The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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saiqa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

love this update...we got a bit as to what khushi was thinking before she got married and y

and loved her attitude at the end...

thanks for the pm

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christmas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

it keeps building up...you really write splendidly!..continue soon!

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

when are you gonna update next ? eagrly waiting for you.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Loving it...Interesting story build up...i dont want to miss ur updatees..do pm me please...

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

This is a really nice story, I love the plot so far

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Loving the story so far especially a fiesty Khushi :)

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Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Great update!

Enjoyed reading it!

Continue soon and thanks for the PM!

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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

The more I read this story the more I like it, it's a great concept. and I think you've got arnav and khushi's characters down! Arnav's sweet but still has his edge and khushi still has her feistiness despite her situation :) I like how you're building up the relationship between them aswell instead of just jumping straight in, gives the story a good flow. All in all it was a great update and I hope this counts as A 'good long juicy review' because I can't wait to read more! Thanks again for the pm!
P.s. near the end was what khushi was about to say something big or was it about her fear if the dark?