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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
⭐️luved it
waiting for the twists...
update soon
thanks 4 the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Part 3

I hope you guys like it please comment and press like. BTW Part 4 is the BEST part of all...stuffed with craziness. I know I said it would've been updated on Saturday and I strongly apologize for that.

Kushi decided to make an excuse to dodge Shyam.

Kushi: I think Anjali Di called me downstairs.

Arnav: Ya...she's right we better go.

Shyam stood there as if he was being stepped on like an ugly carpet.

As Kushi began to get up...she cried of pain.

Shyam reached out to pick Kushi back up, but Arnav grabbed her by the waist, swept her up into his arms, and carried her to the kitchen downstairs.

Shyam: That's it Kushiji, this baby is baby of yours will have to go AWAY I mean it.

DOWNSTAIRS

Anjali: How are you Kushiji?

Kushi: I'm fine

Payal: Congrats Kushi

Mami: Congratulations pati sari!

Kushi ignored mamis words and just smiled.

Arnav: Di I'm going to work, Kushi you better be ready when I get back because we have a docs appointment.

Kushi: Okay.

At the appointment

Doctor: Congrats Mrs.Raizada everything is fine, but you'll need to be extra careful and take special care of yourself, since you are very small and petite any big or sudden movements can be unhealthy for the child.

Kushi listened carefully, but her eyes and expressions could tell she was afraid of losing the baby.

Arnav: Kushi the baby will be fine.

2 Weeks Later

As ASR rested his head late at night, he thought about Kushi. He didn't know why he was thinking about her, but he couldn't stop.

She's really crazy, for the past weeks I've been picking her up from the poolside and bringing her inside. She is pregnant for GOD SAKE! Luckily, I got her to stay in the room from now on, he smiled. And fell in deep sleep.

Kushi: DM! I am soo hungry.

Kushi slowly got up and began to walk out of the room. As Kushi carefully stepped in the kitchen her face grew in a HUGE smile.

Kushi: Thank you DM...we have jalebis!

As Kushi began to walk towards the staircase she didn't notice the spill of water on the ground, which caused her to slip and the edge of her belly hit the edge of the stairs.

Kushi: OUCH! That hurts a lot, but it's okay the baby will be fine.

She wiped the tears from her eyes and went to sleep.

DOWNSTAIRS

Shyam: Kushiji muhje maaf karde na, magar yeh sab sirf hamare liye hai.

Shyam smiled his evil smile.

...

2 MONTHS LATER

Kushi stepped out of the bathroom after taking a shower. Arnav couldn't take his eyes off Kushi.

She looked beautiful with her yellow colored shalwar kameez, wich really suited her. He thought not noticing his plants were overflowing with water.

Kushi: Arnavji aap ka dahan kahan hai?

Arnav: What?...Oh.

Kushi smiled at Arnav, she actually began having feelings for Arnav again. He really wasn't so bad, everyday now he always took care of her and even started to work more from home.

Anjali: Kushiji, Chotey please come downstairs.

Arnav: HP can I get my coffee and give Kushi her tea.

Kushi sat across from Arnav; she was watching him talk to his Di. As she kept looking towards him she began to notice how beautiful his eyes are and his smile...it was GORGEOUS. She couldn't take her eyes off him.

Shyam noticed the way Kushiji was staring at Arnav and that brought piercing pain to his heart. Sadly, his plan to kill the baby still hadn't done or added any effect.

Anjali: Kushiji aap ki chai to bohut tandi hogahi hai.

Kushi: Kya...she still had her eyes glued to Arnav.

Anjali laughed. Kushiji stop staring at Chotey and start drinking your tea.

Kushi's cheeks were fiery red, while Arnav looked a bit surprised and a bit embarrassed.

Nightime

Kushi laid calmly on 1 side of the bed Arnav on the other side both facing their backs to each other.

Kushi: Arnavji...meh aap se kuch pooch sakti hoon?

Arnav: Sure...whatever.

Kushi: honestly, you're not a laad governor to me anymore.

Arnav smiled at that, but as the terrace scene whooshed back into his mind, he looked angry.

Arnav: Go to sleep, it's late.

Kushi groaned.

30 minutes later

Kushi: Arnavji I want to eat jalebies.

Arnav: WTH at this time!!!

Kushi: YESSS

Arnav: No and go to sleep.

Kushi: But...

Arnav: SHHH...one more word and I'll go crazy.

Suddenly, Kushi felt a kick in her stomach.

Kushi: Arnav!

Arnav: What now! He murmured.

Tears began falling from her eyes.

Kushi: The baby...it kicked.

Arnav's face lit up and without knowing his actions he turned around really fast and placed a hand on her bare belly. He felt a kick and tears flowed from Arnav's eyes.

Kushi sat there shocked, by what Arnav did next...

Arnav gave a small kiss on her belly, exactly where the baby kicked. Then he cupped her face and said Thank you Kushi! While tears were flowing from their eyes, but as soon as they realized what they were doing they turned their backs to each other again and acted like nothing happened.

Shyam stood there hidden near the poolside looking inside to witness everything that had happened.

That's ENOUGH the baby has to go.

PECAP: Arnav and Kushi in a painful fight after finding out shocking news.

Please guys like and comment or else I won't continue. And if U want me to PM the updates add me as a friend.

BTW Part 4 is crazy and filled with twists! So stay Tuned.

If You haven't yet liked Part 2 please do cuz I am not getting enough likes as Part 1.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
res!

*edited!*

Soo... Loved it a bunch! Can't wait for part four, especially because you made it seem so HUGE!! Please update soon! Muah!
Edited by purplekid - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Aww arnav kissed her stomach... sweet.. continue x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
that was great cant wait for part... my like buton some times dont work but i liked all parts of your story please continue and thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome update loved it hope snake does not get to hurt the baby and arnav protects his unborn child
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
CANT WAIT CONTINUE SOON PLZ PLZ IT WAS AMAZING AND THANK U SO MUCH FOR PM ME
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Great part!!! can't wait to read what crazy twist u have in store for us in part 4!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
AWESOME...
LOOKING FORWARD 4 THE NEXT PART
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Brilliant update ! You've made my day 😊 Cant wait for the next part to be updated. Fingers crossed for the unborn to be fine ...

Do PM once you update Part 4

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