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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#961

zara

WHAT AN UPDATE ☺️ im still blushing while commenting...

loved the morning scene ... woww man didnt know the innocent khushi was such a tigress in bed😍 poor arnav he thought khushi forgot to bring ASR with her to the car but what does we know

she kept in pot and was carrying it day long... ASR is never going to leave arnav

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kushiasr26

@kushiasr26

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#962

it was damn hot zara

need a cold shower

happy to see aman and sj back

i didnt thought that she will keep asr in the pot

y u were late i was worried sj is very innocent

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#963

Omg omg omg omg
Thanksss for the dedication and the VIP pm
Omg I love u evermore

Tht was some H...H...O...T...TTT update babes
Wow!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat at all times
Im nt gna mention much about the storyline as such cos I dnt want to spoil it for the ones who havent read it yet

But omggg tht phone call by Aman sent a chill through my spine omggg scarry indeed
And the finding of ASR hahahahaha bless Arnav - for once he must have felt one over ASR cos Khushi forgot and then to find out hes been under his nose all the time
And ROFLMAO at Khushi saying she didnt "Touch" him hahahaha omggg i felt bad for Arnav though
I think its about time she got some taste of her own medicine
And I guess Khushi can get her own back for Arnav scaring her later on
Lol
But Omg the last bit was *speechless*
can't wait for Tuesday and then Thursday
You know I might actually read the whole update again
Hehehehe

P.S for the non buddy ppl
Sorry Zara has forbidden us to PM you guys the update but fear not you guys shall get to read it on Thursday as a double update. Consider yourselves lucky in a way you get 2 updates together whereas we have to tarpofy til Thursday to read the next one

Ciao
And keep the good work up babes
P.P.S hope ur feeling much much better and your revision is going better than mine xXx

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#964

HAwt😳😳😳😳😳 Speechless. Seriously was too hot and explain how hot it was. stil dreaming about it. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L😳😳👏👏👏 thnx a ton for the VIP pm.😉

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#965

Oh Zara missy u getting naughty ...

Just kidding

Loved the VIP update

U r getting there on the mature content part getting better and better

Loved Kushi going wild...

So Arnav didn't realise wat he did by unlocking door for the fun part cos there was killer on loose...

Thanks

Edited by smileyhug7679 - 13 years ago

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: arhi101
First of all thanx for the VIP pm (i felt very special)

Coming to the point:
WOW that was one hot hot hot hot hot update😳 I was blushing as usual. Very well written, loved it from beginning to end.

Loved the cute morning scene, khushi first melting by seeing her hot husband, but then frowning remembering last nights passion which not only scared her but made her remember it forever😳. i truly enjoyed reading arnav waking up to c the bite marks and scratches on him in the morning, very very hot😳. Who could imagine the innocent angel like khushi to do something like that😲. No matter, it was still very nice to read.

Their airport journey, for once I was thinking that awww how cute Arnav must really care for khushi's needs no wonder he went back to search for his one and only rival ASR, only to realise that the bird is safe and sound with khushi in the pot😆, that literally cracked me up, the mere imagination made me laugh wholeheartedly. Khushi is just too adorable.

Plane journey, it's so sweet how arnav makes sure khushi is satisfied with everything. Also I truly loved the part where arnav hugged khushi once he found out that there was literally a murderer on the loose, just like arnav even i thought that what if arnav wasn't the one who grabbed khushi, but thank god they r safe😃

I immensely love reading khushi's and aman's parts. they r so beautifully written. Its really nice how khushi shares this relationship with aman. even SJ acts very caring towards khushi. It is just too good. To top it all our ARNAV is infinite times ahead of them when it comes to caring for khushi😃.

😳hot update😳
I loved this part a lot, arnav is sooo naughty, he has to get his way. It was sooo adorable how khushi put the red hood on, and as for the HOTTIE hmmm if he is the big bad wolf then hu would want to be red riding hood. Their passionate fabric room romance was so HOT and very well written👏. I would want arnav and khushi to be parents though. R u planning to include that as a plot for this story??? If so that would be awesome to read.😃

Overall a great update. Loved it to bits. Cn't wait for ur next update. Continue soon😊

p.s. Hope u are feeling better😃

p.p.s ur ff has inspired me to buy my very own angry bird toy and I am currently nagging my parents to buy me one for my birthday😆

its funny how most people talk about the hot hot moment first😉 it was a pleasure to write 😳

yep scratches of a very very wild night meow. 😆 i find that indicating whats happened with the aftermath is more sexy than the real thing, 😆 cheers.

yep the shiver in the spine moment i call it as there actually was a murderer. thanks for mentioning the hug. i needed one then too, LOL

thanks for liking those moments. 😳 Sj and Aman scenes with khushi i find are really heart touching to write.

awww glad you loved the hot hot scene with the fabrics. about children. you never know , you just never know😉...well i obvisiously do,😆.

thanks i am feeling abit better. aww an angry bird. thats sweeet. loads of people have said that!!😳 guessing that ur gonna call it ASR right😉. wicked.

thanks sooo much for this lengthy comment as they really do mean the world to meee.😳

xxx

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: -maankimishty-
You were right...the update was HOT HOT HOT

Very raw and sexy...

you did an amazing job...loved the whole update...especially the whole big bad wolf thing was really funny with arnav...

oh dear...i was trying to actually imagine it...arnav saying that with a smirk on his face!

hehe...VIP PM LIST...

that just sent me shooting to the stars...

Oh but dear...you deserve these comments...

your update actually makes my day!

It something fun to read!!

Note: I have exams right now...so the next time when you update i might actually not have time to comment but when they finish i will make a long comment! please don't remove me from your PM list though! 😭 I mean what will i do without your updates?

Love

Mishty

thanks so much for the comment. really sweet and appreciative of you. yes i'll keep in mind of ur exms and wont delete you. please post me a scrap so i remember, lol. 😳

thanks again!

xxx

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#968

awesome update zara that was so hot loved it asr was in the pot all the time so cute him still being jealous of that bird loved how he found out there real was a escape murderer need a cold shower after reading the update very hot thank god for pm boxes loved how they played red riding hood and the big bad wolf coming to get her loved it that was awesome thanks for the pm

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: Tishuu
Omg omg omg omg
Thanksss for the dedication and the VIP pm
Omg I love u evermore

Tht was some H...H...O...T...TTT update babes
Wow!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat at all times
Im nt gna mention much about the storyline as such cos I dnt want to spoil it for the ones who havent read it yet

But omggg tht phone call by Aman sent a chill through my spine omggg scarry indeed
And the finding of ASR hahahahaha bless Arnav - for once he must have felt one over ASR cos Khushi forgot and then to find out hes been under his nose all the time
And ROFLMAO at Khushi saying she didnt "Touch" him hahahaha omggg i felt bad for Arnav though
I think its about time she got some taste of her own medicine
And I guess Khushi can get her own back for Arnav scaring her later on
Lol
But Omg the last bit was *speechless*
can't wait for Tuesday and then Thursday
You know I might actually read the whole update again
Hehehehe

Ciao
And keep the good work up babes
P.P.S hope ur feeling much much better and your revision is going better than mine xXx

aww i love you tooo.😊

yep spine shivering timeee. thanks for your reaction

yep writing ASR and arnav moments are really a treat cuz i just LOL reading it back to myself. thanks

thanks for enjoying the last part. magnifico!

your a star and i have missed your long comments like this big time. thanks for taking out the time to write it. cuz when i do find them i'm like

😆

xxx

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oops-whoops

@oops-whoops

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#970

NOW IT WAS WOLF STYLE😉

zara,

u made this worth my 200th post.👏

i dont knw how but u make evn weirdest idea turn into a awsme piece of work.

thnk u fr budding me othrwise i wld have missed this awsme part it was SEXY... HOT...AND we are offically learning positions and places to have a hot sessions😆

ASR- i was wondering whr the hell he was but then u have these wild ideas and u had him in that pot 👏

oh god arnav telling sj it was exhausting 😳 so obvious wen u hav such wild nights and days too it will be exhausting but i am sure he is loving it and we r more then loving it ☺️

now the wolf has tasted the flesh... so will the writer(zara) continue the wild sessions at wild places ???????????

thank u for this update it was awsme loved it ...totally hooked...carry on with such a sexy writing...muahhh