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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

great update dear.plz pm me next lov u 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow awesome update... waiting for d next update... thanku for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
will read and comment...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome😉 bt hope rahul isnt a thorn between them!!!😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

woow that was an



really love ther frendship ..its so rocking ...
the way he reacted ...thinking she forgot her
bday ..😆
was cute ...😳



glad that janvi is ...succeeding in her goal...👏
eagerly waiting for rahuls entry 😳

nice job frend⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear..😛.
...4 PMing me..😃.
...updates...😃
.. 4 ur GR8 work..👏👏.
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
n Last Wishing u
Happy Mother's Day...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

(THANKS AKKI FOR THE BANNER)

A short flashback starts here, 12 yrs ago, a family head Mr. Sitaram Choudhary of delhi is getting ready to go for his own company, as he is managing director of that company, his wife Mrs. Meera choudhary is preparing the breakfast, and they had two sons, elder son rahul choudhary,


smart, quiet, obedient and consistent and the younger is rohit choudhary,

naughty, obedient to his bro than his parents, who is younger than rahul for 5 yrs. Mom very sticky to the religious beliefs but very affectionate towards her elder son.


Dad very responsible for the family and thinks abt the future than the present, is heading to his office, his main aim is to make his company a well reputed one, and to lead a rich life in the capital of our country, and he succeeded in his aim within 5 yrs. Rahul's child hood friend pratap was very close to him, and he shared everything to him. Rohit had many friends as he is very naughty he used to chat with a big gang. Till 12th rahul and pratap were together, then rahul went abroad for his studies, and pratap's family migrated to Mumbai. Rohit felt upset at his brother's absence. So he went to his

aunt (mom's didi) shoba's home in Mumbai where he had huge family members to enjoy with especially his another brother siddharth(shoba's son)

, he continued his education there.

And in Delhi his mom and dad were busy in raising their status of life as well as missing their sons. And now rahul is 23, and he is returning to his motherland to see his parents, dear brother, and his best friend after completing his MBA.

Janvi went for shopping to buy some books as she was not staying in private hostel she is free to move out and she found pratap there in Delhi, she called him "baiya"

Hi janvi, how r u?

Im fine, wat abt u

Am gud

U..? Here.?

S janvi,. My bst frnd rahul is returning to india today so I came here to receive him.

That's fine.

How are ur studies going on?

Very gud...and how was the work going on?

Ur dream is getting ready fantastically

But I hav to thank u for that

It's my pleasure, it's getting late, I have to leave.

Ya, I too have to leave.

Take care, bye.

Hav a gud time with Ur frnd, bye.

Janvi went to hostel and received a msg from krish that he reached Mumbai, and janvi called him back and said abt pratap. But he decided to go through the work in a short period. To his shock he found sasha had quitted her delhi college to stay wit her parents. He visited sasha's home and enquired abt her decision. And her only answer was to stay with her parents in Mumbai, now krish understood she had visited him before the day of his birthday but she left without saying, and she also said she'll report abt the works of ashram to him and janvi. Janvi also came to know abt her decision and enquired her but her answer was the same.

Pratap reached the airport and was waiting for his friend's entry. Rahul arrived there dressed in a pure American style with coolers in escalator, and pratap found him grown smart, and handsome. Rahul was surprised to see his frnd there, they left to his home, where his mom took aarti for him and welcomed him. And his dad hugged him and he had a warm welcome there, but he couldn't find his dear brother there, then his mom said that he is in Mumbai in his aunt's home. His dad enquired abt his studies and he too decided to take up his dad's job. But his dad wished that he could enjoy for some days and then could take charge of all these responsibilities, his mom too wished the same. He agreed and asked pratap abt his work, pratap said abt his big project and he is doing that for a good cause, rahul felt very happy.

Pratap left to Mumbai, krish returned to dehradun, and janvi was busy in her final exams, and she is heading to her 2nd yr of her doctoral studies and krish too succeeded in it. Pratap was busy in his work, and one day sasha came there, and pratap said hi

Hello

How r u

Im fine, and how was the work going on?

Very fine. I thought of asking u one thing

Hmmm, ask

Y u left such a gud college

She dropped her head towards the ground and took some time for answering, and she said slowly, "its for u"

He felt confused and asked "wat do u mean?"

I mean I love u

Don't joke

Im not joking, its true, im in love wit u, I came here to be wit u

But,.

Plz,try to understand my feelings.

Sasha u r confused, I came here to work for ur frnd janvi

I wont spoil ur work, I'll support u

No sasha, I don't want to spoil the belief of janvi

But u cant break my heart

It may be just attraction, plz change ur thoughts.

I don't think its just attraction, the day when I saw u in janvi's b'day, I was disturbed, and ur motive to help her made me fell in love with u, and now I left my future and crossed miles for one and only u.

Pratap gazed at her for a while. He fell in love with her innocent face and smiled at her. Sasha came near him and hugged him tightly expressing her immense love. Pratap kissed her and accepted her love.


Then they had grt time together, and one day he received a phone call from his frnd rahul that he have reached Mumbai too see his brother, and pratap too joined him to see rohit. When he stepped in, rohit ran and came near him. He hugged him with affection. Then rahul started to enquire abt his academic progress, he left the question and started to say abt his frnd,

Baiya, u know, I am having a frnd, he is as such lik me, we hav more similarities, he is naughty lik me, I lov my brother, and he too lov his sister, I hav met him this yr only, he is new to this school, he is staying in hostel and studying. We had a grt time this yr, and marks even we'll score the same, he is such a good boy, daily he'll wait for me near the school gate, and we'll go to class together, and evening also till my car arrives, he'll wait with me, then only he'll go to his hostel room. I hav many frnds but he is my best frnd.

Such a big explanation,.. Whats his name? asked rahul to his brother rohit..

Tharun, but his pet name is munna, I used to call him the same, but actually pratap baiya, he doesn't hav parents, they died in an accident, but u know, his sister is very affectionate to him it seems, he used to talk a lot abt his sister, I doesn't know her name even but I hav to meet her once.

Her name is janvi, I know her and ur frnd too, rahul,I hav said abt my project right, she is the owner of that,.

Is it so,that's grt.

Rahul received a call frm his dad that her mom fell down from stairs, so he left soon to delhi. He decided to never leave his mom alone and also appointed 5 more servants in addition to 15 in his home.

COMING UP: ASHRAM INAUGURATION

HIT THE LIKE AND POST UR COMMENTS..

Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago
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THANK U AKKI FOR THE BANNER,...

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