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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice stry line...thnx 4 d PM n update soon...
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snigdha diii...!!! jaldi update karo naa...!!!! please please pleaseee...!!!!!!
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Awesome...rey a vampire wow...update soon
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😊 As said...updated it today😊
*****************Part 3*****************
"If you're a vampire, aren't you already dead?" She asked in a practical tone.She felt herself relaxing.Why should she be scared of him when it was obvious that it was he who was frightened?
"No,not really.It's more like I've lived a long tym. A long time," he murmured."This is our house.I remember the fireplace downstairs.I put the plaque up myself."
He must be talking about d dusty old plaque next to the fireplace,Kriya supposed,but it was old and dirty she had never thought to notice it before."But yeah he was d one whom she saw in some old photo n heard",she thought.
"Who's chasing you?",she asked.
"It's compli-".But before he could finish his sentence,there was a rattle near d window.A thump,thump,thump as if someone- or something-was throwing itself against d window with all it's might.
Rey jumped n vanished for a moment.He reappeared by d doorway,breathing fast n hard.
"What is that?",she asked,her voice trembling.
"It's here.It's found me,"he said sharply,standing edgy and wired as if about to flee.And yet he remained where he was,his eyes fixed on d vibrating glass.
Kriya:who??
Rey:"The bad..thing..."
Kriya stood up n peered out of d window.Outside was dark n peaceful.The trees and d bare of branches stood still.Moonlight cast d view in a cold,blue glow.
"I dont see any-oh!"she stepped back,as if stabbed.She was above to fall..he hops up n holds her in his arms.She had seen something.A presence.Crimson eyes and silver pupils.Staring at her from d dark.Outside d window,it was hovering.A dark mass.She could feel its rage,its violent desire.It wanted in,to consume,to feed.He quickly made his move n closed d window n came back to comfort her.
Kriya...kriya..
It knew her name.
Let me in...Let me in..
The words had a hypnotic effect.She walked back towards d window n began to lift d latch.
"STOP!",he yelled.
She turned.He was standing there lil tense n wid a frantic look on his face.
"Don't,"he said.He walks towards her ,held her hands wid his from behind n whispers,"That's what it wants you to do. Invite it inside.As long as you keep that windows closed, it can't come in.And I'm safe."
"What is it?"She asked,her heart pounding in her chest.She took her hand away from d window but keep her eyes on the view outside.There was nothing there anymore, but she could senses its presence.It was near.
"A vampire too.Like me, but different.It's''..insane,"he said."It feeds on its own kind".
Kriya:"A vampire dat hunts vampires?"
Rey*nodding his head*:"I know it sounds ridiculous."
"Did it...do that to you?"she said,brushing her fingers against d hand on her.She felt sorry for him.
"yes",he said.
Kriya:"But u're all right?".
Rey:"I think so"..."I hope so".
Kriya:"How were you able to come insode?No one invited you."
Rey:"You're right.But I didn't need an invitation.The door was open when I came.Doors were open at all d houses, but this is d only one of them I could enter.Which made me think that I'd found it.My family's House."
Krita nodded.That made sense.Of course he would be welcome in his own house.
The rattling stopped.He sighes."It's gone for now.But it will be back."
He looked so relieved dat her heart went out to him.
"What do you need me to do?",she asked.She wasn't scared anymore.Her mother always said dat she had a head for emergencies.She was a dependable girl.More likely to plant a stake in d heart of a monster dan scream for rescue from."How can I help?",she asked again.
He raised his eyebrow and looked at her with respect."I need to get away.I can't stay here forever.I need to go.I need to warn d others.Tell dem wat happened to me.That d danger is growing.But I'm far too weak to do dis."He sagged against d wall."What I ask you to do might hurt a bit, and I don't want to ask unless it's freely given."
"Blood, isn't it?You need blood,you are weak," kriya said."You need my blood".
"Yes".The shadows cast his face in sharp angles, and she cud see d deep hollows in his cheeks.His shallow complexion.So perhaps some of d vampire legends were true.
Kriya:''But won't I turn into..?"
"No."He shook his head."It doesn't work dat way.No one can make a vampire.We were born like this.Cursed.You will be fine--tired and a little sleepy,maybe,nut fine."
Kriya gulped."Is it d only way?" She didn't much like how dat sounded.He wud have to bite her.Suck her blood.She felt nauseous just thinking about it, but strangely excited as well.
He nodded slowly."I understand if you don't want to.It's not something that most people wud like to do."
The rattling started again.She was really scared n hugs him.He holds her tightly caressing her hair.She was feeling really secured in his arms.She spoke out against his skin.
"Can I think about it?", she asked.
"Ofcourse,"he said.
They broke d hug after a while wen d sound stopped n he disappeared.

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Pls don't forget to review ur comments..next part or d last part will be updated tomorrow.
Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awsum loved it masst rey was hell scared but kriya love her so much she took care of rey aww so sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vampire Rey...sounds funny...nyways nice update...thnx 4 d PM n update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow it was amazing yaar
every part was rly rly exiting
keep up the good work
for d first tym i'm liking a horror story
well done
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ah! i luvd this part!
thank u for the pm..
n it was an amazing update!
do pm me next time u update..
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vamire rey is scared kriya has to give blood wow yaar what an imagination update soon and thnx for pm me

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