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Part 5


Before he could guide her into a seat, the theatre plunged into total darkness. She blindly grasped at his jacket lapel with both hands.

"Ar...Arnavji?" Her voice almost child-like.

He knew from what she had shared about her childhood that she was not comfortable in the dark. With his hand still on her waist, he pulled her closer to his side, by way of assurance. "Come," he said in her ear, and showed her her seat employing his phone as an improvised torch.

She slid into her seat, but didn't release her hold on his jacket, which made his own descent into the low cinema seat a bit awkward. He leaned towards her to urge her to relax.

Either he misjudged the distance--or she leaned forward at the exact same moment--but they collided; his mouth met the side of her nose, and her lips pressed against his throat. This unorthodox union of Mr & Mrs Raizada lasted perhaps a fraction of a second, but the impact did not end when they moved apart.


Just then the screen illumed with colour and sound, and Arnav saw Khushi's face captured in a flash of blue light. Skin flawless. Like polished marble. Eyelids fluttered. Then lowered. Lips trembled. Mouth slightly parted. What right had she to be so exquisite?


And, then it happened--without plan or design--his hands cupped her face, lifting her mouth to his lips, and Mr and Mrs Raizada met once again--this time properly. It completed something that had been painfully interrupted many months ago; but by no measure could this kiss be called complete. Rather, it was an auspicious beginning.


Arnav knew intuitively that this was Khushi's first kiss, and he curtailed his desire in order to initiate her slowly. And, he preferred more privacy. He broke contact--reluctantly but decidedly--and ran his thumb across the plump fullness of her bottom lip as though to imprint, "this is mine."


Her eyes were gazing at him with something like wonderment. He arranged her more comfortably in her seat. She allowed it, but did nothing to assist him. He gave her a small nod to convey to her that this would be continued, and he himself settled more deeply into his seat and faced the screen.


His eyes followed the images projected on the screen, but his attention was fully on the space that had expanded inside his chest.


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When the theatre lights switched on to signal the film interval, Khushi felt as though the sun had come up to disturb a gorgeous night's sleep. It may as well be said: she was spellbound. What happens now? She turned to the man she had married, and saw that he had been watching her. Waiting for her.


He took her hand and helped her out of the seat. The aisle resembled a human traffic jam. Arnav negotiated them through it; Khushi just held firmly onto his hand and allowed herself to be pulled wherever he led.


"Chotte!" she heard Anjali call out to her brother, and Arnav steered her through the crowd towards where their party was gathered. Anjali was asking Arnav how it was that he surprised them at the cinema. Khushi missed his reply, as Shyam placed himself in Khushi's sightline and unnerved her with his pointed poisonous looks.


Her grip on Arnav's hand must have tightened. His eyes fell to where their hands joined and then peered into her face, lifting an eyebrow to ask, "tum theek hai?"

Khushi replied his silent question with a brief smile.

It must have failed to convince him because he bent his mouth to her ear, and spoke the words, "kya?"
Whatever was wrong was partially abated by the caress of his warm breath on her cheek.

Before she knew it herself, she heard herself say to her husband, "let's go home."


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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm the first one! Na na na na na!!!! *dances- jumps dances again*

Nicely Done!!! First Kiss Theatre me huh? Naughty Arnie!😆

Oho Shyam get a life man! staring at other people's wives! D'oh!

Thanks for the PM! Update soon please!!😳
Edited by Gargee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay they kissed and they are going home. Fab update. Very well written. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Too Good! U just have to update this week end. Monday is too far away...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I was expecting the update to be long, anyhow please continue. And thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm. loved your update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...you know, i love possessive hubby to an extend or rather protective hubby is the right word. Arnav, just makes me want to swoon. He's a girls dream come true..This was a great update, short, but essential as you said! Update soon!! Make me drool like crazy on the next part!? Love your work! Keep writing! Thanks for the pm! You absolutely rock!

-Mahrukh
Edited by sweetness4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it! Do continue soon and thanks for the pm!
Edited by purplekid - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Y???...dis was so short!! D moment i cud realize wot was happening,it was over...dont do dis pls..update soon
Btw it was nicely written
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 2

"How had he failed to realize all these months that every time he was in Khushi's presence, she had become more deeply, more indelibly etched into his life--to the point where he could not imagine life without her. And, if that sounded suspiciously like the over-used-over-hyped word 'pyaar' then he would say, "rubbish." He had no interest in love. His interest in Khushi was elemental: he felt a strong urge to protect her and an even stronger need to have her with him always"

BRILLIANT! Describes our denial lover Arnav to the T.

And I loved how they just keep on challenging each other at all times, even if not verbally. Thats ArHi however it may irritate me sometimes too.


Chapter 3

Misjudging Khushi had made her his wife. And, misjudging Khushi again had landed her in his bed. It was a diabolical universe.

I can imagine him going "What the! What the!" and then "Unbelievable!" in his mind! Hahahahahaha! Bechara Arnav...conphusiya gaya hai! ;) :D

And I loved the last bit...when they are all like a normal couple. Sigh. <3


Chapter 4

At first her question just pained me but then the way Arnav turned the things around...it made me smile...I really hope that they get over this 'Kaun hai" phase to "Koi aa jaayega" phase soon! ;) :p

And the conversation was hilarious and cute...totally ArHi like! "Aapko nahin pata?!" Hahahahaha! I can so imagine a smirky Arnav! ;) :D

Yes, Khushi, his eyes NEVER leave you. I love that she is so happy and child-like again about the movie.

And Arnav Bitwa...superhero in action! :D :D


Chapter 5

"And, then it happened--without plan or design--his hands cupped her face, lifting her mouth to his lips, and Mr and Mrs Raizada met once again--this time properly. It completed something that had been painfully interrupted many months ago; but by no measure could this kiss be called complete. Rather, it was an auspicious beginning."

I liked the 'auspicious beginning' part...that sounds like a promise that you, missy, gotta keep! :p :D

And the kiss...uff and her lets go home...Dude! UPDTATE SOON! :D

PS - Could you please put an index with the page numbers cos its really difficult to find all the parts. Thanks. :)
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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