SS; Heartbreak Warfare {Chap. 2 - Page 25 **NEW} - Page 5

Luvd it it was brilliant.. and there best be another part, make it in2 an SS i fink i can see wher dis is goin if u do nd if not then i will jus imagin it myself!

read this wice, waaa. poor khushi. bad joojoo arnav.

u better continue this..😳

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Hey!

I love the OS! Heartbreakingly beautiful...

I must agree with nayika, how can you be in love with someone you don't know? Khushi is a young girl, who is very naive and innocent. She doesn't thinks about stuff like, having affairs and being a home wrecker. She in fact is always happy and bubbly.

Arnav had to think with a cool mind after his discovery, which he totally misunderstood for something wrong. He accused her for such a low thing!

If he really wanted to express his feelings to her to this extent that he cares soo much for her and loves her, he should have at least asked her whats going on!

I mean, on the other side, I can understand arnav's feelings and emotions too. Because he went through a lot in his life and he started changing. His tough exterior was breaking down, but after seeing shyam and khushi in a hug, he immediately thought of the wrong thing!

Sorry for the long comment, but I had to express my thoughts!

Again, love the os and you have a gorgeous writing style!

Do continue!

Thank you! Yes, I do agree that Arnav has been through a lot in the past and all but he could have at least tried to ask for her side of the story. The situation they were in was so complicated and the fact that he just up and blackmailed her into a marriage without so much as looking into the matter more just seems completely unrealistic and frustrates me.
Anywho, sorry for that rant. 😆
Thank you so much for the compliment! :D

Oh this is so amazing ...love the song...heartbreak warfare suited the fic beautifully i am SO looking forward to an update...not a question at all!!

What was his answer? This guys too unpredictable for me to even try and guess

Originally posted by: reyabear

Thank you! Yes, I do agree that Arnav has been through a lot in the past and all but he could have at least tried to ask for her side of the story. The situation they were in was so complicated and the fact that he just up and blackmailed her into a marriage without so much as looking into the matter more just seems completely unrealistic and frustrates me.
Anywho, sorry for that rant. 😆
Thank you so much for the compliment! :D

Omg that was so good plss continue.

Fantastic OS shreya..
Poor khushi😔
Plzz continue,luvvddd itt..