SS: Khuda Ke Liye (ArHi) Part 2 Updated!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone! So this is my first attempt at an IPKKND SS so I need y'alls honest opinion. Is this any good? Should I continue or forget about it? Lol. Please let me know! If you want PM's just add me as a buddy. I would really appreciate honest opinions Thanks! 😊😊 And one more thing! I wasn't too sure about the title so if it's already in use let me know but some suggestions would be really helpful 😉😉

Khuda Ke Liye

Part 1

She was waiting, waiting for him to come to her. He was riding towards her on a white horse but the sun was blocking his face. She tried desperately to see who it was. As he came closer she noticed he was holding something in his hand. It was a plate with a big tower of something bright orange. As he got closer she realized what was in his hands. It was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. She started running towards the horse and the man on it. Suddenly, the horse stopped a few feet from her. The man climbed off his horse and strode towards her. But now she didn't care who he was or what he wanted all she saw was the beautiful things in his hands. He came closer and stopped right in front of her and offering the plate of bright orange freshly made jalebis. She started to reach for one and just as her fingertip touched a jalebi she heard a loud noise. Her eyes flew open instantly to shut off the buzzing of that alarm.

"Oh shut up! Five more minutes. Oh no its already 7 I have to be there at 8! Crap I can't be late today, not today!" She ran out of bed and got ready as quick as she could.

"Khushi bitiya 7:15 don't you have to go?" asked her Amma with a tray of some bread and butter and a cup of chai ready for her.

"Yes Ma I gotta go no time to eat. Bye!" she gave her mom a peck on her cheek and ran out of the house to catch a rick.

"If I'm late today he'll definitely kill me. Hey dm please let me reach to work on time. He'll be in his office right on the dot at 8 o'clock. Today is the big day. It's the launch of the new line, why am I so stupid I should have already been at the office ready with today's schedule and events" she was ranting away in her mind. Khushi had been working at AR group for more than a year and had applied for assistant designer but Arnav Singh Raizada believed she would be better off as her assistant's assistant. ASR's assistant quit one month after Khushi started because she couldn't take his tantrums anymore. Khushi was "promoted" to ASR's assistant but doesn't have her own assistant. She never wanted this stupid job but she had no other choice, her family needs her. But Khushi has never given up on her dreams of becoming a fashion designer. She sketches and gets new ideas everyday hoping one day someone will notice her designs. After everyone has left work she sits in the design studio and sketches her designs.

7:45 she ran into the office and to her desk and started gathering everything she will need when he arrives. "hey dm please let his mood be ok today please" she prayed while organizing the files.

He was worried about today. Today was the launch of the new bridal line and clients were coming from across the world. "She better be at the office on time today ready with the paperwork otherwise she's gonna see hell. Why am I thinking about her? I should be worried about the launch and not about whether or not she has reached the office." Arnav had been thinking about Khushi a lot lately. He couldn't understand why she had such an effect on him. Maybe because she was the only one brave enough to stand up to him. He had never come across someone who has the nerve to speak to him the way she does. He wonders why he keeps still keeps her around maybe because he likes it? He knows he has a soft spot for her, there's a part of him that always wants to keep her protected but he just doesn't understand why.

It was 8am and she was ready with the files and his coffee waiting for him to enter the office. "5, 4, 3, 2, 1." The door swung open and walked in the most handsome man Khushi had ever seen. A man who's every part was perfect. He had the type of body that made every girl drool and eyes that would make you melt. He wore a black suit with a white shirt and black skinny tie. Khushi was used to this sight but everyday she felt her heart flutter when he came into the office with determination and ambition clearly in his eyes. "Snap out of it Khushi!" she thought to herself.

"Good morning sir. Here is your coffee no cream, no sugar." "Phikki phikki just like you" she thought. "And here is the schedule for today's events. The clients from London will be arriving at 3pm and the clients from Tokyo are scheduled to arrive at 5" she continued on with a list of happenings for the day.

He listened to her patiently and taking in the sight in front of him. She probably wasn't the most beautiful girl he had ever seen but she was gorgeous nonetheless. Arnav noticed she was wearing a navy blue dress that came right up to her knees with a black blazer, "this must be one of her designs" he pondered. Her hair was pulled up into a messy bun but it suited her. But there was a part of her he was having a hard time looking away from, her lips. They looked soft and pink and they mesmerized him. "Snap out if it Arnav!" he thought just as she finished talking.

"Nooo it's ruined!!" came a loud screech from somewhere.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like it. It's different, I think u should continue and pm me when I do.
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Ur ss is great :) plz do continue cant wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Hello!! Here is part 2! Please like and leave a comment! 😊And I would love some suggestions as well 😉 Happy Reading! 😃


Part 2

"Nooo it's ruined!!" came a loud screech from somewhere. Arnav ran out of his office followed by Khushi to see what the ruckus was about. When they arrived there were a group of people surrounding a crying person with clothes in his hand.

"What's the problem?" asked Arnav.

"Sir! Sir! It's runined! My design it's ruined. I don't know how this happened" said the sobbing designer showing Arnav the torn skirt of the bridal gown.

"Well stop crying and do something damnit!" shouted Arnav.

"Nanav there's no way to salvage this it's completely ruined" said NK. NK works in the design studio as the head of operations for AR group.

"Well there has to be something we can do Nanheji this piece is the showstopper" said Khushi.

"There is only one thing we can do" said NK.

"What?" asked Arnav and Khushi in unison.

"Remake the piece."

"No that's impossible, this piece took me two weeks to create. With its intricate designs it's impossible." Said the designer still sobbing into the skirt.

"Well we have to do something" Arnav said curtly.

Khushi walked over to the designer and took the skirt from him to take a look at the damage. There was a large hole at the bottom of the skirt. "There has to be a way to fix this" she contemplated on the ways to fix this mess. Then she thought of something.

"Lavanya please go put this on" said Khushi.

"What the! Khushi! Are you mad? Can't you see this skirt is ruined?" said Arnav tight lipped.

"Yes I can see that but there has to be a way to fix it before the clients start to arrive." Lavanya came back with the skirt on and Khushi started to work her magic as Arnav and everyone watched her.

"Don't you all have work to do? Get to it!" he yelled at the rest of the employees that were watching Khushi. He didn't like the idea of so many eyes on her.

"Done!" Khushi rejoiced looking at her handiwork. She had completely fixed the skirt. Nowhere on there could you see that it was once ruined.

"Oh my God Khushi!! You fixed it!" cried the designer "thank you so much! You are a lifesaver"

"Arrey no problem yehi toh mera kaam hai" said Khushi smiling at the designer.

Arnav looked at Khushi in disbelief. "Had she actually fixed it?" he thought. He looked at her and then walked towards Lavanya to see what she had done. He was right, the skirt was completely fixed there was no evidence of a hole anywhere. The designer led Lavanya away after Arnav finished his inspection. He looked at Khushi surprised with some disbelief and gratefulness. "Khushi I just…"Arnav started to say.

"It's ok sir you don't have to say thank you. Aapke poore chere par sirf 'thank you' likha hua hai" smiled Khushi and pulled her blazer down to make it straight and walked away with lots of dignity and attitude.

"Ugh yeh larki she's crazy and she's gonna make me crazy." He thought as he watched her walk away with a stride of confidence with a small smile forming on his lips.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great beginning. Different but it stays true to the characters. Do continue.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, please continue soon.

P.S. I think if u post this on IPKKND forum, u will get more readers.

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