Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18} - Page 66

Ur story perfectly going with ur title FATAL ATTRACTION coz both arhi dont know what they feels bout each other aftr so many days.
R u planning 1st epi of ipk on ramp walk?

Oh i never bashed...lol... Anyways why arnav is not telling her abt aditya wat wrong if tells her...

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

Dear Miss Shreya

Thought I should write this to you. Fatal Attraction is an obsession for me, just like Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon is. It is a story that has me hooked, something that I crave to read updates of, and mind you, it doesn't happen with every story. This story is snail-paced, yes, I agree. But I like it that way. Know why? Because then this story will last for longer than I could ask for! *Jo dances a little* (Would have a done a big waala Happy Dance but my back hurts) Anyway, so I like the fact that at Chapter 18, the most that has happened between Arnav and Khushi is just some moments, and they haven't realised their feelings yet. Because in real life, love doesn't happen overnight (or so I believe). This story is realistic in it's very own ways. You make me fall in love with Arnav for being so Hot&Cold. You make me fall in love with Khushi for being so lively. You make me fall in love with Sid and Aman for being mysteriously nice and friendly to Khushi. You make me blush at the screen when Arnav says 'Closer'! You make my heart thud when Arnav completes that sentence for Khushi while they are in the car, stuck there all night. You make me sigh in extreme happiness when Arnav says 'She is looking beautiful.' You make me fall in love with mystery, with Arnav's reaction to Aditya's name, with the way Khushi is scared of all those messages. You make me fall in love with Arnav and Khushi; and most of all, Fatal Attraction. So keep this story snail-paced. Keep it the way it is. Keep it all Shreya-ish! Peel the layers of this story one at a time, so we can get to know it better. Build it up, so we can totally get the gist of it. Because that is what has me hooked! Because that is what Fatal Attraction is about. And yes, go on and feel mighty pissed at people who write that they are annoyed with the slow story. Well, suck it up people, because this is what Fatal Attraction is about.

I love you endless for sending this amazing Fan-Fiction our way! (And I love you otherwise as well :D)

Update soon

Jo

xox

🤗

You know, this comment put such a BIG smile on my face. Like HUGE! AND you made me tear up!
I never ever thought people would be obsessed with this FF, but you and along with so many others are, and that makes me feel so proud of myself. (in a non-conceited way! 😛)
But on a serious note, wow. wow. wow. All the things you just mentioned above, the scene in the car, the 'closer' scene, I had the same reactions! :P
But yes, I slept off my anger last night and then woke up this morning to this wonderful comment and I was like 'ahhh, to hell with the haters'
You know I'm bookmarking this page so I can come back and read this comment again, right? Because I am. This comment has got to be the sweetest one I've ever recieved, hands down.
I love you so much!!!!! 🤗

(Even though you don't laugh at my jokes, I still love you 🤣)

Originally posted by: aishi.muffin

Aw nice chapter <3 Lol at Anna not fitting in the dress. I can picture Khushi looking pretty in it though (: Loveeed the update! Don't pay attention to those bashers..if this story was fast paced it wouldn't even make sense. I love it the way it is 🤗

Thank you so much Aishi for the wonderful and supporting words! They mean so much 🤗

Thanks for the PM. Both updates were awesome. Sweet of Khushi to go and check on Arnav. So happy that Khushi gets to model the dress.

It is truly a beautiful story. Don't let anybody discourage you. You have a right to tell this story in your own way. I love this story and I will always love it.

yay! arnav found out about the phone and txts from adiya. whats he gonna do?!?!

You're the creator here and its your wish to which these characters dance to... You really shouldn't bother , Shre...

I know that its easier said than done. But if people can read the update and then have the patience to type out negative criticism, they can surely wait too...

If not... Well... They can go to hell, for all we care... :-)

You write on, sweetheart... :)

I love your story, shreya. Haters can get lost. You are the BEST story writer! LOVE YOU and YOUR STORY. ❤️

aww cuz it was a great update!!

Loved the update! Amazing as always! 😃