ArSha FF(new)-Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas#2 - Page 85

it was dam hot the way he say truck drive to live him near petrol pump and no hurry aram say it was awesome and then they both wgeather i am still speechless thankx for pm

Wat a fabulous update!!

Loved d update esp. d way u showed at d ending..

So I'm sorry but I'm not being able to "like" your post for some stupid reason. Everytime I hut the button it sends me to the top of thhe page! Ughh!! They should have a love button instead of a like cos like is totallt an understatement for your work!
Okk so the bit on the zulu dance and ur comment on the rain coz its an indian FF - bahahahahhahaha...too hilarious!
And then what amar did to get rid of yash was so funny! LOL
So you are one of the very few writers who iv seen who can write a such hot, sensous and passionate scene so beautifully. So its obvious that we would have all loved it had it gone head but the way it ended made it better...coz now we know how awesome ur gonna be when u eventually write a scene like this :P ..no but sers great work tish!
P.S : I got up at 6 to study..was so so tempted to go back to bed...but I somehow got up and with half closed eyes, started reading ur update while having breakfast...and well now I'm wide awake like an owl :P ..and I can guarantee it defn wasn't the breakfast :P
Kudos as usual!!

Res

OMG U KILLED ME!!!!!🤢🤢

GOSH!!!! YAAR TEMME WATS UR SECRET ??? 😳u ryt sooo well!!!😉😛

from d begining wen shakti was in NY.. their fone convo.. that brad wala incident.. amar caring for her safety.. she blasting at him.. he meeting wid an accident.. their video chat.. nd tat anjali ki chipko nature.. and shakti getting jealous..😳 I M JUS SOOO IMPRESSED😳 WID UR CREATIVITY AND WRITTING SKILLS⭐️..👏

thn cums her perfrmnce.. and thn she landing back in mumbai.. tat movie.. and shirtless wonder ki megic on her..😍☺️

hayeee hayeee ☺️☺️mar jawan!!!!☺️☺️😍

its simply beautifully written!!❤️

i jus love d way u bring humour in serious lines!!!!🤣

its sooo amazing to have a dose of ur updt ! 😳esply mrng :P :P😉

cz i usually get up in d mrng nd pray tat u may hav updtd..😛


*bingo* 😲u do it most of the times..

and dey i jus go in my dreamworld of ARSHA...😍

I SIMPLY LOVED DIS UPDT!!!😳❤️

hahahahahhaha 🤣🤣POOR YASH :P :P😆

ARSHA ki romance was super HOT!!!☺️☺️☺️

and dont worry im 18😉

and yes the deep pure love and making other feel special is sooo beautifully written!!👏

pls updt tat 'special' making of luv part also pleaseee..☺️😍

and eagerly waiting for ur next updt😃

i am 16 🤣 hhahahh but noway to miss dis awesum update a hell no

cmg to update shit man it was hawt passionate yet romatic i am still stuck der yaar 😳

gosh shakti is super wild in ur ff nd i love it to d core nd amar is really to sweet nd cool shit update was out of d world frist one in in car na dat shuld be super spl 😉

nd yash dat idoit 😡 bring him back so dat arsha can leave to mumbai safely !!!!!

love u tish u r an fab writer lots of love ❤️

thnx for d pm dear 😊

update soon

wow!!
brilliantly written!
the part where amar got rid of yash was hilarious..🤣
the whole love-making part was quite hot...🤢
also.. love it wen amar said that he wanted der 1st tym 2 b special one...
*sad ke jaawa for amar*

omg this was such a hot part loved it 2 d extreme...

i am not 18 but phir bee i read and it was so hawttt really tish and u r such a wonderful writer tish amazing and jab agla update karo toh plzzz pm me