Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

Loved the update! Its amazing, Awww Arshi are tooo cuute😳

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Awsome update so kushi is gonna model it i knew that was gonna happen the and aman pecked her cheeks poor arnav probaly got jealous. Thanks for the pm.

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Loved this update... I knew the red dress would be worn by Khushi only ... Lets see how ASR reacts now 😉

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

awesome part!!!!! fab job dear, loved it. continue soon. cant wait 4 d fashion show! thnks 4 d pm

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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

wow... amazing update...🤗 i m amazed 😆

damn dat aditya... 😡

is he following her and is he in new york already OMG...!!! 😡

loved it when aman gave her a peck and arnav fumed.. 😳

J for jealous.. 🤣 🤣

finally he sed it... she looks beautiful.. directly looking into her eyes... ☺️

and anna ka toh kya kehna.. she broke dat full length mirror seriously

🤪🤣

OMG cant w8 for the next update.. 😍

neway bout the basher... tell dat stupid anonymous dat its silly to write something like dat.. and who the hell is he/she to tell u how to proceed and in what pace in the story which you are writing... B*tch...!!!! 😡 😡😡😡😡

and you dont worry bout wht that random anonymous sed let it be...

we fans are thr nah... 😳😳🤗

i toh dont have a prob with how the story is gng on... 👍🏼

told u how i read it in one go .. m already addicted.. its not a slow paced its perffeeccttt...⭐️

simply best... and yes.. you are right

can't just have Arnav and Khushi jump each other after six chapters...

okay so...we all are very patient reading ur ff... and loving it to the core... 😎

dont get offended by some silly random basher...

chilll... 😳

okay update it soon... 😛

beccky 😳

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beccky

@beccky

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

just one question...😕

is aditya anjali's ex- husband or something...

u sed (kushi's POV)

the baby's eye... khushi's seen them somewhere..

is he the baby's dad..????🤢

dunno m i assuming a lott.. i guess...🤓

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

heya shreya...

awesome update dear...

atleast arnav knows about the messages...maybe he can protect her in future...

lol the dress dint fit anna...guess the pizza was a bit too much...

and it fit khushi well...lol
and sid said he woulve asked her out if she wasnt aman's gf...haha..

loved arnavs last dialogue..

beautifully written...

many thanks for the pm..:)

continue soon..

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700983

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Posted: 13 years ago

#778

wowww

loved trhe update jaan :)

anarkali LOL 😆 n OMG that was some sick kick ( ahhh that rymes )

oh yea im always patient n i lyk every single part even though some ppl dont n tke your time in writing as it wont mke me mad :)

thnks soo much sweety 4 the pm :)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#779

great update loved how he said she looked beautiful thought he was going to rude

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reveller

@reveller

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#780

Woohoo Khushi's wearing the dress! Anna's such a pig haha. Arnav's reaction to her wearing the dress was great! First trying to act indifferent but he couldn't control himself for long, loved that!

Aw I love Sid, he's too cute! Aman and the make-up artist haha! Yay he keeps bringing out the jealous side in Arnav and we all love a jealous Arnav!

Am glad Arnav knows that Aditya is still after Khushi, can sense some intensity coming up. Can't wait to see his protective side coming out.

It was a great update and you're doing a great job, I love the pace its going because I don't want it to end!