#1 The Chronicles Of Khushi Gupta C17 ON THREAD 2 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice "title" pic its really apt. :) (don't really know what to call it.)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Can we have a update please?

*innocent-Khushi-eyes*

PLEASE???
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have writers block... i've written it down but i'm not sure how good it is... the Kiss-no kiss scene is bugging me.. 😆
Edited by Firebolt - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Firebolt

i have writers block... i've written it down but i'm not sure how good it is... the Kiss-no kiss scene is bugging me.. 😆



ill tell you how it is before it is posted or read...its going to be good!!!!!just update...i wanna read it!!!!
im gonna log off now...so can you pweesh update tomorow so i have a better chance of reserving???lolz...im just kidding...im not gonna be able to reserve coz i plan on taking a break from I-F for a 2-3 days coz of a test..:(
But still UPDATE!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DM1810



ill tell you how it is before it is posted or read...its going to be good!!!!!just update...i wanna read it!!!!
im gonna log off now...so can you pweesh update tomorow so i have a better chance of reserving???lolz...im just kidding...im not gonna be able to reserve coz i plan on taking a break from I-F for a 2-3 days coz of a test..:(
But still UPDATE!!!!


Tell you what as a "Best-of-luck-i-know-exactly-how-you-feel" present i'll dedicate the chapter to you! Savvy?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read the whole story in one go.
Oh-My-God! You are AMAZING!
This is so so so good. I love the way you wrote it like the Princess Diaries. And Khushi is just awesome. And I'm in love with this Arnav. So much that my heart did a little dhak dhak everytime there was an encounter between Arnav and Khushi. And I lurrvveee this story! Please update soon-ish. Moi cannot wait to read the next chapter! Also, can I post a summary of what I loved about each chapter later-ish(Have an English test to study for)? Till then, let it suffice that I bow down to you for writing such an amazing(and hilarious) story! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just discovered your ff and read the whole thing in one go. I love it. I have always admired authors that can take Arnav and Khushi and place them in different setting and produce results. I've read many stories in the college/university scene and truth be told none have captivated me like this one. This one has the perfect combination of drama, romance, suspense and lots of comedy.
The writing style that you picked is absolutely perfect. It makes Khushi a much more personal character and gives us a peek in the maddness that is Khushi's brain!!
Some questions that I have are:
1. What's going on with Arnav and La? Are they just really good friends or does La want something more?
2. Are Arnav and Akash brothers?
3. Did Arnav ever get his jacket back? You know, the one that he have Khushi when she was drunk?
p.s. Your quotes are so funny!! Keep 'em commin'
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Posted: 13 years ago
YAYYY, you updated 😃

Firstly, brilliant, BRILLIANT update, I think best diary entry till date by Khushi 😊

Really like the initial part where Khushi is worried about her family's financial problems.
And also the Shyam meeting. She is so feisty. Although I wonder what he might tell her in his defense .
And then the KISS. You say it is not your forte, are you mad. It was perfect, really. The hesitance, Arnav's insanity 😉 and Khushi's wobbly knees. Perfect. In the middle of a deserted road, hayye 😳

Loved the quote too :)

Thank you so much for this fabulous update and that goes without saying, update soon 😊



Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have a smile plastered on my face after reading this chapter!
Girl, you surely are blessed with writing skills :P
Now,coming to the part where
THEY KISSED!OMG! that surely gave me goosebumps!
"Giving up."

With that he leaned in brushing his lips against mine. It was slight brush but I felt like my entire body was on fire.

I read that line thrice to actually absorb that he Kissed her!I'm already waiting for the next part and her Diary entry for the day after!
Will the financial problem part take any troll on Khushi's studies? make her join another job maybe?? just wondering(that's all i can do 😆)
Shyam, no matter what i will hate him!
Was the kiss indirectly showing his dominance on Khushi! I would hate it if she becomes/assumes she is a pawn between them!

Also, i lost my previous ID,, please accept my buddy request!😃

PS: i love your Author notes!🤗
Edited by .Kryptonite. - 13 years ago

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