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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

its great how you have shown N's concern and love.. And finally Armaan is letting AN be by themselves.. thats good..

and now he realises IT :D eating nails thinking is he going to let go of this moment too or make somehting out of it :)

Hey Pri 😊 ,
Yes , honestly , Armaan needs to let them be by themselves . It was high time he did that and it was N's responsibility to convince him .
And finally , he realizes that "she" is in love with him . He knew it all the while ; but his prejudices were too strong to see her in any other light.
@bold part , Haa haaa haa . Lets see what he does with the moment .
Thanks a lot and you have a great weekend ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

@Rucha , Good to see you back. Yes , it did end up on an interesting point , did it not ?And no ! I know you will not be disappointed to read this , but Armaan is NOT going to make an entry anymore. He has made peace with her (and them) now (mercifully).

Will try to update soon .

@Muniii , Thank you so much . Abhi will not show his sadness anymore or push her away ... He will get there ; but of course , the road to contentment is long and complex 😉

@bold 👏 @pink ... I dont watch any other show on TV because of the bankrupy of creative ideas that these so called creative people show .. IF AN story has spark of its own it dsnt need tricks like Sid falling for Nikki or Armaan barging in at the last moment ! I hate most TV show becuase as soon as the main charaters get married the creatives to strech the story star showing saas trouble .. or never let main characters get married .. how sily is that ... given the original chartecs thre is so much to show even after marraige u know adjustment problesm , diffrent idologies , small fights , big fights ... (but no stupid irrational things)... a real HUM-TUM kinda problem ... a problem becuase boys will be boys and girls will be girls. And somewhere it shows that girls dont have individuality after marraige because immediately after marraige Nikki will become a mangalsutra and sari clad giving sacrificing housewife ... like hello ?
Ok i know im ranting ... but i am tired of demeaning characterlisation of women ... so how does it apply here ... 😳 hehhe dont know .. just a thought of a cliched scene triggered my anger against creative bankrupcy !
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Posted: 13 years ago
I dont know if I shd say it here... but I am sick of how demeaningly women are characterised on Tv shows .. they will always be salwar clad idiots from small town and the guys will be oxford passed hunks. These girls wld do demeaning jobs of secretaries because of course women cant be in manegerial jobs and then their firey punjabi nature will win the heart of the oxford grad bloke because of course all other females around this guy wld be shiny mini skirt clad girls ... that too not normal mini's but those shiny things u only wear to discs ..., isnt it obvious he'd fall for the vilage idiot ... and the moment theyget married the village idiot will move to wearing more hedious clothes than before shiny sarees , mangal sutra , chapte baal and maang mein sindoor and they will turn into sacrificing girls ... doing the bidding of their saas and trying to keep the family together . And payng more attention to their devar , nanad , saas sasur mailman milk man than their husbands ... yawnnn ! Why the hell did DMG end ... Hotel Kingston and DMG were the only shows where females had strong characters.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Totally agree with goldie. Don't know why women have to be shown as the ultimate sacrificaial lamb as soon as they get married with their torturing inlaws and meek husbands! Iv been married for 9 years and my mother in law had high expectations of me but soon as she realised I wasn't the ever cooking and cleaning type she left me to it and accepted me the way I am. Don't know why they don't show a bit of realism. Th reason I liked DMG was because Female characters like Anjali, Muskaan, Nikki, Ridz, and Keerti were strong modern characters and in many cases had an upperhand over there partners. That is reality! In my opinion a woman is always stronger in a relationship because no matter how educated or arrogant her husband is the woman he loves is nearly always his weak point.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Missy-rc

. Th reason I liked DMG was because Female characters like Anjali, Muskaan, Nikki, Ridz, and Keerti were strong modern characters and in many cases had an upperhand over there partners

Well said
. That is reality! In my opinion a woman is always stronger in a relationship because no matter how educated or arrogant her husband is the woman he loves is nearly always his weak point AWW.

These SLD clones on TV are an insult to the modern women
and degradtion of one character is an insult to audience brains.
I have written an OS on AN after marraige just to show how their nok jhok , love and problems continue after marraige.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mitzi and Missy , loved reading your interesting posts . Needless to say , I completely agree with you . I think the best representation of Indian women came in some of the serials on Doordarshan . Serials like Hum Log , Udaan , Rajni , Ye jo hai Zindagi , etc .
After that , with a couple of exceptions , its always been the same cliched stuff .
And Missy , wow , reading your posts all this while , I don't know why I got the impression that you are a student or something such 😊 . That was a pleasant surprise .
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Part 16

Part 17
In the depths of your eyes
Let me seek my reflection
Let me into your darkest fears
I promise to give you everything I can
I promise to be there for you
Beautiful 👏


He'd been feeling uncharacteristically hungry the whole day and for the last few minutes or so , he'd been extremely overcome with tiredness too . Plainly put , he wasn't used to so much physical exertion . He leaned against the chair and closed his eyes and just a minute later fell into a deep slumber. Nikki took turns to watch them both sleeping , thoroughly amused at how childlike they seemed when asleep . The Modi men were surely blessed with good looks and equally good personalities and then that tenderness and sensitivity , that was never overwhelming . She sighed softly . Why could Armaan and her friends not see Abhi for the way he was ? Why did they always and so annoyingly dwell on the unpleasant aspects of his personality ? She looked at her watch , thinking that in a little while Armaan would probably be there . Well , this was a start . Armaan was trying to accept her love for Abhi and trying to set aside his prejudices . If only Abhi wasn't so rigid with his dislike for her friends ' Well , she couldn't blame him for that . They had caused him so much discomfort all the while and he was just being human in his dislike for them .
She leaned against the bed's head rest and closed her eyes, only to open them with a start as she heard Abhi shifting uncomfortably , his face tensed into an expression of severe unpleasantness and his lips pursed in a manner as if he was saying "No" . Maybe he was having a bad dream or a vision of the accident , Nikki thought to herself and caught his palm and soothed it gently . She placed her other palm on his forehead and bent over him ."Sssh Abhi , its OK . Everything is fine . I am right here ." , she said tenderly.

Aww so sweet
She could see him absorb her words , could see his body relax with the coolness of her touch and the assurance of her soft voice . She continued to caress his face gently and calm him down tenderly and stopped only when she saw him relax completely and be drawn into that peaceful sleep again . She bent down and placed a very feathery kiss on his forehead her heart brimming with love.

"Waah Nikki !" , Armaan said cheekily and Nikki couldn't stop herself from blushing. She gently let her fingers free and walked up to them and gave them a hug one by one .

"Exactly Armaan . Its half past four . And we also need to let Dr Modi rest , don't we Nikki ?" , here she looked at Nikki , blinking her eyes sweetly .
Nikki caught the twinkle in those eyes and inadvertently blushed .
"Come on Armaan , lets go . It was nice meeting you Dr Modi . Please take care ." , she said and stood up .
"Dr Modi , wish you a speedy recovery .Sanjeevani needs you ." Armaan said subtly and shook hands with Abhi , indirectly telling him that he had finally accepted him as the rightful boss of Sanjeevani) as Nikki looked at them all , a smile on her lips .

I Like it

He bent his head and saw himself looking back right into her big , black eyes .
Why was he out of the bed ? For a few seconds , he wasn't even able to recollect the reason . Her disheveled beauty and unforced concern, had trapped him again . He gently touched her cheek and saw her eyes close for a split second . It was easy to see how his touch affected her . He remembered the day they were locked up in the lab and how he had felt this immense attraction for her , a pull that defied all logic and reasoning . He could feel the pull again , but this time , it wasn't random or unreasonable . Very slowly he brought his face close to her and watched how Nikki's eyes closed on their own . Her innocence and surrender was so endearing . He kissed her softly and felt her fingers shiver against his arm . How could she do this every time ? Break him up so easily !
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very nice,sweet,cute part Pra loved it
Edited by jsdoll - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Mitzi and Missy , loved reading your interesting posts . Needless to say , I completely agree with you . I think the best representation of Indian women came in some of the serials on Doordarshan . Serials like Hum Log , Udaan , Rajni , Ye jo hai Zindagi , etc .

After that , with a couple of exceptions , its always been the same cliched stuff .
And Missy , wow , reading your posts all this while , I don't know why I got the impression that you are a student or something such 😊 . That was a pleasant surprise .

Those were maybe the last shows showing strong women ..nowdays the so called strong women all need their prince charming to help them🤢
nowdays shows , show that the female character wants to become a collector or lawyer but end up becoming efficient housewives and have no guts to break the shackles and live their dreams ... its sick that people watch these shows .
And right abt the comment to Missy too , I was under the same impression 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Jibsi sweetie , thanks so much for the lovely comment and all those cute smileys . I am so touched . It means a serious lot to us 😊
@Mitzy , yes , unfortunately , even if someone tries to come up with something different (Rishta.com was one such program ) , people don't accept it or still worse , even watch it
@immayurfan , thanks again
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
JS great work again ...par woh chota sa couch ..uspe sid soya tha Nikki nahi 😆 Prash you happy to become a senior member ... great ... I ma here worried ..my posts are reaching 2000 and i don't wanna be declared an I-F addict ...shit ... I used to have a life !😛

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