ARHI SS: Perfect Honeymoon (chap5 updt on pg: 44)

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hari93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

WoW...!!! Wonderful ending...

it was really very cute...

Thanks a lot for the PM...

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priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Aww the happy ending :) Brilliant as always ...

This chapter was very cute and romantic ...

Have been following this FF right from the start and it has been an
Amazing progress :)

Loved it to bits :)

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ilive2laugh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

aw what a nice end to the story

loved it

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

awesome ending loved it that was so cute he really will need a degree for dealing with her loved it and the really honeymoon begins thanks for the pm

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hina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

VERY CUTE. LOVED IT

Edited by mid-night-sun - 13 years ago

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Krupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Really Really nice and catchy. Thank You for the pm.

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Sana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Let me start from chapter 4,

Let me say T-H-A-T is a big W-O-W, Like literally W-O-W... Shame on me that i read it so late and commenting now.. well i was busy.. Well coming back to the chapter... I mean wow.. I am just repeating wow again and again ha ha... I am just stumped reading it.. So aptly you described both their emotions yaar.. too good and the part where khushi tells him.. dont tell me... just stupendous!!! And his monologue when he thinks of telling her... when he confessed that he is not sure of anything... just fantastic.. Also another part I loved was when he starts crying and he blames himself for all her tears.. amazing.. hell I liked the whole chapter :D You write really well.. like awesome!! What a cliffhanger but ya happy ending.. so I am happy... :)

I have go to go..

I am reserving this.. will update after reading chap 5

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Just read it right now.. Hats off.. Literally.. What a cute ending to an SS.. I loved it.. And the best part that I loved was the way she kisses him.. that was fantastic.. and Arnav's telling her that he would have died if she had left.. that was just splendid.. And the end.. out of the world... Each to their own imagination :D ha ha... Loved it.. Looking forward to read your other works :)

And thanks for the pm :)

Edited by -s.a.n.a- - 13 years ago

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dhahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Its spectacular...

Tis s one of t best stories i've gone thru in IF...

U r gr8... Wat an endin... I was speechless cin Arnav's turmoil...

Feelin happy n sad at t same time... happy for whole SS n sad as it ended...

Do start a FF.. i m very eagerly waitin...

Fantabulous wrk... 👏

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Alice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Awesome ending!!!!!!!

I love this Kushi...and both of their's unconditinal love for each other was beautiful...

I thought Kushi had suddenly grown up but she did prove at the end that she was still an innocent beautiful girl...

loved it!!!!!!!

And thanks for the PM😊

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Shivana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

I liked da way Khushi reacted 😊- emotional but rational. It shows that she truly does understand the man she loves and realizes his imperfections and loves him still. Arnav being forever cautious of love, having allowed only his Di this privilege is hesitant to give Khushi his complete trust because like all normal human beings he does not wish to get burned but unlike all normal human beings when Arnie loves that person would bask in it 😉! Part of the reason he hesitates becoz if it's not returned it will break him...U were brilliant!

Just read last part - brilliant the way you finished it 😃! I hope this is how they resolve their differences on the show itself & tackle Shayam together!

Edited by SNR7 - 13 years ago