ArSha FF(new)-Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas#2

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

tish i luv u...though it is a short update its awesome!!!!!
i just luved it...arsha together in a room all thankss to vivek...
hayyeee amar shirtless...update the next part soon...

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Tanushree Dutta

@kriyanshlove

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Tish!Tish!You are immensely gifted!

I'd like to suggest you to think about a career in screenplay or/and scriptwiting...You'll rule the roost!

Um...BTW...Please kinda change the characters and twist the plot a bit and convert this FF into a book...NO publisher will ever dream of saying no to a gift like yours!

The beautiful and sincerely touching and endearing way in which you describe each and every emotion of theirs is so true to life,down to earth and yet SO TOTALLY mesmering...

And can't wait for the next update!Please update soon!

AND DO TAKE MY COMMENT SERIOUSLY COZ I MEAN EVERY SINGLE WORD OF IT !!!

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Kritika Julka

@kritzzz_ArSha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Update the nxt part soon!!

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

oh GOD!!! dis shirtless wonderr...will make me crazy☺️

nd tish ur awesumm

updt soon...

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

😭

kya itni jaldi khatm kra esse
nt fair

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kritikakapoor

@kritikakapoor

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

It was really an awesum update...

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

aweee tish it was awesome part...😛

reallly i just luveed it to the core !!!!❤️

Sort yet Amazinnn update...😊

it ws dammmn hot...i mean Amar widhut his shirt ☺️!!! hayyye...!!!😍

On the cloud 9 aftr reading ur update...😳

shakti becoming weak on her knees...hehhehe !!!😆

nd Amar...uff...taking fully advantage of her situation...nd she's jus enjoyin...😆

great goin yaar !!!!

really excited to noe...wat happens next on the terrace!!!!😈

waitin fr ur lonnng update dear!!!!😉

so post sooon nd do PM me !!!😳

🤗

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Saurav

@Tyler_Durden

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

👏👏👏it was ausum as usual loved evry moment of it👏

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Coming to the update that was good n should i say romantic.😍
I knew sumthing of this sort is must gonna b happen when i read that she went to meet him n he was alone there.😉
How can sum1 stop drooling seeing him shirtless n yahan to she was Shakti.😳
Amar knew his effect on her very well that's y both the times he used his charm n magic brilliantly to make her loose all her sense.😍
Shaks wanted to talk something important but alone with Kunwar can she ever able to concentrate talking to him seriously.😆
But wat's Pankit's plan i am confused.😕
Yaar pls try to update asap with longer part.