ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

A beautiful piece of work. Thank you for giving such a lovely story.

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serialmaniac

@serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Oh...mesmorized by her bueaty huh naughty nanav 😉 well this toh had to happen one day...remonds me of the red sari scene in the serial.

Si ut proves that lord arnav does have a heart or better said emotions. he wants a the original of her painting, wat for?? to hang in his room hmm quite a naughty idea. But why on a horse?

Well that reminds me, what is a horsestable doing in a silk factory. Or does it signify the parking lot where all the lordies park their horse. This brings me back to another similarity from the serial. Car rushing to khushi, raining, khushi scared, arnav steering her out of the way. Way to go arnav.

Great aquailine. Nice matching all the serial scenes to the ff but wont that make it predictable. I mean if the ff is predictable it wont be that intresting to read. no offence, just a suggesion from my side.

u know next khushi will be appointed to train lady la, marraige preparations, la leaving, shyam popping up, arnav marrying khushi in anger, and the rest.

Lastly, no arnav go shadow...save khushi *cheering*

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Het dear fab... FF very different story ur way of writing is attractive .
Love ur FF it's getting more n more interesting can't wait for next update.
Plz update soon thanks 4 pm.

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

WHOA.! t'was superb.! gosh man i can still feel the adrenaline rush coursing through my body.!

* a deep sigh* where to start..ok straight from the beginning, i really loved that little song of her. LOL it was so cute, just like her..! then unknowingly her being the model for the robe and then the wonder created by it was just beautiful.! you know you really wrote it mighty well.! indeed a magical vision. you wrote it so precisely that i could easily make out how out standing she would be looking.! then i really like a phrase which i would like to share -

"Lord Arnav had decided to leave because in the presence of others and especially Lavanya, he could never give Kushi the kind of attention he desired to give her. So it was better he left"

so which kind of attention arnav babua..?? LOL.! i really enjoyed it.! and then this horse sequence, m fairly sure that this incidence is gonna take their relationship to a very different level.! heee ..so excited for the next update.! do continue soon..😃

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

i m lost of words now as my grammer is not good enough to explain how extraordinary fab this 2 updates are👏👏

the way u have described kushui's beauty from arnav 's eyes, its just 👏👏 kushi coming to the industry humming the song on her lordy ord & arnav hearing it amused,,just wow👏👏

arnav reallized, kushi has awaken emotions in him, so to keep his wall intact he odered her to posee on a horse😆😆

just one request, kushi posed for a calender in the drama but cvs forgot about it compltely . the cvs coulld have shown her as becoming the face of the year😭 . so plz if possible make a value of kushi , the chinese kingdom should ask for th girl in red silk robe😳

i have no idea what are you doing on IF😕. you are an extremely talented with superb style of writing on midival era. i really hope someday a movie/drama writer get hold of yr writing & you get the success which you truely deserve.

thankyou for entertaing & cheering us with yr fab writing as the actual drama these days has completey sucked the blood out of my body🤢.

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

OMG absolutely loved it...The photo shoot and the guest house scenes with AQ unique touch...absolutely mesmerizing...can't wait for their confrontation and the beginning of the fall of the mighty Raizada into the endless pit of love

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

just caught up with all the chapters... this story is taking a very interesting turn... i can imagine all the scenes and interactions... emotions pouring out of khushi and arnav, a petulant lavanya and an eager nani...

superb!! keep it coming!

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Mona

@mona1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

awesome ff loved it thanks for the pm!

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Love, love, love. Are you sure the bartender has to close up? Can't he stay just a while longer. I have high hopes for the next part of the story! For some reason, in my minds eye, I am seeing visions of Rochester and Jane, and that is SO not a bad thing!

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smashitup

@smashitup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#510

Lin 🤗 the inn-keeper will have no problem moving me out of the place, I'm so on the edge of my seat that I'm barely sitting down ... my frozen yogurt has long melted into something the artist may well have been able to use on his canvas as I was glued to your every word. Oh and the other thing that may have melted my Sunday indulgence was the heat radiating from Lord Arnav's eyes ☺️ a glorious read full of emotion, awakened desire and a Rabba Ve fit for this Inn ... it set me up very well for the next Chapter ... can't wait LS x