Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar THREAD10 link #11 pg 145 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update👏
Loved the way maan manaofied geet.⭐️
Precap sound interesting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
love his manofying technique...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved maans ways of mano geet
loed the update
thanks for pm
cont, soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply awsum update
luvd it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
such a sweetie update
cont soon
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update
luved shrniji ka gussa
it was so cute
the last gift was toh seriously CUTE n the note was so sweet n naughty
precap sounds fab
waiting for the next part eagerly
update soon k
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah re romantic queen sachi ke hit ideas hai sab ke sab
maan gaye maan ke ideas geet ko manane ke liye
loved it to the core
waiitng for Maaneet's holi now
continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm


last gift melted geet

maaneet holi-exciting


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m loving their love...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.
I have tried something different in this special Holi update do tell me your views regarding the update
love-Piya
PART 91
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Everyone was busy with the Holi preparations

Geet had decided to lock herself in the room as she was allergic to the colors of Holi but Maan had some other plans

He took permission from Dadima to take Geet to their ancestral house on the occasion of Holi

Dadima agreed happily as she herself wanted to give some privacy to the couple

Geet was totally unaware about Maan's mischievous plan and she left with Maan to their ancestral house

Meanwhile,

The Holi celebrations were on full swing in Khurana Mansion

The entire staff of KC was invited for the function. Annie and Meera were totally in a playful mood as they continued to splash colors on every member of the family that they came across

Everyone was busy playing Holi when Meera realized that Dev is still in his room

Meera: (thinking) Dev ab tak bahar nahi aaye kahi wo mujhse abhi bhi naraz toh nahi hai? Meera aaj Holi hai aaj inn rango ki madat se unse maafi mangle aaj toh unhe mujhe maaf karna hi hoga [Dev is still in his room is he still angry on me? Meera today is the auspicious day of Holi with the help of these colors ask him for forgiveness he has to forgive u today]

Meera takes a thal (plate) of red color with her and entered the Mansion

She was approaching Dev's room when she realized that someone was giving a call on the landline every member of the family was busy playing Holi and were outside the Mansion so she decided to answer the call

Meera kept the thal on the table and went towards the phone

Nakul entered with a plate of red chili powder which he had grinded just few moments back

Nakul: Dadima toh bahar Holi khel rahi hai par mujhe toh puchna hi hogana k mirchi thik tareeke se phisi hai k nahi warna baadmein Dadima mujhe hi daatengi ek kaam karta hoon bahar se Dadima ko bula latha hoon haan ye thik rahega [Dadima is playing Holi but I need to ask her if this chili has been properly grinded properly or not; if Dadima does not like it then afterwards she will shout at me so it is better that I get it checked from her once I need to get her in the house for few minutes]

Nakul keeps the plate which had chili powder in it on the table where Meera had kept the thal of colors

He goes outside to talk to Dadima

Meera: Ye log bhina paagal hothe hai bina dekhe hi koi bhi number dial kardethe hai ab main keh rahi hoon k ye wrong number hai par phir bhi maanne ko taiyaar nahi khair chodo uss baat ko main yaha jis kaam k liye aayi thi wo kaam pehle pura karti hoon [Some people r really mad without seeing properly they dial any number and instead of telling them that the number they have dialed is a wrong number they are not ready to listen, leave it let me concentrate on the work that I had to do]

Meera notices 2 plates which had red color in it

Meera: Main toh ek hi plate lekar aayi thi ye dusri plate yaha kisne rakh di? [I had got only one plate with me who has kept this second plate over here?]

Meera: Ohfo main bhi paagal hoon aaj Holi hai toh ghar mein rang toh har jagah milenge chal ab jaldi se ek plate utha aur Dev se jaakar sorry bol [Silly me it is Holi today so naturally the house would be full of colors okay let me take one plate with me and let me go and say sorry to Dev]

Meera picks up the plate that had chili powder in it

She walks towards Dev's room and knocks the door

Dev opens the door

Dev: Aap? [U?]

Meera: Dev humari pehli mulakat kuch khaas achhi nahi hui aur sach kahu toh main aapko dhang se sorry bhi bol nahi paayi par mera yakeen maniye jobhi hua wo galthi se hua tha maine kuch jaanbusjkar nahi kiya [Dev our first meeting was not a memorable one and to be frank enough I was not able to say sorry to u properly but trust me whatever happened was just a mistake it was nothing intentional]

Dev (with a smile on his face) :Meera aap ab bhi uss baat ko leker pareshan hai aap tension mat lijiye main aapse bilkul bhi naaraz nahi hoon [Meera u r still thinking about that incident don't worry I am not angry on u]

Meera: Achha agar ye baat hai toh bataiye k aap ab tak bahar Holi khelne kyun nahi aaye? [If this is the truth then tell me why didn't u come outside to play Holi with us?]

Dev: Main bus aa hi raha tha wo darasal Londonwale client se kuch important baat discuss kar raha tha phone pe iss liye der ho gayi [I was discussing something important with our London clients hence I got late]

Meera: Matlab aap mujhse naaraz nahi hai? [That means you have forgiven me?]

Dev: Ji bilkul [Yes]

Meera: Par main aapki bato par yakeen kaise karu? [But how will I understand that u r speaking the truth?]

Dev: Aap hi bataiye aapko yakeen kaise dilau? [U tell me how should I convince u?]

Meera: Agar aapne mujhe aapke chehre ko iss rang se rangne de diya toh main samaj jaayungi k aapne mujhe maaf kar diya hai [If u allow me to apply this color on your face then I will b convinced that u have forgiven me]

Dev: Ji bilkul par ek sharth hai meri aapke rang lagane k baad main bhi aapko rang lagaunga [Ok but after u apply the color u have to allow me to do the same]

Meera: Manzoor hai [I agree]

Meera took a generous amount of the color (chili powder) in her palm. Dev closed his eyes and Meera applied the chili powder all over his face 😆😆😆

After applying the color Meera runs away from there

Meera: Mujhe pakad k bataiye Dev agar aap mujhe pakadne mein kamiyaab ho gaye toh aap mujhe rang laga sakthe hai [Catch me if u can Dev if u r successful then u can apply color on my face]

Dev opened his eyes but to his horror his eyes started burning as the chili powder entered his eyes

Dev: Ye kaisa rang hai mirchi ki tarah jal kyun raha hai? [What type of color is this why is it giving me a burning sensation like that of a chili powder?]

He goes to the washroom and sprinkled water on his face but now his problem increased as his entire face was burning

Dev: Ye rang nahi mirch powder hai '..Meera main tumhe chodunga nahi [This is not a color it is red chili powder 'Meera I won't leave u]

He shouted on top of his voice as he continued struggling with the situation

Meanwhile,

Maaneet reach their ancestral house

Geet: Maan aaj aapka yaha aane ka mood kaise bun gaya? [Maan why did you plan to come here all of a sudden?]

Maan: Maine toh ye pehle hi socha tha Geet k Holi k din main tumhe yaha launga [I had planned this much before Geet that I would get u here on the occasion of Holi]

Geet: Aisa kyun? [But why?]

Maan: Simple si baat hai taaki main tumhare saath milkar Holi khel saku sirf main aur tum aur koi nahi [It's simple Geet so that I can play Holi with u only the two of us no one else]

Geet hits him on his chest

Geet: Suniye ji main aapko yaad diladu k agar mujhe Holi khelni hothi toh main ghar par sabke saath khelthi agar aap bhool chuke ho toh sun lijiye mujhe inn rango se allergy hai issliye maine aaj tak kabhi Holi nahi kheli [Let me remind u if I had to play Holi then I would have celebrated this festival with the entire family but I have allergy towards the colors used in this festival hence I have never played Holi in my entire life]

Maan kissed her hand and pulled her closer by holding her waist

Maan: Tumne ab tak Holi iss liye nahi kheli kyunki main tumhare zindagi mein nahi tha par ab mere rehthe hue meri "Bahar" inn rango se mehroom rahe ye main hone nahi dunga ab se har saal tum mere saath Holi khelogi who bhi humari special wali Holi [U did not enjoy this festival till date as I was not there in ur life but since I have entered ur life now I will not allow my "Bahar" to be deprived of these colors from now onwards u will celebrate this festival every year with me and this Holi would be a special Holi of ours]

He winked at her and brushed his lips gently with hers

Geet: Chodiye Maan aap kuch bhi keh lo main Holi nahi khelungi [Leave me Maan u can't convince me to play Holi]

Maan: Mujhpar bharosa hai? [Do u trust me?]

Geet: Khudki zindagi se bhi badkar [More than my life]

Maan: Toh bus ussi vishwas ka vaasta hai tumhe andar jau tumhare liye ek saree rakhi hai usse pehnlo tab tak main baaki ki taiyaariyaan karta hoon [Have faith on ur trust Geet and go inside and wear the saree that I have brought for u till then I will do the remaining arrangements]

Geet nodded her head and entered the room

This was the saree that Maan had brought for Geet

Geet wore the saree and stepped outside. She was looking gorgeous and as usual Maan was totally lost in her beauty.

PLS LISTEN TO THIS MUSIC IT IS THE NEW VERSION OF MAAHIVE MAAHI VE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEyLo3cH_PA

Maan scooped her in his arms and started walking towards the washroom

The size of the washroom was similar to the size of a massive bedroom

As both of them made an entry Geet could see a beautiful arrangement of different dry colors (powder form) as well as some wet colors in front of her

But there was something different about these colors though she could not make out the difference she was sure that these colors r not ordinary there is something special about them

He placed Geet in a tub which had Saffron (Orange) color water in it

She was completely wet now and the saree that Maan had gifted her was a see through saree, the combination of her wet form and her see through attire was giving a new definition to her beauty

Maan: Geet ye pehla rang jisse maine tumhe ranga hai wo tumhari khoobsurathi ko aur nikarega jaanti ho kaise? [This is the first color that I have used to color u and this color will add a new glow to your beauty do u know how?]

Geet: Bataiye kaise? [Tell me how this is possible?]

Maan: Ye koi saadharan paani nahi hai Geet, ye rang maine Kesar se banaya hai aur duniya jaanthi hai k Kesar khoobsurathi ka anmol khazana hai bus aaj Holi k din maine apne khazane ko Kesar ki khoobsurathi se tarasha hai taaki iss janam mein hi nahi balki aanewale kayi sadiyon tak meri Maayari ki khoobsurati ka saamna koi nahi kar paaye [This is not an ordinary water Geet I have made this water with the help of Saffron stalks the world knows that Saffron is regarded as one of the treasures of beauty by soaking u in this water I have beautified my treasure with this secret of nature so that not only in this birth but in all the coming births no one would be able to challenge the beauty of my Maayari]

Geet was touched by his words

She lifted her arms and invited Maan to share the tub with her

Geet: Kesari rang se toh rang diya aapne mujhe par apne pyar k rang se nahi rangenge? [U have colored me with Saffron color won't u color me with ur love?]

Maan smiled and entered the tub

Geet hugged him passionately as Maan started placing wet kisses on her shoulder and neck

He sucked the region above her cleavage aggressively which forced Geet to let out a moan

He kissed her forehead and her eyes after which he got up from the tub

He helped Geet to get out from the tub and moved his attention to the second color which was yellow

Maan took some amount of the color in his hand and slipped his other hand near her waist

He moved his lips very close to her face. Geet started breathing heavily as she felt his warm breath on her face

Maan: Ye Kasturi haldi hai Geet iski khushboo se aaj tumhe mehkane ka irada hai izazat hai? [This is Kasturi haldi Geet I want to touch u with its aroma do I have the permission to go ahead?]

Geet: Geet ka rom rom aapki amanat hai Maan [Every pore of Geet's body belongs to u Maan]

Maan brushed his stubble on her cheeks and moved his fingers in an upward direction from her waist to towards her shoulder and he gracefully slid her pallu

Geet closed her eyes as she knew Maan would be busy admiring her partially exposed chest

Maan took the haldi and applied it sensually on her chest

Geet bit his shoulder as Maan's fingers made way inside her blouse and started caressing her curves

She brought him closer and gave him access to her neck. Maan licked the entire length of her neck with his tongue as he continued massaging her curves taking Geet to a completely different world

After few minutes Maan removed his hand from her blouse and caressed her face lovingly

Geet hid herself in his embrace and Maan guided her to the next color which was a beautiful shade of green

Maan went on his knees and touched her belly sensually. Geet supported herself by placing her hand on his shoulder as Maan's one touch was enough to make her go completely weak in her knees

Maan: Geet ye harha (green) rang maine mehndi se banaya hai humari shadi mein tum mere naam ki mehndi apne haatho par sajayogi par usse pehle main tumhe iss rang mein aaj saja hua dekhna chahunga [Geet I have made this Green color with Henna u would be decorating your hands with my name with Henna but before that I want to decorate u with this color today]

Maan kissed her navel with utmost love

Geet moaned his name and clutched his hair in between her fingers

Maan: Geet harha rang ka matlab growth bhi hotha hai samaj rahi hona main kya keh raha hoon [Geet green color symbolizes growth I hope u r understanding what I am trying to say]

Geet's cheek turned a shade of crimson red as Maan nuzzled his nose on her navel

Maan started applying the Mehndi (Henna) on her belly as he continued to create havocs on her senses by biting and licking the area lying close to her belly button

Maan: Geet waise tumne abhi tak mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya baby boy k baby girl? [By the way Geet you have still not answered my question what do u want baby boy or baby girl?]

Maan sucked her skin passionately while asking this question Geet could only moan his name

After applying the green color Maan stood up and guided Geet to the last color it was Red the color of love

Maan: Ye aakhiri rang sabse anmol hai Geet bilkul humare pyar aur humare rishthe ki tarah [This last color is really precious Geet just like our love and our relationship]

Geet kissed him on his cheek and gave him a side hug

Maan: Holi k bahane maine tumhari Haldi bhi kar di aur tumhe Mehndi bhi laga di ab batau inn doh rasmo k baad kaunsi rasam aathi hai? [In the pretext of Holi I have successfully completed your Haldi and Mehndi ritual now tell me Geet what follows after these two rituals?]

Geet was now emotional she understood what Maan was trying to say

Geet: Shaadi [Marriage]

Maan kissed her forehead and looked at her lovingly

Maan: Ye koi aam lal rang nahi hai Geet ye har suhagan ka sabse bada gehna hai ye Sindoor hai aur aaj main iss sindoor se tumhari maang sajakar humare rishte ki pavitrata ko ek naya mukaam de raha hoon [This is not an ordinary red color Geet this is Sindoor the most precious ornament of a bride and today by decorating your head with this Sindoor I am taking our divine relationship to the next level]

Geet had tears in her eyes.

Maan took the sindoor and applied it in between the partition of her head

A tear drop rolled down her cheeks Maan kissed away her tears and caressed her face with utmost love

Maan: Pyar ki Holi mubarakho Mrs. Khurana😳 [Happy Holi of Love Mrs. Khurana]

Geet had a beautiful smile on her face she could not voice her feelings and immediately locked her lips with his and conveyed her happiness through that one soul searing kiss of hers

PRECAP : Wedding Preparations begin

So friends did you'll like the Holi update of MH?😃😃😃

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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