Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139 - Page 61

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

363.9k

Users

199

Likes

6.9k

Frequent Posters

AngelTeen thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comment!

Anyway, moving to the chapter.

Swoons and smiles at this part - And for the next minute, Arnav openly stared at her. The way her whole face transformed when she laughed. Her eyes becoming smaller as her cheekbones leveled up, the sunlight dancing all over her skin. That moment he knew, that this one woman could laugh and cry, breaking his heart at the same time, with wretched tenderness.

Sigh. Make a move already Arnav! Come on!

And Arnav has come such a long way from how we saw him at first - the jerk with ghosts of the past on his back to this smiling in love sweetheart! <3

Why didnt she just buy the bangles and why didnt Arnav just buy those ones for her?

And then "He looked at her as she held out her palm for him. A small, thin ring of fading oxidized lay on the expanse of her small hands. He picked it up from her hands, a small smile tugging at his lips as he slid it through his index finger in one go, and took her hand and walked ahead, his eyes conveying everything he didn't express in words." SWOONS! <3 <3

The rain scene was perfect and so was the Giant Wheel...I so want to see a giant wheel scene in the show (now that I have read it here :p)! I hate giant wheels waise but I dont think I would mind if I had an Arnav to snuggle into next to me... ;) :D <3 <3

Awesome update and I so wanted them to kiss at the end! Make them kiss soon, will you!


PS - About the note, personally I didnt like it in the sense that I dont want to know how the ending is gonna be and if people are complaining because it has a sad undertone then to those people, read the updates again and try to figure out for yourself if the updates could have a chirpy undertone. :p
jazzpreet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
i am in love with this storyline. you are a brilliant writer. i just read all the chapters in one go, and they're amazing! please update soon, and when you do, please pm me! :)
--Siva-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
That was beautiful and cool update! Just full of Arnav and Kushi and their interactions..

No sadness, no fear..! Just the happiness and the love underneath!😛

Ah.. The note is cos of me?? I'm sorry, if I had pestered u a lot!!

Thanks for the PM dear!
JerryTheMouse thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Awww.
That was so sweet! And happy! 😳

Thank you for such a sweet encounter between them!

And thank you for the PM! 😊
zafi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
That was beautiful.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Well written. They looked like they both had a lot of fun and enjoyed each other company.
Continue soon. Thanks.😃
ASRism thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Aww...Sonu...that was one sweet update. Waiting to see how truth is unfolded to Arnav about Khushi
apoorva12sharma thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
mammmiaaa...

yaar bread pakore ki yaad dila di...

ufff...

now my stomuch is grumbling...

u know m just a student...i don't know much words of oxford dictionary... and everytime u update i just want to praise u...and now i am out of words...

i mean how can u write every emotion in one go...

darling...u have immense talent...

keep up the good work...

and update soon..

:)
Sarina2012 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... This was so aesthetic. Beautiful. Soft, romantic with a little touch of sadness. Loved this update. The ring part was awesome. Only someone like khushi could prefer a metal ring to a diamond one. He does love her now doesn't he?
chandana.s thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY... VERY WEL WRITTEN,UPDATE SOON THANKS FOR THE PM
mistyrains thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Sorry for the late comment!


Anyway, moving to the chapter.

Swoons and smiles at this part - And for the next minute, Arnav openly stared at her. The way her whole face transformed when she laughed. Her eyes becoming smaller as her cheekbones leveled up, the sunlight dancing all over her skin. That moment he knew, that this one woman could laugh and cry, breaking his heart at the same time, with wretched tenderness.

Sigh. Make a move already Arnav! Come on!

And Arnav has come such a long way from how we saw him at first - the jerk with ghosts of the past on his back to this smiling in love sweetheart! <3

Why didnt she just buy the bangles and why didnt Arnav just buy those ones for her?

And then "He looked at her as she held out her palm for him. A small, thin ring of fading oxidized lay on the expanse of her small hands. He picked it up from her hands, a small smile tugging at his lips as he slid it through his index finger in one go, and took her hand and walked ahead, his eyes conveying everything he didn't express in words." SWOONS! <3 <3

The rain scene was perfect and so was the Giant Wheel...I so want to see a giant wheel scene in the show (now that I have read it here :p)! I hate giant wheels waise but I dont think I would mind if I had an Arnav to snuggle into next to me... ;) :D <3 <3

Awesome update and I so wanted them to kiss at the end! Make them kiss soon, will you!


PS - About the note, personally I didnt like it in the sense that I dont want to know how the ending is gonna be and if people are complaining because it has a sad undertone then to those people, read the updates again and try to figure out for yourself if the updates could have a chirpy undertone. :p



Believe me, I want to make them kiss , already. In this story, in the show. And I'll probably probably in the next few updates.😉
Why she didn't buy the bangles, they were not of her size, but I'll just edit that part, I have missed out the details.
And thank you so much for defending all the sadness, it is an integral part of the story, probably one I can't ignore, even if I want too.😊
Also, I've sent you a Buddy request since you were not on the list:)

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

7 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".