~*KAHANI PYAAR KII PART 1*~ SUJAL KASHISH - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Kamna & kriti thanx 4 liking the part
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
haan R.S we totally understand.. jab bhi time mile tab continue karna.. hum intezaar karenge..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guyz here is the story.
i know that its the shortest part of the story per abhi issi se kaam chala lo jaldi he lamba part post kerne ki koshish karugi.

Sujal stops the car.
Kashish car se utarti hai.

K- thanx 4 the lift.
S- pleasure is all mine.Bye
K- bye.

sujal tab tak rukta hai jab tak ki kashish building k ander chali nahi jati then he also leaves 4 hospital.

Now kashish was in her house.
(Kashish akeli rehti hai uss ki family hai per wo phir bhi akeli hai kashish k liye uss ki family M/s aki charu & Sharman hai)

She was sitting on the bed & was thinking abt sujal.

K- kitni badi ghalti ki hai maine bina kuchh jane sujal sir ko blame kiya (konsi nayi baat hai wo to tum her baar kerti ho? lol)
K- kya sochte honge sir mere bare main?k kesi ladki hai?
K- mujhe to un ka shukriya ada kerna chahiye tha k unho ne sharman ki jaan bachai per maine to ulta unpe he ilzam lagaya.
K- pata nahi sir car mian mujh se kya baat kerna chahte the?
K- agar unho ne mujhe job se nikal diya to?
K- nahi sir aese nahi hain per baat kya kerna thi sir ko?

Here kashish was thinking abt sujal & there in car sujal was thinking abt kashish.

S- aaj to sorry nahi ker saka per kal zaroor baat karuga kashish se.
S- per kashish kya baat kerna chahti thi mujhse?
S- pata nahi konsi baat thi k kashish itna soch rahe thi?
S- hospital main bhi kashish mujh se kuchh kehna chahti thi per keh na saki.
S- phir car main bhi wo wo kuchh uljhi uljhi si lag rahe thi.
S- pata nahi kya baat hogi?
S- kal kashish se poochhonga.

After sum time sujal hospital pohanch jata hai.
Sujal enters in sharman's room where akshat was w8ing 4 him.

sujal bina aahat k ander jata hai sharman so raha hota hai & aki uss k paas betha hota hai.

Sujal akshat ko aahista awaz main bulat hai k kahin sharman jag na jaye.

S- Akshat

Akshat who was luking @ sharman luks @ sujal who was standing little far frm bed.
akshat uth k sujal k paas jata hai.

S- haan akshat to kya baat kerna thi tum ko?
A- kuch khas nahi bas tumhe meeting k bare main inform kerna tha.
S- kya sirf yahi baat thi?

Akshat sujal se nazren churate hue kehta hai.

A- haan bas yahi bat thi.
S- akshat we r frnds u can tell me wht the matter?

Akshat looks @ him.sujal nods his head in yes so that aki can tell him whts wrong with him.

A- tum kese insaan ho sujal?
S- kya matlab hai tumhara?
A- kese insaan ho? anjan ho k bhi apne se lagte ho.
A- hamen mile waqt he kitna hua hai? per phir bhi tum mujhe achhi tarah se samajhte ho.
A- mujhe koi baat pareshan ker rahe hai ya main khush hu ya udaas hu tum kese jan jate ho?

sujal thoda sa muskurata hai.

S- akshat main rishto se anjaan hu k rishte kese hote hain? kese nibhaye jate hian?
S- mujhe kabhi moka he nahi milsaka k main rishto ko nibhaon.
S- hamesha mera her rishta mujhse chhinta aaraha hai.
S- ab jab mujhe tumhara saath mila hai to mujhe ek baar phir se moka mila rishta nibhane ka.
S- aur main sirf wohi ker raha hu.sirf dosti ka rishta uss ka farz ada ker raha hu.

Akshat sujal ki baten sun k hansta hai.

A- fikar mat karo sujal itni aasani se peechha chodne wala nahi hu main ab to tumhe apni poooooorrrrrrriiii zindagi ye rishta nibhana hoga.

sujal & aki smiles & then hug each other.
Phir akshat sujal ko meeting k bare main batata hai .
& thodi der baten kerte hain phir akshat jane k liye uthta hai.
to sujal uss ko derwaze ak chhodne aata hai.

A- ok then sujal kal office main mulaqat hogi.
S- theek hai.
A- bye.
S- bye.

Akshat turns to leave but phir se sujal ki taraf mudta hai.

A- a.... sujal
S- kya hua? kuchh kehna hai?
A- nahi.... haan .. wo
S- akshat kya baat hai?
A- sujal wo kashish k behaviour k liye im so..
S- akshat maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha hai k uss sab amin kashish ki koi ghalti nahi hai.
S- maine he kuchh ziyada ker diya hai.
A- nahi sujal tumne jo bhi kiya wo......
S- AKSHAT maine kaha na.
A- haan per.....
S- akshat ham iss bare main pehle bhi office main baat ker chuke hian na ab mujhe iss bare main kuchh nahi kehna aur nahi sun-na hia.
A- u know sujal ur the best.
S- & ur gr8.
A- ofcourse im akshat the gr8.

Both smile & then akshat leaves & sujal goes back to sharman.

Do comments 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
Suri thanx 4 understanding yar,
per abhi ye chota part likha hai
issi se kaam chalao.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
theek hain R.S abhi ke liye maine is chote se part se kaam chala liya hain.....aur hamesha ki tarah it was very good.... 👏 agle part mein tum plz sujal ,kashish ke baare mein likhna... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 ..wah jiii..kya baat hai...sujal itna achaaaaa......hayeeeeeeeee 😳 😳 😆 ....continue soon aur sujal kashish ki baat to karwao....naye dula dulhan ki tarah sharma rahe hain 😛 😛 😉 ..continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
R.S. luvly sotry...awwn sujal z so sweet...he still thinks dat it waz his fault...n so sweet of him 2 take care of sharman.....keep up da gud work....ur story rox!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Jyothi Kamna Kriti thanx 4 liking the part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

👏 👏 👏 ..wah jiii..kya baat hai...sujal itna achaaaaa......hayeeeeeeeee 😳 😳 😆 ....continue soon aur sujal kashish ki baat to karwao....naye dula dulhan ki tarah sharma rahe hain 😛 😛 😉 ..continue soon 👏 👏

Array farah jii sujal to hai he bohaaaaat achha.

baten kar wadenge itni jaldi kya hai? wese bhi dula dulhan to banege per kya pata ban na payen?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

theek hain R.S abhi ke liye maine is chote se part se kaam chala liya hain.....aur hamesha ki tarah it was very good.... 👏 agle part mein tum plz sujal ,kashish ke baare mein likhna... 😃

Thanx suri 4 accepting & kaam chalaing(lol)frm this chota sa part😆

& i surelly write more abt sujal kashish in the next part.

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