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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry friends I was actually thinking of concepts but being a south Indian girl I know exactly how they will be. But the character of a north Indian guy is unpredictable so if I am wrong in any sense any of the north Indian guy can tell me what is my mistake so that I can do some corrections to rectify it. But as I decided I am giving you all my updates. It might not be as regular as my other ff's are. Because, I am writing two more stories also. Fine PYEK was always my favourite I hope this will always be my favourite ff

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION:

ABHAY RAICHAND:

Abhay who is popularly known as MR. Hot. He has a keen interest in directing films. He was keen to pursue visual communicate soon. He has completed his schooling and is waiting for his results. He is 18 years old. He always loves black and will usually wear only black attire which made him look sexy. He is from North India, Delhi.

PIYA DOBRIYAL:

She is a girl who is loved by everyone. She is dreaming to become business women. But the strange thing is that she is a typical South Indian woman. Her culture can be seen clearly through her acts. She is a topper in her class. She wanted to pursue her BBM so that she can know tactics of management. She is also 18 years old.

PANCHI DOBRIYAL:

She is the elder cousin sister of Piya. Panchi's lost her parents in an accident but no one knows the truth except Piya and Misha. They always adore her and love her. Panchi usually moves only along with Piya.

MISHA DOBRIYAL:

She is as tom boyish as ever. Everyone who comes to her are her friends. She goes outing with everyone whom she likes. But it suprises everyone as she is from a south Indian background as Piya was brought up. Even her parents were stunned by her acts. Piya and Misha are twins suprises many.

MADHU AND ARNAB DOBRIYAL:

They are the parents and business partners of Raichands and had a cordial relationship with each other. They wanted their daughters to be independent and won't ask them anything. They believe on self dependence.

HASEENA AND CHAND RAICHAND:

They love their sons to the core and took utmost care in fulfilling their desires. They looked after each and every minute thing as their life is going to end. They are the most loving parents that no one can get in their life. Many are jealous of Abhay to get parents like this.

SIDDHARTH RAICHAND:

The younger son of Raichands and he believes in fun is always the world. He always believes his bhai and thinks he is always MR. PERFECT. He follows and does whatever his brother does.

This story starts from here with these characters going around...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept.interesting.continue soon thanks 4 pm
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loveddd the conceptt its lovelly
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great
lovely cs
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awesome update dear...love it👏
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PART 1 / PG 1

PART 2 / PG 2
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After character sketch my part for you all hope you will support me for ever...



PART 2


The day of 12th standard results were alarming for those who were waiting for it. Today, the educational minister has announced that tomorrow morning the results are going to be out. This caught the attention of Piya and Misha who were busy in playing chess. Piya immediately got up and started noting down the details of all the website addresses and all other information which is being announced while Misha was still sitting casually as usual. Panchi has just returned home from her college with lots of books in her hand and asked Misha what is going on? Misha replied it in a cool tone that their results are going to be out tomorrow and Piya asked Misha why she is not showing any type of reaction. Suddenly, Misha started laughing and said I am going to be here in some college to pursue BA English literature. She added English literature is easy to get if I possess a good mark in my English and that's it. But our Piya wanted her BBM and she wanted to do it in a good commerce college. Nothing can be done there without marks.

Abhay the other guy who had seen the news was playing football to reduce his tension. He was kicking the football so madly that it actually fell on all the people who came in his way. Soon the football tore into two pieces unable to bear his kick pressure and he got tensed. He too noted the details from net and opened the websites and found nothing is shown. Immediately, Hassena entered and said Abhay it is only tomorrow you should increase your BP and not today. He wanted his visual communication in a college especially for viscom (sorry friends according to my knowledge there is no such college but I think Loyola in Chennai has good name and fame for viscom).

The day of results yes the most awaiting day. The day that decides whether our dreams come true or they are to be shattered like pieces of glass. It was like walking on the rope. In Piya's house, Arnab and Madhu Piya's parents and Panchi were around Piya and all the four put their heads into the laptop waiting for the results to be announced. Piya was shivering very badly and was holding her mom's hand so that she can feel comfortable. Panchi was also helping her in getting relaxed. But Misha the tom boy was eating some snacks and was seeing some music channel in television and was even dancing for it.

In Abhay's house, his brother Sid and Abhay was there before laptop waiting for the results to arrive. Sid asked brother what about your prayers to god he won't make you get your viscom admission if you don't praise him. Soon Sid took a hand full of kunkum and made a tilak in Abhay's face and said now he will surely help you. Suddenly he told bhaiya remove your shirt go to god and pray in front of him to get good marks. Abhay did all that because he just needs the marks to join his dream viscom. Sid laughed seeing how Abhay was praying to god.

Soon Sid shouted bhaiya your results are out. He made a sad face and said bhaiya and started crying. Abhay was damn upset suddenly Sid pounced on him and said love you bhaiya you have got 1156/1200. Piya had her head inside the laptop and even before the results came out she snatched the laptop and saw her marks and danced along with Misha and kissed everyone. She got 1149/1200. She was happy as she can go to Bangalore to pursue her BBM. Even her parents have to accept as she deserves it and decided to send her to hostel in Bangalore. After all this even Misha's result was checked out she got 80% which is far enough to get a BA English literature admission.

Both applied for their favourite colleges that they were in need of. Piya applied for her Sriram college of commerce (sorry to shift it to Bangalore) in Bagalore and in opposite we have Loyola college (sorry even to shift it) which excelled in viscom. An interview letter came to both of them from their respective colleges and both went in high hopes and aspirations. Finally the day of interview arrived and both attended and they got selected. Soon the college is going to start. They packed all the things to move towards their dreams. In Piya's home, Panchi was helping her while Misha was sitting on the bed giving instructions and in Abhay's case Sid was there to help him out. Misha even got her admission in BA English literature in Panchi's college.

Piya was having a train journey from Chennai to make her dream come true. Panchi and Misha accompanied her to settle her down in college hostel safely. They had nonstop talks till they reached Bangalore. Abhay was in flight there came a beautiful girl who started flirting with him. He glared at her and made her close her mouth. He hated her to the core. After reaching Bangalore, he didn't even turn once to see the girl and moved ahead for his dream.

Both reached their college hostel and entered the room allotted to them. Soon Piya kept her things which she had in cupboard and went out with her sisters to purchase dresses from the malls. Even Abhay came there to purchase but soon he heard a giggling sound from a nearby place and he thought what a lovely voice it is. He turned to see who it was. But he could only see a girl with two more girls who were wearing some decent dresses. One was wearing a jean and top while the other wore a salwar. But his attraction was on a girl who is in a beautiful shape structure revealing her bare back which was exposed by her tops.

Her voice was so haunting that he followed her literally just to see her. He started moving towards her. She moved into a dress shop known as House Wear a famous shop in Bangalore. He followed her and she suddenly disappeared but he saw a girl wearing jean standing in the far corner and went there and saw the girl Misha. By the time he reached there he could only see Piya moving into the trail room. Everyone looked at him in awe and the sales girl asked him what he wants. That's the time he got back to his senses and he looked everywhere but all he could she was girls dresses. Left with no option he selected a dress and paid money and left from there. He decided to wait for her in front of the mall.

PRECAP: WILL HE FIND HER OUT???????




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant update! Whatz ur name?
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awesome n superb update
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