ArhiFF:Price of freedom Thread 3 (T3) - Page 81

AWW LOVED IT ZARA

Originally posted by: kriya101

OMG when i saw ur pm I was sooo happy to know that u updated👏

FABULOUS UPDATE!!!!😉😃

Loved it from the beginning to the end

Shopping Scene:

the bangle was very preety and how sweet of arnav to choose for khushi. that was the cutest part. Loved arnav's love and care for khushi. U wrote his love beautifully. Arnav is such a sweetheart😳

ASR IS BACK😆😆😆

poor arnav😆 Loved the part of arnavs and the drivers conversation where arnav showed the pic of ASR to confirm his suspicion!!! Khushi is sooo adorable she brought ASR along😆

the garden was beautiful, each of the pics make ur writing come alive it's amazing to see and then read the description😃

HOT😳

that was a very hot part which again made me blush (this time i was alone😆). Arnav's passion for khushi is sooo sweet. u write their passionate scenes in a very subtle and sensuous way. this adds to the romance shared by the two. It's just sooo pure and adorable.

Precap sounds a bit frightening. Hope everything is fine😕 Hope both arnav and khushi are safe. I wonder where arnav is?

Update soon and thanx for the pm

can't wait for the next part

heya zara...

fab update dear...

very well written...

aww khushi wore a traditional dress...very cute..

khushi made arnav go to the market and choose a bangle for her..hats off khushi..only she could make Arnav Singh Raizada do that..and she rewarded him with a kiss on the cheeks..soo sweet...

khushi took the pot arnav had dirty thoughts...lol..

omg arnav has ASR's pic in the enemy's folder...hahaha..
the garden was really beautiful...

haha arnav annoyed at ASR being there on his honeymoon..aww..

their bedroom moment was really hot..

the precap looks scary...why was the front door broken?

will look forward to the update on sunday...

many thanks for the pm..: ]

That was a great update!! Oh no precap sounds scary!!!! Thanks for the PM! xxx

mmmh loved her dress...

Originally posted by: -Zara-

hey!

about the 18+ i honestly dont know when o put itup. i just think anything implying s** is 18+. i honestly dont know when to put the warning up or not.😕but glad you liked it anyways.😆

yay! glad you liked the scenes. thanks.

i cant wait to write te next part too.😳

thank you

xxx

hey!
It didnt meant when u should put up the warning or nt.
I just meant that watever u write is a pleasure to read. Be it anything. Just so excited going to read the next part.!!:)

Hey zara!!

Firstly sry for the late comment. But ya coming after giving my exam opening IF n checking my inbox n finding ur pm just made my day!!

Yr u just a fabulous writer i mean ur my fav. U told u were a lil tired while writing it n then u wrote such a fabulous update. So when ur nt then to the update would be like out of this world.

I really liked khushi's dress. It was so sweet off khushi to take arnav to such a crowded market though arnav wouldnt find it sweet but anything for his khushi.

OMG! Arnav selected a bangle for khushi . Thats so nice. I really liked the simplicity of the bangle. Just perfect for khushi.

Hey so acc. To talk with SJ they r on their honeymoon for only 2 more days. But thats nt a prob.

When khushi went back to bring ASR. I was like" wat the...?"So khushi specially brought ASR back. ASR is so sweet. Arnav dnt be jealous. Hey i really liked the garden.

When u explained wat arnav wanted frm khushi . Then i understood wat exact hints u gave to benginbangali. Wow! Arnav was really demanding;) . It was just superb . Really hot n passionate .

The precap is really mysterious . Really wanna knw wats happening .

Hey hope ur nt ill as u were feeling na!

Update soon.:)

Oulala loved it the precap is scaring though LOL

Hey Zara,