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Posted: 13 years ago
laddoo..n love casanova for supportn khushi wen she needed sum1..n shyam..wel njoy d day..bcz dat z d only day for u to live...arnav is gonna kill u for doing dis...
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Posted: 13 years ago
update was awesum dear...really lovd it:) but that evil smile in precap is scaring...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahh there comes the snakewa gosh😡😡😡😡🤬 let arnav hunt him down and break all his bones...
i loved all arnav and khushi's naugthy moments before this snake came.. casanova explaining how to make perfect laddo 😳 nk is so cute... cant wait to see how arnav is kicking that snake
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Posted: 13 years ago
the beginning was so cutte!

and then it got darkk...

can't wait to see what happens next! continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
evrythings cool and the update is cool ...waitin for the next...
anyways no worries abt shyam... shyam is speaki to asr...arnav singh raizada...he'll learn a lesson
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Posted: 13 years ago
It started off so well.. So cheery and romantic..!

Ending was more scary.. Hope Kushi will not misinterpret Arnav!!

Thanks for the PM..! Precap missing, so please update soon dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: passion1

❤️Fristly Thank you for pm me you'r soo sweet my lovely friend .

And second thank you for the best story give me a nice feeling to read every word is a pleasure
3 - I love when Arnav gives her attention and love and passion and expresses his feelings with the most erotic and naughty now this is the best way to express true love for his most beautiful woman
4 - the love and support and assistance Khushi finding in the family of Arnav will help a lot to catch up Khushi all missed her and the absence of her own parent
5 - Have a friend who makes her feel confidant like kasanova as it will greatly help in Khushi's hard times.👍🏼
The shock for me is when you put the name of Shyme sincerely I do not like it I prefer that you add another name for the character but it's your story soo

I love the reaction of Arnav and fast gesture I think it was a shock for Khushi but she will understand over time that is why Arnav uses his head in this case to find out the true of personality of this Shyme 😡
I'm really enjoy to read word by word it's great truth that I look forward to your next part I want to know : what Arnav going to do?!and how will react with Khushi because she hide what happens with her! when he know that she tell casanova first and has not telling him first! how he will react !! will forgiving khushi esay or difficult!!
I realy can't wait so please update sooonnn thanks again 😍


thankyou sooo much for the delightful colourful lengthy comment. 😳 loved reading your thoughts. i'm glad your actually reading the undercharatcer development, with khushi and the razidada family. really impressed. i know everyone is abit annoyed i put shyam in this, but i have put him here cuz when e's beaten up you can imagine that the shyam in the rel tv serial is also getting beaten up too. best of both worlds.😆
thank you again my friend
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: karisma

u go "arnav and khushi came out the bathroom together" n m like ☺️☺️☺️

n then ". with arnav in his black robe"!!!! made me go🤪 !!
the first line's hardly over n m a goner!!!🤢 white robe..sauna..legs peeking out..☺️all came back in a rush

Casanova n his explanation!!!Phew! that man can even change laddoo-making into sth sensual n sexy 😳LOL!

then that phone call... i ws greedily visualising the details, feeling khushi's indecision/fear/rage/torment and casanova's concern

thk goodness arnav came in n learnt every thg so quickly.that was the best part!👏 how relieving! n he decided to act so quickly.😎 i've got faith in him..he's gonna shred that parasite to pieces m sure!!!

then...he's going to MOROCCO!!!⭐️

YAY!! fantastic update!!really enjoyed it a lot Zara!!

i wonder wot colour the bathrobe wd be this time.. hmmm😍

☺️


yes i find it 😳 imagining arnav in a bathrobe too! yes there will be more in the honeymoon, but i think the what i'm planning for the honeymoon will melt you totally, if your already like that. the diologues i have in my head LOL i'm even blushing. love reading your comments immensly. feels like i can hear you talking, but obviously i dont know how you talk😆 .
thanks for the constant long comments reminding me always whata loyal reader you are thank you.😳
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetvanie

wowww ~Zara~ that was one hell of a update... IT was full of so much different sequence put together... You always do a FAB job to this FF... "Now i wanna know whats gonna happen with that creap shyam and Arnav...the guy is in total ASR mode which is not good...shyam is either gonna get killed or injured..." "All of the parts from beginning was too good, espically Cassanova...he is a sweet friend but when the creap call's khushi that sounds scary...yuckkkiee... !!!!!" "Please make the bad phase go away and let the beautiful moments come back "... It was indeed a awesome update and

THANKS TONS FOR THE PM ~zara~... always ...!!!!!!!!


aww thanks for the sweet comment, very thankful.😳

"Please make the bad phase go away and let the beautiful moments come back "...
you can bet on this😉
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Banginbengali

Oh my fudgin brilliant goodness...this was the best by far...n I say that like in all your updates but this was so good Zara...full of suspense n fear!! 👏

Ufff...shower together...!!!Round 2!??? 😳! lmao...only Arnav...n he is to freakin hot n sweet...gettin saris for Khushi n sayin that its his right...awww...n Khushi is just so cute always blushin!!! Loved how Khushi went n changed in the bathroom...lmao...yea Arnav probably woul not have been helpin her gettin dressed lol!! 😆 How Aditya n Anjali hugged them was so cute..I just can't get over Aditya..wish he really came on the show!!!! Lol...n aww Khushi cookin n servin everyone so cute!! SJ n Ferny lmao...no its not the perfume but the food...haha! 😆! N Arnav teasin Khushi...n the kangan scene was just so pure!! Nani givin Khushi Arnav's moms blessin was just so swweeettt...n beautiful!! 😊
Awww Khushi n SJ cryin...he sure is a wet teddy bear love him...n Arnav can't get over how sweet n hot he is at the same time...wanna hubby like him lmao!! 😆 Him adoring the kangans n ofcourse its a perfect fit.. n tellin her the plan...n Khushi just adorable tellin him that she is a bahu now n has responsibility...n Arnav ofcourse gets his way 😉...lol...to sweet!! Him tellin Khushi that he'll have to eat up her cheeks if they get any redder awww...!! 😳 😛
Cassanova 😆 lmao...he never lets me down for a good joke lmao...to damn funny..n Khushi actually got it 😲...WOW...lmao at how she stopped him n NK from makin anymore!! n Khushi wanted to tell Arnav ...n the call...uggg hate him poor Khushi...Cassanova he was there for her!!!
Finally Arnav knows yeah!!! Poor Khushi wants to keep everyone safe...n OMG Shyam u SICKO...PSYCHO...LUUUNNEYYY...GOD if I ever find himmm...gonna uggg...PERVE!!!! 😡 Okay I think Im done...I know Arnav won't sell of his Khushi...he is a smart businessman...so Shyam was one of the bidders for Khushi n have been stalking her ever since...what a sick sick guy!!! 🤢 Time for some serious but kickin by all the guyz...n Khushi can smack him black n blue..will be with them in spirit!!😃 lol!
Zara you are evil..jk...no precap...but I guess that's good!! More suspense...can't freakin waite to see what happens next...you seriously should think of becomin a CV or actually publish this it is a damn good story 👏...lovin it!! Thank you for the PM...hope your headache went away...if not I know my comment will make it even worse 😆 lol!! FANTABULOUS update!!! ⭐️


OMG! how do you make be go :') with such beautiful cmments. thank you😳 soglad you highlighted the parts you loved (practically all of it, awww). yes shyam physco but i'll let you into a little secret. the last time you will hear of shyam will be the next pt.😉. lol if you keep giving me long comment like these i always have to give you tiny spoiler/sneaks, 😆.
thank again girlfriend.
xxx

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