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jibreen

@jsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

reserved 👏

loving it finally surprise agaya now waiting for the next part plz try to update it by tomorrow or day after tomorrow plz 😊

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mitzification

@mitzification

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

aww Js thats so sweet thanks a lot yaar ... nahi to u know Prash is writing a masterpiece here ... and i just feel there are so few people to appreciate that i feel bad a t times ...

but ur effort tells us its worthy for us to put an effort ...

As a writer sometimes u dont get to enjoy all the twist that a reader gets to enjoy ... u know , so it becomes a labour of love ... u love doing thins but ...it takes a lot of labour ehhehehe

I hope im conveying it properly to u .

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piya-jiya

@piya-jiya

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Wow lovely update

hope abhi is fine

Update next part soon want to see how Nikki is going to reacts

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

wow, good to see the scene that had so much potential which was ruined by SLD being picked out here.. That was one hot and intense scene :) Finally they give in to their feelings...

Sid is helping these two in so many ways... and in turn he is showing that he is growing up too :) i hope abhi notices it more often instead of just thinking of him as just careless brother..

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Aah so both of them are restless.. I like how you portray those emotional details..

Oh and this whole Anjali thing.. its interesting to see that even after this long time he doesnt know how to feel about these things.. and N isnt realising his unhappiness or say discomfort in her happiness that she feels to see changed A.. Perfect situation for more misunderstandings, angst and intensity :)

Btw now i think Sid is treading on thin ice, if he interferes too much it might back fire, for him and for AN too :) So far he is good but if this whole accident is some kind of setup then he is gone :) Fingers crossed because however this is going to go, its going to turn, Sid is going to be one end up hurt. (either because A really has had an accident or when AN get to know about his drama)

looking fwd to see where it is going next.. So far you have kept me really entertained.. thanks.

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Thanks Pri was waiting for ur comments ...

I like people who put some brain into thinking what will happen next in the story ... i do it all the time :)

But no need to worry dear Sid is sweet like in DMG but not stupid or irritating !

And where are my soul sisters Ruch and Nehu ... this update is incomplete without your comments ... I-F is boring withouth you guys .. Pls come back ... you guys are keeping AN alive ... else ..

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Frustration and longing
That's all you give to me

How I wish I could ignore what you do to me

And how I wish I could ignore you

But even my wishes refuse to listen to me

They have found a new master in you
⭐️⭐️⭐️
Lovely Poem.😃

Oh.. Niki n her friends..*sigh* no comments! dnt wna spoil my mood..move on.😆

"Oh ' So that is the reason you want to leave early ?" , there was an hint of accusation in his voice which went completely unnoticed by Nikki .

I was smiling widely at this part..😃

The next morning , all along her journey from home to Sanjeevani , she thought of Abhi . Even the slightest memory of how he had kissed her with so much passion and that too twice , made her blush and ended up shooting her heartbeat a few notches higher .

And I so agree wid Nikki.;)

You know , don't even think of falling in love and specially with someone who is essentially very very sadu and high minded . You may get attracted to such serious types ; but trust me , this attraction will go nowhere . Such serious people are no good for people like you and me . They will only ruin your life and that too without you realizing it . Don't laugh . ."
😆😆

awww...😍😳

And much to her relief , she saw him standing there , visibly worried himself and when he saw her , she was sure she could see similar relief on his face . So , he was fine and thank God for that and he was worried for her well being too. She stayed where she was , desperately wanting him to come up to her.

Sid's plnning? or really he met with an accident.? 🤔
😕
Nikki's eyes widened and she read the message an exact 5 times to make sure that she had understood its content right . Abhi met with an accident ? Her Abhi met with an accident ?

awesome job.. 👏 I have exams.. so sorry..abt short comments.
🤗

Edited by ANrucha - 13 years ago

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jibreen

@jsha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Pra next part plz u know na i can't wait more for this part plz update soon me and my kitty is begging u plz

Edited by jsdoll - 13 years ago

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Awww JS lol ...finally saw ur kitty ... all i cld see was ur fish ...thats so sweet ... so cute ...

Yaar Prash's net has crashed so there will be a little delay ... par jyada nahi ... so chillax ... You know naa how she updates regularly ...

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: piya-jiya
Wow lovely update
hope abhi is fine

Update next part soon want to see how Nikki is going to reacts

Thanks Muni . Glad you liked the part . We are working on the next part . internet , then some other issues . Too many things going on ...

Will definitely try and update by tomorrow pakka ...

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: anotheranfan
wow, good to see the scene that had so much potential which was ruined by SLD being picked out here.. That was one hot and intense scene :) Finally they give in to their feelings...

Sid is helping these two in so many ways... and in turn he is showing that he is growing up too :) i hope abhi notices it more often instead of just thinking of him as just careless brother..

***

Aah so both of them are restless.. I like how you portray those emotional details..

Oh and this whole Anjali thing.. its interesting to see that even after this long time he doesnt know how to feel about these things.. and N isnt realising his unhappiness or say discomfort in her happiness that she feels to see changed A.. Perfect situation for more misunderstandings, angst and intensity :)

Btw now i think Sid is treading on thin ice, if he interferes too much it might back fire, for him and for AN too :) So far he is good but if this whole accident is some kind of setup then he is gone :) Fingers crossed because however this is going to go, its going to turn, Sid is going to be one end up hurt. (either because A really has had an accident or when AN get to know about his drama)

looking fwd to see where it is going next.. So far you have kept me really entertained.. thanks.

Hey Pri , happy to see your detailed comment . And I am not at all sure why I cannot "Like" it . I tried at least 20 times and gave up finally . But you should know I liked it a lot 😊 and Loved it as usual and as Mitzi says , it is really a satisfying experience to see people spend time thinking on the story . That's how I read stuff too .

Love all the observations you pick up along the way . Very nice and Abhi noticing Sid's growing up . Haa haa . Good point . He is not going to notice it in a normal way . One day it will probably strike him like a thunderbolt 😃.

@bold part , Bingo . You got it spot on . It was kind of difficult to put it in words but that was exactly what I was intending to say.

Hmm , and yes , Mitzi and I don't want to make Sid annoying or interferring . I am sure you guys will continue to like him even as the FF progresses.

And I am so glad this is keeping you entertained . Will try our best to continue doing the same.

Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago