A dream to cum true:kriyannsh FF chappy 4 part 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
please continue
we will love to read it
and please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Awesome cncept...wud luv 2 read it...plz pm me wenevr u update...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept 😊
do pm me whenever u update it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1

Here i go...
As soon as swayam finds a number written at the back of the letter,he tries to call tat number.Sumeone actually a girl picks up the phone and asks him his name.
Girl:Can i get to noe who is this??
Swayam:i am swayam shekhawat and plzz may i get to noe your name!!
G(shocked but happy after hearing his best friends voice again):Hey i m Kria but how did u get my number??
S:there was a number written on the back of the letter and i just dialed it but didn't noe tat it was yours
K:oh actually this number was a new one and actually could not remember it so wrote it on a piece of paper and i didn't noe tat i was writting a letter on tat paper only
S:gud na..yor mistake was a benifit to all of us
K:us??
S:ya all louians especially rey!!!!
K(started crying on phone):plzz swayam do not give this number to anybody and ya plzz promise me cause if u give this number to anybody i would be in big trouble..
S:wat trouble??
suddenly kria's mom enters her room
K:oh freak!!!will tell u later till then bye and hav a gud day!!!
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IN KRIA'S ROOM

K's mom:kiske saath baat kar rahi thi?
K:m..mein mere dost ke saath baat kar rahi thi!!
K's mom:Kaun dost??nam kya hai uska???
(in this FF Kria's mom<K's mom>is a little bit mild and caring cause she had seen her daughter crying all day long and thus could not bare it!!!)
K:s..s..
K's mom:yeh s..s... kya keh rahi ho!!!! naam batao!!!!!!
K:ma mein s..swayam se baat kar rahi thi!!!!!!!
K's mom:SWAYAM!!!!!!yoh mumbai wala...kria tumne mujhe promise kia tha yaad hai na!!!!
K:ha mom but yoh swayam hai mera best friend of st.loius and u noe mom the best thing is tat ki usne mujse promise kiya hai ki yoh mera no. kisi ko bhi nahi dega!!!
K's mom:toh kya yeh mumbai ke log toh
K:mom swayam aisa nahi hai..he is my best friend..plzz sirf usse toh mujhe baat karne do...plzzz(making a puppy face)
K's mom:theek hai par sirf swayam se!!!!!

<k's moom leaves and kria calls swayam...they talk a lot atleast for 1 hour and meanwhile he also tells rey's condition after she left reyand kriya tells swayam the actual reason for the breakup and the reason y she left the coolege...they now become best friends as they were before...>

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THE NEXT DAY

it was a sunday afternoon and both swayam and kria were getting bored so they decided to do a video chat

swayam called kria and asks her to on her video and he also ons his

<they were talking heartily with each other but suddenly sharon enters>
(note swayam and sharon love each other like hell and actually at a verge of being a couple..you would see sum swaron moments too)

Sharon is just shocked on seeing Kria and she screams out...
oh hearing her scream,Sharon's dad who was outside came running to help her whereas K's mom(smriti) also got scared and came running near kria

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K's mom and S's dad together ask:wat happened and see each other and get lost in each other..
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA

(note:now kria and sharon cum to noe tat they are sisters)

S's dad:tum!!mujse laga ki...

K's mom:ki...

S's dad:chal chodo kuch nai.. i m soo soo glad to see u again..

K's mom:me tooo

K & S:aap ek dusre ko kaise jante ho????????

S's dad:Sharon beta meet our mom smriti

K's mom:Beta meet yur dad

Both kria and sharon were shocked,exited,happy and full of mixed feeling

so here is the end of chapter 1.
Hope u like it guys...Do comment!!!

precap:
Kria comes back to mumbai
Kria and sharon are now sisters
rey and kria finally patch up due to Swaron's effort!!!!!!!😊(sorry about the spelling mistakes!!)





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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Awesome loved the first chapter do update the nxt chapter 2morrow!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
awesome n wow sharon n kriya sisters...eagerly waiting for the next chapter...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Speechless..I never even thought smriti n goutham raiprakash cud meet like dis n hell I didn't get d idea too while I was writing my FF...😆...You're really a good creative writer so my 👏's for u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
aweee...the bestest chap 1 of any FF dear!!!!👏
justtt luveeddd it to the extremest core...😳
i mean pehle update mein hi twist!!!!👍🏼
i reaallyy cannot express my feeling right now...😛
i am sooo damn happy nd excited to read ur nxt update...
waitin fr it eagerly...😍
hats off to u yaaar !!!!⭐️
mwaaahhh !!!!!🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsummm..finally kriya n sharon come to knw dat dey are sisters...thnx 4 pm n update nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

aweee...the bestest chap 1 of any FF dear!!!!👏

justtt luveeddd it to the extremest core...😳
i mean pehle update mein hi twist!!!!👍🏼
i reaallyy cannot express my feeling right now...😛
i am sooo damn happy nd excited to read ur nxt update...
waitin fr it eagerly...😍
hats off to u yaaar !!!!⭐️
mwaaahhh !!!!!🤗🤗


After reading d twist in d first chapter itself..
I got a doubt whether u r an experienced FF writer..
How cud u imagine a twist as such for d very first update..
Enough of blah-blah coming to d point..
U r really an awesome writer..
Waiting for kriyaansh scenes from ur work..

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