ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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garlic

@garlic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

absolutely amazing update...thanks for adding me and writing those kind words for me.I am honored dear😊

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dingle

@dingle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

Hayye Hayye 👏

What chemistry they share! Lord Raizada the Lordy Lord prefers to have his women subservient to him eh? On thier hands and knees and scrubbing floors/windows/HORSES!!! 😆

I love Khushis fiestines but more than that I love it when she ignores him and does her thing. Theres nothing worse for a man whos ego is bigger than his height than being ignored. Clever girl!

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

I am the newest member to join your comradeship! This is one impeccable piece of work. Let's just say that the light streaming through the window and landing upon Khushi to illuminate her beauty only shows how pure she is from the inside. What would happen if that same light were to land upon the Lordy Lord?!?!? Hmmm. Not much.

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Idealist11

@Idealist11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

I love the spin on this story. enjoy reading about ASR's conflicting emotions and you do a great job portraying that! And yeah I kinda am an idealist cos I am a sucker for happy endings.

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

wow..amazing update lin..loved it...👏

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shass

@shass

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#466

superb!!⭐️ loved da chp.. atleast at 3 occasions,i cud hear a mental Rabba-vey!! 😆
am so glad Lin, dat u gave ur own special touch to da story n i enjoyed it alot.. i lyk it dat its not predictable ne more.. as for symbolism, dear ,am hopeless or may be i shud check for water,cleaning n wash-cloth n may b, jst may b, da windows too😆.. what i only understood ws dat da lord lyks to talk to her,lyks hr rebellious nature n hates dat she thnks low of hm..ws it jst me or he really ddnt wnt ne1 else to see hr being disgraced lyk dat??.. y cnt u update 2-3 chps at da same time?? hw vl i wait till 2rw? urghhh...
@ da msg; ❤️ u Lin..muahh..

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serialmaniac

@serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

Oh dear...in the serial arnav sent her to mesure the men while here he is asking her to clean horses!!! meany but i still like the first lord...barun

ok out of my daydream. staring at her in the sunlight...khushi's red sari day...inch pinch

feeling sleepy so not commenting much...great update...hoping to read the rest of khushi's day at the industry 2mrw.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#468

loved it

he is so cruel

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Mona

@mona1997

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#469

loved it thanks for the pm!

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#470

Amazing update.
Our dear Arnav is unaware of the fact that he is falling into the same pit what he thought has dug for Khushi.It seemed he has started getting attracted to Khushi.
Excited for the next round:)