~~Chasing Midnight~~Kriyaansh FF - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome diff concept...luved it update soon
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wow... great story ...
specially rey's part 😊

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different concept lyked it and update jaldii and pm me
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It was awesome update. you have croseed ur page demand so plz update next part soon.
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This part is dedicated to every1 who posted der comments esp. Angelic_aditi,crazysky,mEgical_arsha.

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Three in d morning.The cold breeze was flowing n embracing her body."Was it my imagination or was d wind really blowing?",she thought.The door banged.This tym,kriya was awake and had expected it.She saw him appear infront of her closet coming from d entrance.She blinked her eyes,her blood roaring in her ears,trying to fight d panic welling up inside.Whatever he was..he wasnt human.

"you again",she called,trying to be brave.

He turned around.He was wearing d same type of clothes as d two nights prior.He gave a her a sad, wistful smile."Yes".

"Who are you?What are you?"she demanded.

"Me?"He looked puzzled for a moment, and then stretched his neck.He wasnt glowing like he was before.His face was getting dull day by day.She had been expecting an answer for which he said,"I think I'm what you call a vampire."

"A Vampire?",Kriya recoiled.If he was a ghost,it wud be a different story.Kriya's granndmom told her all about ghosts.Kriya wasnt afraid of ghosts.A Ghost cudnt harm you,unless it was a poltergeist(ghost or supernatural force which is believed to to move furniture or throw objects around).Ghosts were vapors,spectral images, maybe even just a trick of light.

But vampires...there was a place nearby which says about a legend or story of family of vampires who had terrorized the territory a long tym ago.Blood sucking monsters,pale n undead,cold and clammy to the touch, creatures of the night that could turn into bats or sum other or worse.She shivered n looked around d room, wondering how fast she cud dash out of d bed n out of d door.If there was tym to escape.Could you outrun a vampire?

"Don't worry,I'm not that kind of Vampire,"the boy said soothingly, as if he'd read her mind.

"Which kind of vampire?", she asked.

"Oh,you know,jumping on people without warning.All that nonsense.Growing horns out of my head."He shrugged."For one thing, we're not ugly."

Kriya wanted to laugh but felt it wud be reude.Her fright was slowly vanishing."Why r u here", she asked.

"We live here," he said simply.

"No one's lived here in years," kriya said."My grandmaa told me-she said it's been empty forever."

"Huh",he shrugged again.He took d corner seat across from her bed.

Kriya glanced at him wondering if she could let him get that close.If he was a vampire,he didnt look cold n clammy.He looked tired n exhausted.There were dark circles ready to be formed underneath his eyes.He didnt look like a cold-blooded killer.But what did she kno?Cud she trust him?But he had visited her twice already,after all.If he wanted her dead,her cud have killed her any time.And there was something else about him-he was almost too cute to be scared of.

"Why'd u keep doing that?" she asked when she found her voice.

"Oh,you mean d thing with d door?",he asked.She nodded.

"Dunno.For a long tym,I cudnt do anything.I was sleeping in your closet but u didnt see me.Then I realized I cud do something for u to notice me.But it was only wen u started noticing that I began to feel more like myself."

"Why are you here?",she asked.He closed his eyes."Dis is my house n also bcoz i had to hide from someone."

"Who?".He closed his eyes harder,so dat his face was a painful remark."Somebody baf.Somebody who wants me dead-no worse dan dead."He shuddered.

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Sorry 4 d late update...I wud b updating d next part very soon..thanks 4 d responses n reviews..pls do keep posting!!!

Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yaar rey is vampire that too good vampire very very very interesting plz update soon and thnx for pm me
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wonderful updatte. thanks for the pm.
update next part asap.
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that was superb...
update soon next part...
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ohh!!!! my god vampire...i too lyk to read stories on vampire...dis is an intrsting topic na...n yeah wow awsummm part rey as vampire seems soo intrstng lovly n kriya uska love wow...dis reminds me of serial PYAAR KI YE EK KHAANI bt kriyaansh are kriyaansh...love it...plsss post nxt soon plsss
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wow rey a cute and a hott vampire loving d concept so much

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