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Banginbengali

@Banginbengali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#871

I absolutely loved your avi...it was just to freakin adorable 😆 lol...thats how I feel when I read your updates lol!! N are you crazy!!??!! Me n not like your updates 😕...Zara dont be stupid...I always live your writing n cant help but comment!! N thank you for always returning our love by givin us such beautiful updates!!

OMG OMG OMHS...this was to bloody hot!!!😳 😳 😳

Khushi seriously gets more n more adorable in each update...the way she asked Arnav was so innocent n cute...n I love how the opposites came out...Arnav feelin Khushi's love in a whole different range was just superb 😳...n aww Khhshi askin after if she was good...n Arnav to bloody sweet...sayin shes good at everythin!! So chweet 😳

OMG the camel part was just epic Zara...seriously nazar na lage tere dimag ko 😆...lol...so freakin hilarious...Khushi askin all those questions...n Arnav answerin all of them in a order was superb...loved that it shows how intently he listens to Khushi 😛...best part was the winkin part...lmao...yes Khushi he'll fall in love with you 😆 lol...n kidnapping lmao!!

The camel ride was superb...Arnav kissin Khushi n namin the camel Iqbal...love that name...*love Iqbal Khan from Kaisa yeh pyar hai*😆 lol anyway...OMG the pool was just bloody beautiful...like wow...Arnav is so sweet..keep on apologizin...n hmmm the pot...!!??!! Why do I feel like Khushi probably put ASR in there!??! 😕! Maybe Im just bein paranoid lol...but aww Arnav starin at Khushi!! Haye!😳

Khushi cryin for Iqbal was to bloody cute...n aww she wanted Arnav to buy it...hahaha lmao...Arnav could have thought where to put it if he really wanted to lol...the I love you part was so sweet!! 😃

Okay Zara that was so not cool...Im here in the night...in my room readin this...my hands were shakin...God I was like freakin out...seriously not cool lol!! :P...but wow the way you wrote it. 👏..first I was like OMG what happened to our poor baby Arnav...n then the whole knockin on Khushis door..n comin in from the window n flingin Khushi on the bed...OMG tearin her clothes I was freakin out!😲! N then when Khushi felt familiar..I took a sigh of relief..but Arnav shouldnt have gotten slapped...more like punched, kicked would have been more like it 😡...he got turned on whenever Khushi smacked him 😆 lmao...ofcourse Arnav...loved how Khushi kept on sayin I hate you...n the last part...ufff...well you know Im blushin!!😳

Superb, suspensfilled update Zara ⭐️...n no you didnt write anything that would offend anyone!! Thank you for the update...this was seriously out of the world good...can't freakin waite for Thursday to see what you have in store for us!!😃

Edited by Banginbengali - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: arhi-fan
Hey zara!
Huh! Wat an update. Nw i can really understand why u were apprehensive n excited to write this update. It was just fabulous.

Hey arnav would hv really gone wild when khushi treated him the same way he had to khushi.

Hey cming to camel ride. It was so nice. Khushi is so cute, childish n naughty . Arnav was rite anyone can fall in love with her n even the camel... Lol. So nt let her go alone. Hey the poolside was just awesome. Though arnav but he would hv really got dstrbed by the sight of khushi in frnt of him.

Khushi was so cute to ask him to buy iqbal. N wats with that pot. Really arnav one in a kind of piece in the world.

Cming to the most shocking n anticipated part. After the illusion of the murderer u had given. For once to i thought khushi is gone. But it turned out to be arnav i was relived n shocked. He shocked khushi n went so wild. It was just superb. But when arnav was unmasked i was really like "wat the".
But must say he is really good at suprises like u.

So no precap. But waiting for the sneak peak. It was really superb update.
Must say this passionate update was full of passion n liked all the scenes a lot. Luv u zara.

Hello! aww thanks yes i'm glad i got to share it with y'all.

aww glad you like arnav's camel comment 😃

i want a camel so i thought khushi wants one too😆

the pot? well you'll find out in the nxt update😉

thanks so much for telling me ur feelings and reaction to the murderer part. really glad😳

precap coming p later 2day. 😊

thanks again for the comment getting lengthy ones like these makes me wanna go

😳

xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: Banginbengali
I absolutely loved your avi...it was just to freakin adorable 😆 lol...thats how I feel when I read your updates lol!! N are you crazy!!??!! Me n not like your updates 😕...Zara dont be stupid...I always live your writing n cant help but comment!! N thank you for always returning our love by givin us such beautiful updates!!

OMG OMG OMHS...this was to bloody hot!!!😳 😳 😳

Khushi seriously gets more n more adorable in each update...the way she asked Arnav was so innocent n cute...n I love how the opposites came out...Arnav feelin Khushi's love in a whole different range was just superb 😳...n aww Khhshi askin after if she was good...n Arnav to bloody sweet...sayin shes good at everythin!! So chweet 😳

OMG the camel part was just epic Zara...seriously nazar na lage tere dimag ko 😆...lol...so freakin hilarious...Khushi askin all those questions...n Arnav answerin all of them in a order was superb...loved that it shows how intently he listens to Khushi 😛...best part was the winkin part...lmao...yes Khushi he'll fall in love with you 😆 lol...n kidnapping lmao!!

The camel ride was superb...Arnav kissin Khushi n namin the camel Iqbal...love that name...*love Iqbal Khan from Kaisa yeh pyar hai*😆 lol anyway...OMG the pool was just bloody beautiful...like wow...Arnav is so sweet..keep on apologizin...n hmmm the pot...!!??!! Why do I feel like Khushi probably put ASR in there!??! 😕! Maybe Im just bein paranoid lol...but aww Arnav starin at Khushi!! Haye!😳

Khushi cryin for Iqbal was to bloody cute...n aww she wanted Arnav to buy it...hahaha lmao...Arnav could have thought where to put it if he really wanted to lol...the I love you part was so sweet!! 😃

Okay Zara that was so not cool...Im here in the night...in my room readin this...my hands were shakin...God I was like freakin out...seriously not cool lol!! :P...but wow the way you wrote it. 👏..first I was like OMG what happened to our poor baby Arnav...n then the whole knockin on Khushis door..n comin in from the window n flingin Khushi on the bed...OMG tearin her clothes I was freakin out!😲! N then when Khushi felt familiar..I took a sigh of relief..but Arnav shouldnt have gotten slapped...more like punched, kicked would have been more like it 😡...he got turned on whenever Khushi smacked him 😆 lmao...ofcourse Arnav...loved how Khushi kept on sayin I hate you...n the last part...ufff...well you know Im blushin!!😳

Superb, suspensfilled update Zara ⭐️...n no you didnt write anything that would offend anyone!! Thank you for the update...this was seriously out of the world good...can't freakin waite for Thursday to see what you have in store for us!!😃

yay! awww thank you. glad u enjoyed khushi'd innocence but also arnav's understanding in my ff.

yes i remember a camel winking at me when i went to Saudi. i was like :O. lol i got kidnapped for a min by the same camel too.😆 weird experiance.

my lil siter has a toy camel called iqbal so i thought i'd slot that in too. 😆

glad you liked the arnav khushi convo about iqbal.😃

the murder part, 😆, well imagine me! after finishing the update it like 2.45 in the morning, i went down stairs to get a drink of water before bed and saw an axe near the door. i was like😲...this is freaky! i rushed back to bed, 😆.

i adore how you mention every part making me feel happy that someone has noticed the tiniest of things and so it was worth writing.😳

Thank you.

xxx

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#874

heya zara..

sorry for the late reply..

aww the update was soo hot...

awesome..

the begiining scene was really hot..

the camel scene was really cute..

the last scene was kinds shocking at first..lol it turned out to be arnav..

many thanks for the pm..: ]

will look forward for the update on thursday..

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mandira1

@mandira1

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#875

For some reason I can't seem to see the update on pg 121😭

Edited by mandira1 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: mandira1
For some reason I can't seem to see the update on pg 121😭

thanks for mentioning. its on pg118. sorry for the mistake.

SNEEK PEEK!!!

The supplier escorted SJ to the other fabric room and shut the door behind him leaving arnav alone in the room. Arnav picked up a pen n pad and started to walk deeper into the fabric room where the drapes and materials hung from rails making the place look very mystical. writing down the fabrics and codes that he saw fit he stopped near the window viewing down upon the city. Suddenly-

Khushi: BOO! *hugging arnav from behind*

Arnav startled : WHAT THE- khushi!?

khushi in the same tone: Arnav?! *giggles*

arnav turned in her arms to stare at her in shock: what...what are you DOING here khushi!? i told you to wait downstairs in the lobby-

khushi pouted: but it sooo boring. so i came up with you lot too. Look at these arnav! * picking up a glittery scarp and swung it around before chucking it in the air*

arnav anger rising: i TOLD you to wait because-

khushi held arnav's face calming him down: I'm fine arnav. really. its not hurting anymore. hmm?

arnav sighed still not satisfied.

as he did his work, he smirked watching khushi prance about hugging and touching the soft materials round the room. after arnav was done he called out to khushi.

arnav: COME ON KHUSHI! WE GOTTA GO. SJ IS PROBABLY WAITING DOWNSTAIRS.

khushi came forward: can't we go a bit later? LOOK! * putting on a red cape and hood* i look like that girl from Pinky's book...Ummm...the riding girl.

khushi then skipped away from arnav deep into the room again. arnav smirked shaking his head in disbelief. he put his pen and pad on the stool beside the door.

Arnav muttering: if your little red riding hood, khushi singh Raizada * pulling off his Silver tie*, then i'm the Big Bad wolf. *devilish grin*

He ran after her.

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Edited by -Zara- - 13 years ago