Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Yay an update on my birthday!!!

Oooh Sid! I knew you had hidden depths! Now Khushi, that was a surprise! A good one though!!

Aur paas, aur paas? I love it! :DDD

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Ohkay...Anarkali!!!!!!!!...seriously?...WOW!!!!!!!!!🤣

oh!!! an action sequence...perfect masala movie happeninng.
Sid has some serious packs under his smirks...n he's yours so he has to a mystery.

Arnav had me slipping off the stool you knw ...Aur kitne paas!!!!!!!!!1

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sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

I HATE YOU.

I HATE YOU.

I HATE YOU.

BLOODY HELL, I HATE YOU WOMAN!

Why?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO US?! AFTER 7 PAGES OF SPAMMING, YOU GAVE US THAT?!

BLOODY HELL WOMAN!

THIS IS LIMITS!

I'M OFFICIALLY GOING TO THUNDER AND BLAST YOUR THREAD INTO SMITHEREENS!

I'M, ALSO, OFFICIALLY GOING TO DO BHANGRA ON YOUR LAPTOP UNTIL YOU SCREAM LIKE BABY!

I'M, ALSO, OFFICIALLY GOING TO BLOODY HELL THE FISH OUT OF YOU!

I'M, ALSO, OFFICIALLY GOING TO TURN YOU INTO A TEDDY BEAR UNTIL YOU START PICNICKING LIKE YOGI BEAR! (Thx for the suggestion Munchy! I appreciate it! 😳)

I'M, ALSO, OFFICIALLY GOING TO MAKE SANCHO DO GARBA WITH ME ON YOUR THREAD!

Bloody hell woman. Love hurts. 😭 I love you so much, and you hurt me! 😭 I'm sad.

EDIT -

Okay, so now to review part.

Ahem.

Sorry. I kinda... lost it.. there. Somehow. Hmm.

Ahem.

Anyways, on with it.

Well. Ahem. I liked it. Nope. I'm not talking about the last part, NOPE. I'm talking about the part before that.

Well, Anna does disgust me. Chocolate milk and pizza, is a big wala NO. NO. (Like how Cogsworth, from Beauty and the Beast says it! 😆 He's a cutie pie!)

But Khushi. Nice one. Feisty. 😃 Just like us REYA! 😆 I would punch and beat the crap out of the guy. One kick in the gut, wouldn't be enough for this angry young lady! 😆

Anyways,

"Aur paas. Aur paas. Aur paas." ~ SRK, Dil toh pagal hai.

Hmm, that one was for Shu eh? I KNEW IT! 😳

WELL. ALL IN ALL. IT WAS... Ahem. Nice.

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

How many spots did I actually reserve? 😳

I HATE YOU🤬

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suadvani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Loving this .. U are sooo talented.. Cannot wait to read the next part!!!

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321abc

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Hey!

Awesome update, I loved it! Anna stuffing herself was just hilarious😆 but hopefully khushi is the show stopper at any cost. That was so nice of Sid to help her out while that other guy was misbehaving with khushi, aww aman and arnav join to fight, Bravo for khushi for kicking the stranger, aww it was so cute when arnav looked at khushi with admiration, cute scene with khushi trying to get her phone back from arnav as well...esp that dil to pagal hai dialogue. I cant wait to read more, please update soon.

Thanks for the pm

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Dee (Daisy)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Congrats on the new thread and that was a wonderful update.

Looks like Khushi & Arnav took a tiny step forward. With Lavanya not there, the outfit not fitting Anna guess that only solution will be that Khushi wears the Showstopper. That would be great, looks like Sid already has got the notion in his mind.

Dee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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When are you updating?? :P

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: PurpleRain
When are you updating?? :P

Hopefully tonight :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: drdee142
Congrats on the new thread and that was a wonderful update.

Looks like Khushi & Arnav took a tiny step forward. With Lavanya not there, the outfit not fitting Anna guess that only solution will be that Khushi wears the Showstopper. That would be great, looks like Sid already has got the notion in his mind.

Dee

Awww thank you so much! Yeah, I'm trying to make it slow paced and stuff so it seems realistic 😆
Hahah yep, Khushi will definitely be the one wearing that dress. :)
Thanks for the comment :D