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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Hey,

loved the OS like italian ice cream!!!

i really adore the way the os ended, you know why? Because you were very realistic about it. it wasn't like khushi getting seduced by him and giving in. No, she in fact rejected him! She stood up for herself and threw the harsh reality into his face with a full force. And i completely give her the right for that!

You did a wonderful job dear!

xxhaffie

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

That was beautiul Zee!😳

Loved it, You tell him Khushi!😃

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

loved it well said khushi that is the best dialogue ever wow now if only we can get this to the cv awesome os

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Divya

@hakunamatata

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

hey...this was sooo realistic...

i can so see something like this happening...its so possible...and in the near future...

cheers for such a great OS.. :D :D

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

WOWWW Zara nice OS like always... ' It was really nice and me like it ... Maybe there should be a part.2 cause i would love to read more of how Khushi is gonna stand up for herself and what Arnav is gonna do about it,... Thanks for the PM...

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Awesome os... I absolutely loved how she stood up strong at him

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ann123

@ann123

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

vry well written...loved it...it syncs with the current track...m really loving d nokjhonk goin on b/w them...

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

a nice OS !!! ...
loved Khushi's replies and Arnav's possessiveness 😊😊 ...

Hope a similar scene is shown in the show

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Nice OS... liked Khushi's response... well penned girl.

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Seriously great OS!!!! I hope this happens in the show! I think when Arnav realises that after 6 months, Khushi could become someone elses wife, the green eyed monster will return and he'll have to fight to make sure Khushi realises she loves him!! Beautifully written! 👏