~~Chasing Midnight~~Kriyaansh FF - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
It is amazing thanks for the pm and plz update soon I really cant wait anymroe and wow first hug yaaya
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amaZAYN update :D and thanks for the pm
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it was awsme..loved it..
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iii luvv it againn!!:):)
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ahh an this part wass fantastic !!
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it was just so amazing gal i just loved it last part wat do u mean plz make dis an ff na its gng to be fun rey vamp plz ff kar do na
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Gosh . . . . She need to get her blood sucked to give strength to rey... I just wish, it turns into a love-bite 😉

feels bad to see him like this- so week n helpless...

but this horror story is gonna be a deadly love story... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
I can proudly say dis was one of d best romantic part I have written.Before u go to d part..I wanna ask all d readers a question..do u want me to continue dis as an FF..if it becums a FF i wud be updating after 2 to 3 days...Or end it as an SS..i wud complete d story by tommorow peacefully..
Plss silent readers also do comment so dat I cud know...If der r less reponses i wud surely end it as an SS..n i have updated a short part today bcozz...from d next part it will be different for an SS n FF.

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The next night, he told her a little more about the thing that was after him.It had almost gotten him once before, but he had been able to get away. Now it was back to finish d job.It had tracked him down.Kriya listened to his story as he says.The more he talked, the closer she felt to him.He was running out of tym, he said. He was growing weaker and weaker, and one day he wouldn't be able to resist its call.He would walk out to meet his doom, helpless against d creature's will.
Something thumped on the window, breaking the spell if his speech.The glass vibrated, but it held and didn't shatter.Kriya could sense the thing was back.It was out there.It was close.It wanted to feed.
She turned to him, reached out for his hand.Her eyes were wide abd frightened."I'm sorry, but I can't",she said.
"It's all right," he said mournfully."I didn't expect you to.It's a lot to ask",he replied.He was moving thru out n went off.

Kriya thought about him all d next day, remembering his words, his desperation to get away from d creature in the night that was hunting him.How alone he had looked.How scared.He looked like how she had felt when her father had told her he was moving out, and she n her mother were left with no one to turn on.That evening, before going to bed, she put on her nicest nightwear, one she wud always lyk to wear.It was black n silk trimmed with lace.She has made a decision.
Rey appeared at three in the morning, she told him she changed her mind.
"Are you sure?" he asked.
"Yes.But do it quickly before I chicken out,"she ordered.
"You don't have to help me,"he said.
"I know."She swallowed."But I want to."
"I won't hurt you," he said.
She put a hand to her neck as if to protect it."Promise?"How cud she trust this strange person?How cud she risk her life to save him?But there was something sbout him--that drew her to him.Kriya was d type of gal who took in stray dogs n fixed birds' broken wings.Plus,there was dat thing out there in d dark.She had to help him get away from it.
"Do it",she said.
"Are you sure?"he repeated.
She nodded briskly, as if she were at d doctor's office and asked to give consent to a particularly troublesome but much-needed operation.She pulled d right strap of her nightwear to d side and arched her neck.She closed her eyes n prepared herself for d worst.
He walked over to her.He was so tall, and when he rested his hands on her bare skin, they were surprisingly warm to the touch.He pulled her closer to him n bent down.
"Wait," he said."Open your eyes.Look at me."
She did.When she opened her eyes, she saw him,his tousled(messy),sexy,dirty-blond hair flopping over her dreamy blue eyes gazing at her to reveal some unknown truth.
"They're beautiful--your eyes, I mean.You're beautiful,"he whispered."I thought you should know."
She sighed and closed her eyes as his hand stroked her cheek.
"Thank you,"he whispered.
She could feel his hot breath on her cheek, and then his lips brushed hers for a moment.He kissed her, pressing his lips firmly upon hers.She kissed him back.His lips were hot and wet.
Her first kiss, and from a vampire.
She felt his lips start to kiss the side of her mouth, and then the bottom of her chin, and then d base of her neck.This was it.She steeled herself for pain but something else happened.She cud feel d presence of tears.She opens her eyes n cupped his face to look at him.Tears were prickling down his beautiful face.He hugs her tightly.She cud feel his sorrowful breath near her neck.
He spoke against her neck,"I can't do this."
She cudn't control herself anymore.Even her eyes were prepared to shed d ocean of tears,dey were streaming down.

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Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago
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Do continue it as an FF love ur work!!!!
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that was short but a clear image in my mind and thanks for the pm :D
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ff plz love this i mean cant wait plz continue and wonder update it was amazing but update soon huh

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