Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I'm so sorry I dint comment on the earlier update 🤔

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#Chapter 17

The fight was FABULOUS... And I love love the way Khushi hit too... not acting like a damsel in distress! 🤣

I love the way Sid came to help her... instead of Arnav first...

And the later part... ufff... too much hotness! 😍 Loved the way you pay attention to all the details... Great job!

#Chapter 18

Yayaaa... She's finally wearing the red dress! 😆

Arnav toh jal ke rakh hogaya hoga... when he saw Aman kiss Khushi... 🤣 i love it...

Aditya actually thinks he can harm Khushi with Arnav around? 🤣 Tch.. tch.. so naive... Arnav is gonna tear him limb by limb.. if he even comes a mile close to Khushi.. I know you haven't stated that Arnav loves Khushi or anything but, the underlying sense of protection he has for her is very much evident.. and he actually admitted he finds her beautiful! <33

P.S About the anonymous person... Ask the person to go to hell, you have too many fans to even take these kinda madcaps into account!

We all LOVE YOU and all your works! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: PurpleRain
P.S About the anonymous person... Ask the person to go to hell, you have too many fans to even take these kinda madcaps into account!

We all LOVE YOU and all your works! 🤗

Amen to this! :D

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Sharmi di - Thank you SO SO much! I hate when the woman comes off as a damsel in distress so I made her fight back, mwahahah. :P
And that's what I meant by cliche, it would have been cliche if Arnav came first, so I chose Sid instead teehee :P
Chap. 18- Okay this is where cliche comes in again. 😆
What with the whole red dress thing I mean, but sometimes I can't help it :P
And thank you so so much for the kind words and support! It was disheartening at first but I'm not going to let one person get me down when I have hundreds of others that support me and my works. 😳
Love you!! 🤗

Jo- You just wait. I will come up with an epic joke that will make you laugh! Even if it takes me years!
But, I love you. Nuff said. 🤗

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Tejal Felicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

The story is going at a level speed. Don't be stressed just 'cos some people think they wish it was a fast pace act. This story needs to go slow and is developing just so well that I can't help but simply 👏.

Hope you will update soon. I wonder if you're going to tell us how Arnav actually felt when he looked at Khushi in that show stopper gown. 😉

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Richa :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Dude! Dude! Dudette! :D

Get a new thread no!
Its 121 already! :P
Where will the people comment after the 29 pages are filled? :P :D

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Gahhh I'm so confuuuseddd!!! :(

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Shrey! No No!! Dont be confused.. When I'm here, why fear?? 😆

RIchie-Rich.. If you need support for spamming! Let me know.. I'm in for it😉

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Richa :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Tsk. Tsk.
What confused and all, woman?
You finish writing the next part!
And this will be taken care of! :D
You got some real awesome friends you know? 😎

Hahaha! Siva - Bring it on! :D

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Richa :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Oh and your sig, woman! :D
AWESOME AWESOME! 🤣

I love that guy! All koochi kooo, isn't he? 😳
But that avi did crack me up! 🤣

Gosh! I feel so insensitive! :O
Hahaha! What the hell? 😈