ArSha FF~Start Of Something Beautiful~Thread2~5/30 - Page 32

Pria it was amazingly beautiful. The anguish, pain, sorrow, betrayal all so perfectly described! I guess love makes us feel emotions we've never felt before? I'm honestly not a huge fan of sad updates but there is just something about the way you write that makes everything feel so real. Its like every emotion described is so apt and natural. But the end was the best! So amar is finally ready to fight for her with everything he's got! Eeep!
Loved it pria! Kudos!

Originally posted by: aria009hera

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first to comment!! first to comment!! *dances around like a crazy person*

Priaaa!!!! I loved dis one!!! I loved all d angst.. the sadness... everything!! U are the most awesomest writer everrr!!!!!!⭐️

Me sooo loves d fact dat u wrote one more sad update!!! eeepppsss... *HUGS U SO TIGHT THAT YOU CANT BREATH*

m ready to take all d jootas.. i dont care!!

m just super happy u updated!!!

And lastly, I LOVE YOU!!! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

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Pria... love u so much for this update... this is my 2nd fav part in the whole update... finally the misunderstanding's over... i was just thinking about this FF n after 5 mins, i got ur pm😊

loved it to the core... specially the last part...

Originally posted by: PD_puja

Superb!!! Finally u told d reason f der breakup...it ws rilly needed...nai to stry aage kaise bdhti...n i also luv ur rona dhona type updates coz luv stries do hav dat in real...
Waitng fr nxt update...wich i guess is gonna b a hppy one...m so freakin excitd n curious 2 knw ki wat will amar do 2 gt bak his shakti...:D
Plz dnt b late dis tym...:)

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

pria we can never hate you...i loved this part

specially the ending where amar decided to get his shakti back

and that dreadful night that was really very scary two lovers getting separated😭 but really happy all this is over

continue soon waiting eagerly for happy parts

Originally posted by: Love_Kunwar

m really happy wid dis update...i wanted to know the reason... and u did it!

thank you!

lovely update..sad but so good! 😊

Originally posted by: aishasully

awsoomme mann wen next updatee

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

Sincerely loved it..

i had thot that the breakup would be like heart-wrenching bahut dukh bhara but it was so nicely displayed and the fight it was mindblowing.

both wrong but also at the same time right...

i wonder if she had accepted it amar wud have let her go haina????

the desire to go near but anger taking control... anger deestroys evrything

but the anguish, pain sorrow loved it...

and the last parting line totally flat over it. kudos to u for that...


chalo do one thing acchi-2 cheezein socho and then mind khush karo
and jaldi se ek sweet update dedo

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

loved it tons it was amazing and i also like the sad updates not just anki here

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awww priya we can never hate u...u r such a sweetheart n truly speaking i want dis update or i wuld say i egarly waiting 4 dis update coz i want to knw da reason da MAIN REASON of dere breakup...n kunwar's reaction...n i jst luv it...coz i knw after dis sady sady updates are gng to b over 😃...n dat last para is da proof of dat...hehe i jst loved dat "watch out baby ur prince charming is coming"...luv uu priya 4 giving me what i want 😊