long week and just had a marathon update fest.

First of all woohoo - Nani (whos self imposed exile reminds me of Charles Dickens of all authors) is out and about. Woop! Our girl Khushi has such an effect on people.

General Jha seems to need Khushi for something and is on the verge of desperation. Youre building the mystery up very cleverly... I cant really tell if he's a bird or a bat (personal bias aside) and if he's positive or negative. After all it may not be the actions of a sensitive husband but his letter to Khushi didnt give off any warning signals... to me atleast.

Fantastic take on the red sari photoshoot thing... I wish there was a picture we could have seen with that update but you painted the whole room and scenrio so vividly that it was a visual treat too. Ofcourse our Dark Lord has to maintain control at all times even if it is in the middle of a lightening storm and invloving scared horses. If I were Khushi I would have bit him... Dark Lord or not!

Akash and Payal = cuteness!

and lastly coming to this update right here. Again I wish she would have whacked him over the head a few times to reiterate that she thinks he's a Moron 😆 but that is wishful thinking. He's finally given in to his attraction - Hallelujah!

Too bad it was when she was unconcsious but small mercy after all i doubt shed have taken a creepy monster mauling her neck the same way we've taken reading it. Haha

I still dont know what type of blood hungry beast he is... werewolf? Vampire? Shifter? Oh so many possibilities... cant wait to read more :D

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

effect, u say? U write? Or u weave? Im hurting in places it would be funny to mention! & my heart was fluttering, hammering, slowing down, racing up, stopping, beating wildly, all through ds very same update! Oh Gosh. Arnaaav in ur Efff EEfff is sooo...dangerously hot! Hes like scorching, searing, blazing, smouldering, MAGMA hot.. Oh. Oof. Phew. Oh man... Tummy ache.

P.s. I am in love. Again. Thats fifty seven times now.

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Real tummy ache. All czo chapter latest.

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#565

AQ if this was ur longest update...I would say this was the most nail biting,gripping update too...I was holding my breath while reading it and could finally expel it after the end...beautiful and absolutely mesmerizing update...the hidding beast coming out...but the beast is in love with her...now waiting for their future encounters...dark...mysterious...gripping at the same time goosebumps evoking encounters...

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#566

ooo i m just starting to read this FF and i m sooo excited after reading the prologo :D

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#567

So good I read it twice. 👏👏👏

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smashitup

@smashitup

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#568

☺️ you may well be sat commrades with your hot beverages, LS you know I favour a colder companion when I read although I may well need to switch after reading the last 3 chapters ...

Lord Akash and Payal ... oh the gentle tug !!!

Lavanya's missed peck on the cheek ... and then the Kitten's tussle with the Lion ... do I even need to tell you what that did to my tub of praline and cream iced Sunday treat ?!

I needed an escape and your world is the most positive around, I salute and stand proudly by as you show off your talents for taking us to another world in this Inn of friends ... thank you 🤗 x