ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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vicqust

@vicqust

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

General Jha!!! couldnt you have made him a door to door sales man? ok we're in the wrong century lol 😆

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vicqust

@vicqust

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

finally finished reading all the chapters. quite creative, enjoyable read. Once again love the illustrations. i am sure you have noticed the profile pic of the girl is so similar to Khushi. you did an amazing job. thanks again for sharing. Looking forward to reading your next chapers👏👏👏👏👏

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Leafs

@Leafs

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Miss A,

You've taken the art of story telling to a different dimension. Do I detect hint of self doubt? Hope not, you are a brilliant writer and should continue writing, master this craft cause obviously you have the talent.

Loved your last two chapters but what was mind blowning - your CAC, girl how do you think of these things?? Mindblowing.

Here is my pledge:

I, Leafs, present myself as one among the Circle of Arhasian Comrades and gather at this inn, awaiting the unraveling of Aquiline's narration of the tale of the Beasts and the Bleeding Roses

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Mona

@mona1997

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

loved it thanks for the pm!

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

oh my god... the prologue itself is soo amazing...

Arhasia... loved that name.. and the map for reference.

will be back once i read all the parts.. too exited to comment after reading the prologue..

now i'm gonna rush to read all.

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smashitup

@smashitup

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Lin ...

Permit me to reserve a place to comment with what struck me the most about your story very deeply, not least because of our budding own bond ...

I haven't been able to focus my mind long enough to read anything lately other than that which I am obliged to do for work purposes ... you know I had been saving this until such a time that I could sit peacefully and absorb it ...

Your surprise addition to your chapters of a storyteller is the most apt chapter for what and who you are in this whole experience. You are the oh so important lynchpin for all the sheets of papers that need to be bound together to make these chapters into a book ...

I agree with many of those who have commented before me that it is indeed like reading a book. I was telling my sister you write like Karin Slaughter & James Patterson (ok they are thriller writers) but you capture the essense of your characters and setting in such a small number of words, that in itself is an art ...

All the chapters flowed really well and had something new to offer, I love the illustrations which make this world of yours come alive. All five of my senses are experiencing your world Lin ...

I love how all the relationships are important in your story, not just the love story developing between Lord Arnav and Khushi ...

Parents, siblings, community and soon to become enemies ? no one escapes your writer's light ...

I will tell you which Chapter struck a chord with me, it was the one where Lord Arnav has to gag himself ... I don't want to get too personal in this open space but I can say short of actually tying something around my own mouth, I know how he feels ... the whole trying to keep something within that is screaming to be set free. The sheer terror of allowing even a breath of it to escape is unthinkable let alone do-able ... I could completely identify with that scene and the way you wrote it ... the darkness surrounding him and within him ... I applaud your imagination Lin that crossed over so effortlessly into reality ...

Khushi's fall into Lord Arnav's arms and his rage and disdain for her, another highlight ... you stay so true to what it is we all love about the original and yet show us a story that has come from your mind and heart ...

You are indeed blessed with the joy of imagination and the ability to share it with all of us ...

Thank you so much LS for your generous soul and spirit ... having sworn my oath, I look forward to walking this road alongside you 🤗 x

Edited by smashitupsobti - 13 years ago

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

I, purplelove, present myself as one among the Circle of Arhasian Comrades and gather at this inn, awaiting the unraveling of Aquiline's narration of the tale of the Beasts and the Bleeding Roses.

Aquiline you are to funny. Waiting for the saga to continue. Hope the Lady in the Hood talks to you soon.

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Finally, I got some time to read your FF. Wonderful update!

Ermm... So this was the surprise? O.o

OK, I don't know what to say. I'll only say that your mind is programmed a lot different than mine.😆 But I applaud your dedication to this FF.

Frankly, this is weird. But I'll still say this.

I, Golden Dragon (Since you prefer to call me that)😆, present myself as one among the Circle of Arhasian Comrades and gather at this inn, awaiting the unraveling of Aquiline's narration of the tale of the Beasts and the Bleeding Roses.

Ok, now I felt like I took some oath in front of an 16th Century King.😆

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Hun.. I have been wandering again..! But where can I go!! Cannot stay away from you or my favorite, epic saga for long! So here I am!

I loved the previous chapter coz it really showed how deeply affected Khushi was with the incident that pained her and her family so much! And it also shows how she deals with her passionate emotions!! All by herself! She doesnt let others share in her grief! Getting herself lost in work and tiring physical labor, working away the anguish, the energy!! My heart ached as much for her as her Babuji's!

Your knowledge about the chocolate liquor production had me widening my eyes with amazement!! What detailing Lin!! Loved it!! And also loved the Khushi bitiya.. aww!!

Then we see the siblings again.. so connected to each other yet so different!! While Anjali's concern and anxiety for Khushi and her family is heart warming, Arnav's lack of even the basic sensitivity for others, tears at our hearts!! What has this man gone through to have become so bitter!! I must admit, his behavior appalls me!!

Loved the last bit where you mentioned how Anjali never wanted Arnav to see her tears! What an insightful detail Lin! Yes.. if he mends the things that he has so heartlessly broken just to make Anjali happy, just to wipe her tears, then it would be a compromise! Not something that his heart and mind told him to do!! Not something that his soul permits!! She wants his soul to heal, his hurt to mend.. his heart to see and accept love!! Something which he deliberately determinedly doesnt allow himself to do, something that she cant manipulate him into doing! It has to be natural! Oh yes.. this Anjali is different and I love her more now!!!

Now you surprised us with the lady in the hood narrating the story to us in an inn in Arhasia!! Oh I would so love to visit her with you!! Would you take me with you one of these days??😊

I, Shweta, present myself as one among the Circle of Arhasian Comrades and gather at this inn, awaiting the unraveling of Aquiline's narration of the tale of the Beasts and the Bleeding Roses.

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

I love your Amazing and Unique written work Aquiline.. Once again just like the show, ur story with gothic fiction in it makes it breathtaking...and yeah something which i dont wanna turn back, once m reading on it... still few chapters away.. cant wait to ge there.
The bonding of sisters, and every character and every scenario description was so like flowing images in my tiny brainwa :D