'I am waiting' ArHi OS (Eng Translation - Pg 16)

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flutterby

@flutterby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

it was so funny.. more than blush... it made me laugh.. 🤣... especially the reasons khushi cudnt touch laxmi... and go to the mandir...😆 and when she so innocently asked the doctor... 🤣... i fell down from my chair...i am quite happy with this os... coz there r a lot of * ahem* moments.. ☺️
i too am waiting... for ur next os.. 😆

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Sidra

@siddy9171

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Loved it! So funny and adorable! Thanks for them pm 😊

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Omg! So sweet! Even I was going beet red while reading this! 😆 you are an amazing writer!

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Wow wat a cute update...i loved it...plzz pm me whenever u update any ss,os or ff.

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Stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awww!!! such a cute OS.. loved it !

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Nameera

@Nmyra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Aww this was just adorable!! I love the slight hesitation the concern all of it and weaved together so perfectly!! <3

Much love,

Nmyra

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Shobhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Im waiting...Hayyeee..I thought I was the only one fida over the way it was said...
Seems otherwise...And you got so inspired ki ek pura OS likh dala...waah bhai waah...Kya baat ho...Tussi naa ekdum great ho...So coming back to the OS
Hayeee...Khushi srlsy asks te doc ???Hey bhagwaan...Bichari she was so desporately in need.And so was Arnav just because he hides it better doesnt mean he's a great controller tooo...
This was such a mushy and cute one Rae...Muahh for this loved it