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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hoila Annie!
Chapter 3 and 3 were super good love.🤗
Thanks for the double effort eh?!👏
And btw, for a moment I reallt thought his update was dedicated to me, history, favorite subject, and everything we talked about it was all reflecting in this post.😆 I dont why I felt that way, but thats why actually came to my mind, when I read it.😳 Chalun, choro, I think to much, and blabber even more faltun stuff, you must have had the plot planned, i am just over thinking these days.*crazy*🤪
Coming to crictical analysis, Lavanya, is a bimbo here too, aye haye, when I am I going to get rid of her? Still after Arnav, dude, she need a break, bechara Arnav babuwa will go crazy hearing La's bimboish comments all the time now!🤣
And Khushi thinks hes got that Big a ego, to match La's?🤔, I am hoping that her view would be changed, after that almost mid air drop,.😳
And that genetically enginerred dialouge seriosuly cracked me up!🤣
P.S: Sorry, for my untimely comments, you do know how much I have on my plate these days, if it gets undone I am so going to be a loser then.🤓
Love Ya,🤗
Batool.😳
*Btw, I have updated the Character Sketches Of FF: Teenage Love, Do Check Them Out!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nav_bat

Hoila Annie!

Ola Batool!
Chapter 3 and 3 were super good love.🤗
Thankoo so much Love!🤗

Thanks for the double effort eh?!👏
Heheheh...no problem!😉

And btw, for a moment I reallt thought his update was dedicated to me, history, favorite subject, and everything we talked about it was all reflecting in this post.😆 I dont why I felt that way, but thats why actually came to my mind, when I read it.😳 Chalun, choro, I think to much, and blabber even more faltun stuff, you must have had the plot planned, i am just over thinking these days.*crazy*🤪
LOL!! 😆 Actually yes, I had planned it out already, but lemme remind you that this whole FF is dedicated to you, bud!!! Hahahah... 😉 We're official nautankis here or so, if the others don't mind! At least I want to take myself that, 'cause I love to do Nautanki!! :P We're already sailing in the same boat, mah papi!!🤗

Coming to crictical analysis, Lavanya, is a bimbo here too, aye haye, when I am I going to get rid of her? Still after Arnav, dude, she need a break, bechara Arnav babuwa will go crazy hearing La's bimboish comments all the time now!🤣
🤣 Hahahah...you won't be getting rid of her so soon!! And this story needed someone b****y and bimbo-ish here...actually more bimbo-ish, and I thought Lavanya would fit in here good! And for the record, I put in her chamchis too!!! :P Even I was sad for Arnav, at first, but I enjoyed writing all of it!!😛 😉

And Khushi thinks hes got that Big a ego, to match La's?🤔, I am hoping that her view would be changed, after that almost mid air drop,.😳
What's a story or fiction without misunderstandings, evil, and some more drama, eh? Actually what is LIFE without all such things??

And that genetically enginerred dialouge seriosuly cracked me up!🤣
Actually that's my FAV dialogue in the movie and I replay it a lot of times, when am watching it!!

P.S: Sorry, for my untimely comments, you do know how much I have on my plate these days, if it gets undone I am so going to be a loser then.🤓
No probs, bud! Aww...Mera pyaara sa bachcha!! Now see friendship is about sharing na? Toh share some stuff with me too, so I can relieve you from them! Oye! Sab mat de dena!! I myself am in one such dilemma, with my entrances hovering around me!! :P
Hah! How will you be tagged a 'loser' if you don't get anything done, eh? Please elaborate!!
😕

Love Ya,🤗
Love ya too!!
Batool.😳

Annie


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ola Amigos!!🤗
Thankoo so much for your lovely Comments and you LIKES!!! Made my day again!
Here's the next chapter...

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A/N: I have taken some creative liberties about the geographical area and landscape, as I've never been to those places.

NOTE: I retain sole ownership of all these works of fiction, so please, my dear friends, do not alter or reproduce my work and claim it as your own.
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Chapter Five

Payal: (her eyes searching Khushi's face) What happened, Khushi? (concerned)

Khushi just couldn't find words, once she remembered what had happened in the morning class, from the eye lock to the moment between them. She mentally tried to shake it off.
Arnav noticed Khushi's discomfort. He was furious at Aakash and already planning to kill him.

Aakas: Don't worry! (putting his hand up to stop Payal from asking more questions) I'll tell you...Well, it goes like this..

Arnav wasting no more time hit Aakash in his shin.

Aakash: Lavanya was''' (as his shin stung in pain) Owww...(hissing and nursing his shin)

Payal: (jumping at his yelp) What happened?

Aakash: N-nothing...Well... (his eyes scrunched up and then glaring at Arnav, before turning to Payal again)

Arnav started coughing loudly. So to not make it obvious, he coughed like a patient suffering from congestion.

Khushi: (getting up at once, on seeing him cough and rushing to him with a bottle of water) Here! (holding him by his shoulder)

Arnav put his hand up to hold the bottle and suddenly felt something soft under his palm. He opened his eyes a bit to bring the mouth of the bottle to his mouth. Khushi automatically, brought it nearer with his hand on hers. She felt something strange in her stomach, but brushed it aside and tried to concentrate on the bottle.
His lips parted a bit, to let the water in.

Aakash: (already by Arnav's side and concerned) Wassup, bro? (placing a hand on his shoulder) You okay?

Payal: (concerned herself) Yeah, are you fine?

Arnav's ears couldn't register their voices as he had long tuned them out, except Khushi's. He could hear her clear concern in her honey sweet voice.

Khushi: Are you okay? (stooping down a bit)

He drank slowly and enjoyed the soft cushiony feel of her fingers beneath his palm. When he finished almost half the bottle, slowly the other two voices made their way through his ears.

Aakash: You okay now? (stooping down to Arnav's face) Hmm? (seeing Arnav nod his head positively) Kay, shall we continue? (straightening up)

Arnav groaned and cursed himself for saying yes to Aakash. He just wished to run away from here.
Just then, Khushi's phone started ringing.

Khushi: (straightening and fishing out her cell phone from her pocket) Uh! (looking at the caller id) I gotta go (mentally thanking god) It's ...it's urgent. (gesturing Payal to come)

Payal: (understanding) Yeah! We should get going! Well...nice meeting you two! Take care, Arnav! (nodding to Arnav, who nodded in response with a smile)

Aakash: See ya, tomorrow!! (waving his hand)

Payal felt somewhat impatient about the next day, but brushed it aside and just smiled a wide smile.
After nodding to Payal, his eyes caught Khushi's, with the same expression.
Khushi smiled and said a silent bye to both Aakash and Arnav, with a sweet smile, acknowledging them.
Arnav blinked and grinned at her, as he saw her smile widening too, as she looked at him.

Aakash: (noticing the unspoken conversation) Woohoo! (winking at Arnav)

Arnav: (turning with the same grinning expression, which then turned to a scowl) You! Ass!! What on Earth were you doing?? (trying to catch hold of Aakash)

Aakash: (smartly dodging Arnav's hands) What did I do? (pretending to be innocent, but failing a chuckle bubbled out of him; instantly jogging away and then, running)

Arnav: Come back here!! (following Aakash and increasing his pace)
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Payal: (turning to Khushi) Smiles, what's it? What happened?

Khushi: Nothing... much..(avoiding to meet her eyes and thankful so as she was driving)

Payal: 'Nothing'? Or something 'much'?...(tilting her head) You know, you're a bad liar, at least in front of me! You never hide anything from me, then, why this? (her tone slightly higher) Khushi, (seriously) spill the beans...out with it now!

Twitching her lips, Khushi pulled in her car at their favourite place, Central Park. She got out of the car and stood, leaning her back against the door, sighing.

Payal: (getting out herself and coming around to stand beside Khushi) Khushi...What happened?...Look am really tired of this stupid question now!! (annoyed) Okay, fine, if you don't want to tell me, then it's fine, but don't just keep quiet!! (on hearing no response) Hmm... (suddenly her mind lighting up with an idea) Kay! (seeing a shocked Khushi at the unmistakable voice)

Yes, it was Mona's voice! Payal had the knack of mimicking people's voices and Mona's was the best!

Payal: (with a mock serious expression and in Mona's voice) I want salmon soup right now!! Otherwise, you're fired! (pretending to think) No, I won't fire you, because I'm very...APPEALING! (arching her back, so her chest was arched out like Mona's and a hand on her bosom, just like Mona would always keep) Hmm..? (raising her eyebrows) I'm VERY...(in a seductive fashion) APPEALING!!! (her voice dropping low)

Khushi just couldn't help but laugh hysterically at her best friend, acting out Mona - the Medusa!! It was damn comical, even if she used the dialogues! Whatever it was, Payal could lighten her mood anytime, anywhere.
Seeing Khushi laugh, Payal felt relieved. She hated to see Khushi in a sober mood. Although the girl had gone through so much from losing her father to almost her self-esteem, Khushi still kept a calm outlook and tried to smile and even laugh genuinely at times. Not that she was an introvert, but all this had made her keep things to herself and to her closest friends, that's all.
Payal was the one, to whom Khushi would let out her feelings. Khushi would somehow feel happy even at the worst moments of her life.

Payal: Hmm...(nodding approvingly) That's my girl!! (hugging Khushi) YOu okay?

Khushi: (hugging Payal back) Yeah!! See, Payal, it can never happen that I won't tell you anything (Payal smiled sweetly) Actually this morning, in class after I had briefed the class about my project, and right when I was stepping down the platform, I felt someone's leg near my shin and I lost my balance! I was about to fall, when I felt somebody hold me. I opened my eyes to see Arnav holding me... (as her lungs filled in with the cool air)

Payal: What?! (dumbfounded) That..that B****!!!! How crass of her!!! (nodding her head in disbelief) Are you alright?

Khushi: Of course I am, Payal! Did you see me limping?? No na! (tilting her head a bit)

Payal: I...(about to get up)

Khushi: (holding Payal's arm and pulling her back to sit down) Payal...Leave it!! She apologised that's enough! (looking away)

Payal: (with a disbelieving look) Smiles! She apologised NOT to YOU, BUT to Arnav!! (blinking to make sense)

Khushi: So what? (turning to Payal) Let it be! She apologised, that's what's enough!!! As it is what Aakash said was true, that Lavanya 'Kashyap' saying 'Sorry' is THE Breaking News!!! (her fingers indicating inverted commas)

Payal: (her anger breaking into a smile) *chuckle* You bet!! (shaking her head in disbelief) So what happened next?

Khushi: Well, I... I couldn't stop gazing into his eyes! (looking away to the grounds) I felt that they were speaking something...anything...(her eyebrows furrowing) They were a pair I had never seen before! (oblivious to Payal's teasing smile) I was surprised to see that Arnav was the person with those eyes...I mean, never thought that...such an egoistic person, may have such beaut-...(turning to Payal and realising her folly) I mean...uh...(gulping) such...k-kind eyes...(sighing on seeing Payal nod innocently)

Payal: Oye! (turning Khushi to face her) I heard all of it!!! All of it! So you like him?

Khushi: (getting up to go to her car) No!...(in a high pitched tone)...I don't know...(in low tone, as she sat in her car)

Payal: (opening the door and getting in) Oh!! But what about your secret admirer?? (batting her eyelashes) Won't he be upset, that you like Someone else?? (pouting like a child and with mock sadness)

Khushi: (blushing) Shut Up!! (starting her engine) See, I don't know if I like him, but I don't know, what happened to me...When I saw his eyes--

Payal: (sighing heavily ad cutting in) You felt yourself drown in them!! (plopping down on the seat again) You know, Smiles, you can write an English account on his very Eyes an describe it like in Mills'n Boons...(giggling) It looks as if you're Fida about his 'Eyes' and cannot stop gushing about them!! (batting her eyelashes again)

Khushi: Payal!! (warning her) I...felt good and easy when I looked into them... (smiling slightly) He's got kind eyes..

Payal: (smiling knowingly) Oye hoye!!! Smiles...(teasing)

Khushi: (turning to Payal) Now what? (closing her eyes briefly) why are you smiling like that??

Payal: You like him!!! (squealing in delight and just then, cutting Khushi in again) Don't...(her finger pointing at Khushi) deny it!!! Don't!!!!

Khushi: Payal, I don't know... (shaking her head in a 'no', while pulling up besdie Payal's house)

Payal: (laughing) Yeah, we'll see!! (getting out of the car, sticking her tongue out)

Khushi: Yeah, Yeah!! We WILL see!! (grinning)

Payal: Bye!! See ya!! (giving her flying kiss)

Khushi: See ya too!! (waving her hand as she pulled out)
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Khushi's home

Khushi opened the door thinking that Mona Medusa, would be sleeping on the couch snoring. No one?..thought Khushi. How can that be possible?

Khushi: Hello?...(stepping up softly on the wooden flooring) Mona?...(tilting her head sideways) Tanya?...(raising her eyebrows) Tanvi?...(looking around) Mona??

Mona: (coming out of the bedroom, all dressed up) Why are you shouting? What is it? (irritatingly)

Khushi: Oh! Sorry! I was just checking...(hunching her shoulders and then back) I thought...(her hands hitting her side pockets) nobody was there... (frowning a bit)

Mona: Well, in 20 minutes, nobody except you'll be there in here... (pouting out deliberately and pointing at Khushi with her freshly French-manicured nails)

Khushi: (furrowing her eyebrows) What do you mean?

Mona: Oh! Well, Me and Tani and Tanu are going out to La Paris...the mall...(with a puff of pride) We;ll be back by tomorrow...evening, I suppose... (haughtily and then, back to rummaging through her handbag) No where is that damn lipstick...(twitching her lips)

Khushi: (surprised) You'll be in the mall the whole night?? (raising her eyebrows in amusement; while jumping mentally at the thought of being alone at least for one night)

Mona: I didn't say that! (disgustinged) Well, we'll be...I mean...I'll be staying back at my friend Rose's house, while the girls...Umm...(furrowing her eyebrows as she strained to remember)

Khushi mentally prayed that the 2 devils would go out for the night.

Mona: (remembering and her face lighting up with a smile) Yes, they'll be staying at Lavanya's house...that's what they said. (going back to looking for her lipstick)

Khushi: Oh! (mentally excited, while trying to keep a calm look outside) Okay! (slightly smiling) Uh... (deeply breathing) Enjoy! (with a smile)

Mona: Thank you!!! (extra softly, faking a sweet smile, but then, turning into a scowl again) Where the HELL IS.MY.LIPSTICK?!?! (growling out loud making Khushi jump out of her skin)

Now what's with her? thought Khushi, amused at this silly lady, looking for something that she already had in her hand! Looks like the fever of checking your eyes has set in, moving forward and taking the lipstick from her hand and then, holding it out in front, with a smug like look.

Mona: (snatching it away from Khushi's hands and before turning) Oh, yes...Kay, you could call any of your 'friends' if you want to...Hmm... You know...You'll be alone...so...

Khushi: (raising her eyebrows in utter surprise) Oh... (unsure) Thank you!

Mona: (waving her hand) Oh, don't be so happy dear! You can call them if you want help in cleaning the house...

Khushi: (knowing what was coming) Oh...Well, I'll see if I want to... (mentally abusing Mona with the harshest words ever used in History)

Mona: Hmm...(before turning around to dab on more compact on her already pan-caked face and head out the door)

After Mona was gone, Khushi just plopped herself on the sofa.

Khushi: Pfff...(looking around) What does she mean by cleaning the house? (getting up and having a look around the whole house)...(raising her hands) Nothing there to clean the house...Okay...I think she wanted me to be busy and reclean this house the B-- (instantly shutting her mouth with her hand and bewildered at herself)

Shaking her head, she headed straight to her room, which was in the attic. Her room was very small, but had all the necessities, her favourite bed, a computer with internet connection, study shelf with books, a cupboard for her clothes and a fan and a huge window fro ventilation.
It looked as if she could spend the rest of her life with just these necessities and nothing. She reached out for her favourite old guitar, that her father had gifted her on her 7th Birthday. Her father was passionate about music as he was about food. He was a control freak and firm believer in Karma.

"Food for stomach and Music for the Soul."

She had kept it safe and was taking lessons online. She would sit for hours, just composing music, if she had to. She loved the sound of strings strumming along with her fingers. This piece of instrument reminded her very much of her dad and always made her feel secure and safe and a knowing feeling that he still is close to her heart.
In fact, she had many reminders of her father, that she treasured in a box, stored under her bed. She pulled out the box, and sat cross-legged with her back to the bed. As she opened it, she felt a warm breeze breathe in through the windows, which cooled out. Autumn...
This was the most surprising season for her, all leaves would be shed, for the birth of new ones in Spring. The sweet rustling sound of leaves in the ground were music to her ears,as the memories of her and her father walking the woods and collecting uniquely shaped, dry leaves for her scrap book, came flooding in.

There was that scrap book, tucked in by the side, beside the cute showpiece of a castle in water. She took in her hands, gazing at the small entrance, beautifully carved on that palace-shaped rock. That was the start of her dreams filled with her Prince Charming, as promised by her dad, who would come just in time to take her away from this world. There was her father's baseball glove, with which he would pitch the ball during their baseball days. She smiled faintly, thinking about it.
Suddenly, her eyes fell on the last piece of her father's reminder, tucked down there beneath all other stuff. Her eyes moistened as she remembered that this was the first book she ever had, a book that had favourite fairytale story - Cinderella.
Yes that was her favourite. It's ironic that her life was just like that of Cinderella, the poor girl, covered in Cinders, ill-treated by her step-mother and step-sisters, and who had lost her father.
This thought never struck her, as she was far busy keeping up her self-esteem and working hard to achieve her dream of going and studying in the most famous and prestigious University of Cambridge.

Just as a tear flowed down her cheek, her phone beeped up on receiving a message. She immediately fished it out of her pocket, wiping her cheek.

To: Smiles
From: Payal Pumpkin
Humaari Jaaneman! Jigar jahaan! [My Darling! My Heart!]
Kya kar rahi ho? Akeli ho ya kho gayi apne 'uske' saath apne jahaan?? Hmm? ;) [What're you doing? Are you alone or lost in your world with 'him' ??]

A small smile spread on her face, washing the pain that had just been spilled out from her heart. Sniffing and making up her mind to call Payal.

To: Payal Pumpkin
From: Smiles
Hum toh bas abhi apne room mein aaye!! Aap bataaiye! Aap kya kar rahi hain, chashmish?? [I just came into my room!! You tell! What're you doing, Chashmish??]

To: Smiles
From: Payal Pumpkin
Bhai hum toh bore ho rahein hain! Bahut bore! [Well, am getting bored! Very much bored!]
Seriously, Smiles!!! It's frustrating! Tomorrow's weekend and we've got nothing to do! Aha, an idea! Why don't you come here for the night? We'll have a sleepover!

To: Payal Pumpkin
From: Smiles
Hey that's great! Umm..but there's a problem! I can't leave the house. Nobody's home...1 Second, Why don't you come over?

To: Smiles
From: Payal Pumpkin
Now you're talking, my gal!! Clear the way, 'coz Payal the Great is on her way! Woohoo!! :D ;D

To: Payal Pumpkin
From: Smiles
See you soon!! :D
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Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 13 years ago
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Chapter Six

Within 30 minutes, Payal was at the doorstep with her overnight bag. Soon the two were roaming around in the house, checking out and exploring the rooms of the 3 demons. In the twins' - Tanya and Tanvi - room, all they could see were blue and yellow stuff. Weird combination! And the room was filled with awful smell - combo of smells, to be precise. As they were looking for the source of smell, they came across a dirty pile of socks and some half eaten sandwiches that lay scattered on plates on the floor; and also some smell that smelt like gaseous compounds. They realised that it was Fart!! They came running out of the room, in disgust and gasping for fresh air.

Payal: (catching her breath) What on...*pant* Earth, Khushi?...*huff* Don't these two wash their clothes and put the dishes in the sink?...or... even open up the windows or something? (furrowing her eyebrows; rolling her eyes) God, that was like centuries of Shit packed in!! Sheesh!! (scrunching up her nose)

Khushi: (laughing) When are they ever in their rooms? They're either swimming in the pool, going to their God-knows-what dance classes or always out shopping like their mother!!! I wonder why didn't they ever tell me to clean up?? (perplexed) And to top it all, Mona waited for this junk to wither and smell so I could then, clean up?! What Crap is she thinking?!

Payal: Uss Mona Medusa ki toh main... (fisting her hands and indicating a punch in the air, but to be stopped by Khushi and pulled inside) Huh? (pulling back Khushi from the room, bewildered) Where do you think you're going?

Khushi: Pumpkin! Mona, had told me to clean up the house. At first, I checked, it was all clean. But didn't enter this room. I've got to...

Payal: You're not doing anything! (sternly) Are you crazy?! You think I'll let you do that! (in disbelief)

Khushi: (cupping Payal's face) It's just a work of 10 minutes...Put the socks fro wash, and also the dishes and open the windows, and that's it! We'll be done! (raising her eyebrows)

Payal: (protesting) Why? Why alays you? (stopping at Khushi's look and knowing instantly) Okay! I know...(giving up) No Mona, No Cambridge!! I, seriously, humour this stupid contrast!! (sticking out her tongue)

Smiling at Payal's usual antics and blabber, she set to work. As Payal blabbered, she helped Khushi in restoring the Twin's room to it's beauty and in washing. Khushi and Payal were discussing their assignments and then, movies, and then, boys and girls, latest gossip in school, etc.. It was almost an hour, when they finished.

Payal: (plopping down on the couch; tired and sighing heavily) Huh...This took more than 10 minutes...as usual!! (obviously)

Khushi: I know... (settling herself down) am sorry!! You had to do it...I... (feeling sorry for putting Payal through all this)

Payal: (cutting in) Aww... Come on yaar! (punching lightly at her shoulder) Don't say sorry for such a small thing!! Well, I enjoyed doing all that...With You! I know how it is for you everyday! (concerned and sympathising)

Khushi: (grinning) Hey stop it!! Wanna have some hot chocolate? (her own eyes brightening up) It's getting kinda chilly (getting up and rubbing her arms)

Payal: Right o!! (walking Khushi to the kitchen; suddenly stopping Khushi in her tracks) Hey, let's change and then, go to the kitchen! Huh? (nodding her head in askance)

In 15 minutes, they were sitting all cuddled up in Khushi favourite blanket on the couch watching the movie - Dil Toh Pagal Hain (The Heart Is Crazy). This was their favourite movie, and would watch it whenever it was aired.
Payal would go all gaga over SRK, while Khushi just admired that simplicity in Madhuri and her belief and her faith in her dreams that - "Someone, Somewhere is made for you.."

Payal: (turning to Khushi) I know...(preening) such a beautiful line na?

Khushi: (out of her reverie, realising that she had said it aloud along with the narrator) Huh...(looking back at the TV, as a Halo formed behind the two figures of the two love birds in each other's arms) Yeah...hmm...(nodding silently with a faint smile lingering on her lips)

Payal: Wish it were true! (softly)

Khushi: Maybe...(looking away aimlessly) it is True...Maybe it will be true...

Payal: (nodding her head, watching the credits) I guess so... (getting up and taking the hot chocolate cups to the kitchen) There's baseball match screening live! Do you wanna watch it? (cuddling back into the blanket)

Khushi: (turning at the 'baseball' and receiving a look of genuine smile on Payal's face) *nodding* Good for me...will you watch it with me? (softly craning her head back to see Payal)

Payal: (hugging Khushi) Of course, Smiles! Anything for you!! (kissing her forehead)

Khushi: (grinning) Oh kay! (changing the channel enthusiastically)

Payal not at all liked baseball, but had somehow gotten a liking to it only because of Khushi, as she would normally discuss baseball whenever it came sports. Though Payal never used to watch baseball, she started watching it with Khushi.She would watch it only with Khushi. She would not watch it herself, though it was just an excuse to sit and see her Best Friend's face light up with unspoken emotions and genuine grins and laughs and enthusiasm for it.
It was not that that Khushi wasn't interested in other stuff, instead she was passionate about her hobbies, sports, her studies, but never let it come to the knowledge of many people. She found solace and peace while speaking to Payal, and would be her normal self in front of her.
Khushi was her normal self in front of everybody, but just didn't want to reveal much about herself to them, other than her loved ones.
Payal was the only one, with whom she would share everything. From her nail paint colour to the biggest of her biggest of dreams.
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Seated in his chair in his room, on his study, with one leg up folded to his chest, Arnav was looking through the pages of his History book. His assignment lay all tucked in and done. A shelf of Literature books sat beside his table; a study lamp that lit the whole table in front of him and also an attached notice board, that was filled with timetables, diagrams, famous quotes, pictures of camp after 8th grade Summer vacation, time lines of History. The centre of the notice board showed two cute pictures of him and his younger sister, Ananya.

In one of the pictures, Arnav's arm rounded up her neck, as they both faced the camera, while Ananya's arm wound around his waist. The two's faces were closely touching by their cheeks and were holding an expression of laugh. The other picture was a close up, where Ananya's cheek rested on Arnav's head slightly, as her hands wound around his neck, while his hands clutched her wrist. The two were slightly tilted and were grinning sweetly to the camera.

These two were the only pictures that made him laugh and smile fully. Actually, his whole world revolved around his dear Ananya. Ananya was adopted by Arnav's parents at the age of 2, when she lost her parents in a car crash. From the day she entered this beautiful house, Arnav devoted most of his time with her. Her smile was so cute and twinkling that it would make even his ruthless father smile.
Arnav was broken when they lost Mrs. Raizada, his mom. Ananya was 5 then. Mrs. Raizada died of sickle cell anaemia. It was probably the most difficult thing that had to be accepted by him. But he could do even that only because of Ananya. Ananya had taken care of him at such a small age. She would never leave his side. When she knew that he would need her, but always gave him space. Ananya had a beautiful voice, so she would sing their favourite song Yaadein, the one that mother used to sing for them at night. He would briefly cry during that sing and bury his face in her lap but those kind, chubby, gentle fingers that ruffled through his hair, soothed his pain manifold and slowly he would drift off to sleep.
Now they would take turns in making each other sleep. One day Arnav would sing the song and the other day Ananya would sing.

Arnav turned his head and glanced at the sleeping figure on the now connected bed across the room. He saw Ananya stirring and stretching and turning to face him.
It was a tiring day today. Both Arnav and Ananya had had their share of stuff today to be totally exhausted. With all that class fiasco, then Aakash's non stop teasing, then, their encounter with her and her friend, and again Aakash's ribbing and then, the most exhausting Rugby practice had totally drained him. Really that was high voltage today.
While Ananya had gone out to some other school for an Essay Writing Competition, to represent her school in finals. She had been selected in the Primary Level and was chosen to represent the school. After the competition ended, Arnav had come to pick her up, along with Aakash. Looking at her state, Arnav knew that she was damn tired after the day's events, thought she had an excitement of doing very well in the competition. Partly her face gave away her enthusiasm and that clear grin of enjoying the day. As soon as they reached home, Ananya wasted no time, but freshened up and after changing, directly plopped onto the bed heavily, feeling deeply drained out.
As he tucked her in after the song, he made a mental note of asking her about her competition next morning. He kissed her forehead tenderly and patted her head as he looked on at the little angel's face, that brightened his life. Smiling softly, he had gotten up, carefully, so as to not wake her up and switched off the lamps and dimmed the other lights across the room. The only bright light was his study lamp, that spread to faintly light up Ananya's face.

Going through the pages, the words that he was reading mentally, suddenly faded away and was replaced by an image of baby brown eyes. He turned the pages slowly in a trance, still looking at the book, but nothing registering other than those eyes.
He looked into those eyes thrice today. As he remembered the events - class lecture, rescuing her, and also at the canteen. The thought of those eyes, made him struggling to bring back the image of that face that held those eyes. He could still feel that soft cushiony feel underneath his palm.

He was pulled out of his thoughts, as the sound of his name registered in hie mind. He turned to the source and found Ananya calling out to him sleepily with eyes and nose scrunched up to adjust to the light in the room.

Ananya: Teddy! (sleepily)

Arnav: (closing the book, switching off the lamp) Hmm?...(walking back to the bed) What's it? (seating himself on his side of the bed; then swinging his legs up, laying himself down)

Ananya: (her eyes following Arnav's silhouette and then, turning her whole self to face Arnav) You okay? (her voice hoarse)

Arnav: (surprised and then, pulling Ananya towards him) Huh?...Nothing like that...just a tiring day, Anu... (sighing and then, kissing her hair)

Ananya: (her arm now across his chest and head on the crook of his arm; while it closed in to hold her) Hmm...very! (pecking his chest lightly) Night, Teddy!

Arnav: Night, Anu! (switching off the rest of the lights with his other hand)

Sleep invaded their already tired senses. Ananya was already asleep and breathing calmly, while Arnav's senses were slowly dimming and his breathing calming down. The last thing he remembered was that pair of baby brown eyes.
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*Click*

Ananya: Hey chashmish!! (opening the door wide to let Aakash in with his bag hanging on his shoulder) Come on in...(jerking her head to her side)

Aakash: Heheheh...Chasmish no. 2 (finger brushing Ananya's nose tip) Wassup? (his hand raised in a hi-fi position)

Ananya: All good, bro! (hi-fi-ing) You early today? (going inside, followed by Aakash)

Aakash: Uh yeah...(not revealing much, as he slightly blushed)

Ananya: Koi jaldi hain kya? [In a hurry or what?] (surprised to see a slight flush on his face; offering him a glass of juice)

Aakash: Nahi...aisi baat nahi hain [No...It's not like that] (accepting the glass of juice) Uh...(sipping the juice) Arnav kahaan hain? [Where's Arnav?] (nodding his head in askance)

Ananya: Aa raha hain! [He's coming!] He's changing! (seating herself on one of the high chairs set right adjacent to the kitchen counter and biting into a toast)

Aakash: (sipping slowly) Oh...(unconsciously checking his watch; noticing Ananya in her PJs) You ain' t coming?

Ananya: Nope! I've holiday to day! No school! (brightening up)

Aakash: Cool! So any plans for...

Arnav: (cutting in) Hey dude! Morning! (slapping Aakash's back)

He was dressed in beige cargos again but with a black collared shirt and sweater on it. His sleeves were folded to his elbows, and his hair as usual ruffled.
Ananya put her hand through his hair, swiping half of them to one side.

Aakash: (amused at the exchange) Dude, how come she can touch your hair and we cannot? (frowning)

Arnav: (taking his bag from the stool) Why? Why do you guys need to touch my hair? (his chin back in amusement)

Aakash: I meant Lavanya...You've never let her, anyone, for that matter, to touch your hair, except your sis! How come? (his hand on his hips)

Ananya: That's my special privilege!! (hunching her shoulders in delight and with a grin)

Arnav: That's why! (one finger pointed to Aakash's face) Because she's my sis!

Aakash: (walking out the room to the door) Oh yeah!! I see...(nodding in approval)

Ananya: Yeah, yeah...keep seeing!! (following them and sticking out her tongue to him) Chasmish! (teasing) And please...Lavanya...(turning to Arnav) Teddy, seriosuly?! Why on Earth do you date that...that...her? (controlling her urge to blurt out an abuse and her disgust in her voice)

All she got was a lop-sided smile from Arnav. So like him, thought Ananya, sighing heavily and nodding her head in disbelief.

Arnav: Hey, what happened to that friend of yours? (opening the car door) What's his name? (pretending to think) Ah...(brightening up ) Aryan!! (grinning at Ananya's changing moods)

Aakash: Arre, no dude! (going to the other side and seating himself) That's her 'boyfriend'...correction...'Boy..(instantly closing the door when he saw Ananya charging now with fury in her eyes and steam coming out of her ears) ...friend'!! (breathing easy finally)

Ananya: (failing to reach Aakash and suddenly turning to Arnav on hearing his consent on Aakash's help) You?...

Arnav: Oh yes! (starting the engine)

Ananya: (cooling down) Please, huh...He is a total Jerk!!! An ass! He's neither my boy-friend nor my 'friend'!! (haughtily) We don't even see each other, leave alone talk!!

Arnav: Aww...(keeping his arm on the window) don't worry, love starts with fights, of course!! (hi-fi-ing Aakash)

Ananya: Haw...You!! You come back home in the evening!! I'll tell you!! (seeing the car accelerate; jogging behind the car, from whose window she saw a hand waving a 'bye' to her)
Stomping and turning she went in.
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Great Knox School, Parking area

Payal: (clutching her bag) Where will you be? I've got a class for an hour!

Khushi: Oh, okay! Umm...(thinking as she got out of the car) I'll be in the library or ground. Most probably the ground. (nodding)

Payal: Okay! Bye! See you! (walking in)

Khushi: See ya! (waving a 'bye')
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You're gonna Love the next part!!!

So if you want the next part soon, you gotta comment, people!!😈

Annie
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Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 13 years ago
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Payal seems so friendly! Excellent update!
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love starts with fights huh?? are u referring ot lav's fights with khushi or ur gonna have some in the future..lol loving this so far.. cinderella was my all time fav too (tho my life is nothing like hers) great part and thanks for the pm... i loved that u put two parts up! (i already read ch 5 a while before) so it was a surprise for me.
Edited by brainychild92 - 13 years ago
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#57
Firstly, I love the clearity with which you write. As for the story, somehow I cannot help but feel the similarity in the story with the show, 'Miley Jab Hum Tum' only with characters of IPPKND instead.🤓
I love the way your story is flowing but would be even more happier, if we could have more Arnav Khushi encounters, even if it means a very tiny bit of it in each post. Pretty plz😳
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I cant resist NOT reading your work Can I? I had a danm Phy paper today and yesterday here I was reading a so awesomely written fairy tale, bah and I got what I deserved, an exeptionally faltun Physics Paper.😭 I'll lose me A Grade now.😭
God! I get carried away so quickly, I am so sorry, and its none of it that i am blaming it on you or my obession to read your FF, my fault and I pay.
Anyways, back to the topic, like you give me detailed Analysis, i'll give you one, only that i cant give it as good as you do, but still i'll try my best do all that I can.
That bottle scene was so Aww.😍 Ahan, I can imagine Khushi doing that, love starts with little things, and first touch (voluntary touch I mean), is always most remembered.😍
Payal and Khushi's bonding is really touchy. Its the same with me and my best friend (I ahve two best friends, and they both act similiar to Aakash), to make me smile they dont mind going crazy themselves, and thats why I love them.😳 And they even bear with all my unmoody tantrums, and my hoarse behaviour, and I think Payal does the same with Khushi (only that you havent shown a angry, furious Khushi as yet).
Khushi seems the sober kind, down to earth, keeping things to herself, finding happiness in the little things of life, and yet not expecting much from life accept her childhood dream of studying in Cambridge.
Arnav and Ananya, aww, their relationship is so sweet.😳 Its really adorable the way they love eachother, its like his world rotates around her and those baby brown eyes that he cant forget about (😆). His sister seems to be full of life, just like Aakash, and God I love your Aakash, he is so fun.😃
The next update better be fast, because m holidays are starting, and I cant wait to read as many FF's as possible now, only that I should be studying (I have boards in May), but anyways, I can always take me time out.😳
Thanks for the Pm, I can surely understand how big that itself is a big effort on your part.👏
Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago
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am just commenting to keep track...will be back to read it!!😆
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I LOve Cinerella Story and i am glad that some made it into a FF w/ ArHi !!!! Love that you are keeping close to the story while changing it up!!! I Think this is great can't wait to read more!!!!

PS glad you chose this Cinderella story n not the 2nd or 3rd!!! This one is my fave!!!!

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