~~Chasing Midnight~~Kriyaansh FF

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
okay just last question: kriya is in dehradun living with her mother or without her mother.

rey is safe in the house??

when will u update

Without her mother...living in mumbai!!!

Ya...he is safe in d house.

Wud b updating wenever i complete it...

Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: akku16
okay... till now i ws a silent read... used 2 read by my sis's id... bt not nymore...

snigdha... it ws aammmaaazzziiinnn part yarrr... 👏 😃

dis is actually awesommm... 👏 👏

i think u should continue it as FF... 5 parts to bht chote lagenge yar... 😉

jst continue it... seriusly... atleast 10-15 parts to hone he cahiye... uske baad bhale he hapy endin kar dena... bt not now atleast... 😊 😉

blv me... jst continue it... nd u gonna rock it... 4 sure... 😉

keep it up... nd al d best 4 d next part... 😊

nd 1 more thng... m addin u... so PM me whneva u update kk...

Thanks 4 ur comment..glad dat i made a silent reader comment!!!

I will continue atleast for 10-15 parts...

I will pm u..i added u...

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Snigdha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha
It ws reaalyyy awesssummm DEE !!!!😊
pls do continue ur writing...nd make it a FF..!!!!😳
i just luv ur writing skillls nd want u to continue this...so dooo continue...cuz i want to read moreee nd morre...especially on this vampire thingy !!!😃
i really lyked the concept ...so plsss do continue !!!
now coming to this update...u reaaalyy rocked it !!!! kria is so understanding nd she cannot see rey going far away frm her...so this piece of work ws fantastic !!!👍🏼
this line is really funny(as my p.o.v) ..Her first kiss, and from a vampire!!!👏

hehehe...really gud !!! especially from a vamp !!! 😆
so whenever u update next do PM me for sure DEE!!!🤗

Thanks again for ur flowless comment!!!

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

amazing 1 i loved it
plzz make it a FF continue dis yr
plz plz plz...

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Isshh
amazing 1 i loved it
plzz make it a FF continue dis yr
plz plz plz...

thanks..i will make it an ff..

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Saumya Rathore

@Saumya_D3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

please make this an FF...pleasseee...!!!!!!!!
and i have a question!!!

When she opened her eyes, she saw him,his tousled(messy),sexy,dirty-blond hair flopping over her dreamy blue eyes gazing at her to reveal some unknown truth.

"They're beautiful--your eyes, I mean.You're beautiful,"he whispered."I thought you should know."

i didn't understand this part...i mean...what did she see..or he see...or what...please explain...!!

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Saumya_D3
please make this an FF...pleasseee...!!!!!!!!
and i have a question!!!

When she opened her eyes, she saw him,his tousled(messy),sexy,dirty-blond hair flopping over her dreamy blue eyes gazing at her to reveal some unknown truth.
"They're beautiful--your eyes, I mean.You're beautiful,"he whispered."I thought you should know."

i didn't understand this part...i mean...what did she see..or he see...or what...please explain...!!

Ya sure..I think I have to becum a teacher for now😆--

When kriya opens her eyes she see's rey his hair was tousled,sexy n is dirty-blond colour which was falling over his forehead..

As when she opens her eyes he comments it dat they r beautiful..he tells he was commenting his eyes n then says she was beautiful.

"I thought you should know."-he told dis to let her know dat she was beautiful...

Hope u understood..