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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nikki
firstly welcome back
i really missed u
secondly congratulations on ur new story
just curious to know is AR a supporting character here?
or parallel leads?
thirdly wt abt ur other story on AR?
d murder mystery one?
please update dt soon
nd coming to d update
ot was awesome n quite interesting
i liked d story
update super soon
nd thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey nikki

firstly welcome back

i really missed u

secondly congratulations on ur new story

just curious to know is AR a supporting character here?

or parallel leads?

thirdly wt abt ur other story on AR?

d murder mystery one?

please update dt soon

nd coming to d update

ot was awesome n quite interesting

i liked d story

update super soon

nd thnx fr d pm

hey hi dear,got ur pm will catch up on it soon, ar r the parallel leads, i am currently catching up on all of urs n other writers ff then will update mine, n really nice to hear from u after so long
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: niknavyu

hey hi dear,got ur pm will catch up on it soon, ar r the parallel leads, i am currently catching up on all of urs n other writers ff then will update mine, n really nice to hear from u after so long

thnk god nt supporting actors😃
varna unke scenes kam hote😆
though should say take ur time n catching up
but i wont say that cos i want an update soon😳
nd same here i was wondering where hv u vanished
good to see you back
nd now dont vanish again without any prior notice😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

thnk god nt supporting actors😃

varna unke scenes kam hote😆
though should say take ur time n catching up
but i wont say that cos i want an update soon😳
nd same here i was wondering where hv u vanished
good to see you back
nd now dont vanish again without any prior notice😊

lol srishti here is an "official notice" i am still not fully on if (u are really very sweet) bcause every monday i hav an imp exam, n abt reading the ff i copy paste it on word and then read it so am not able to like it but will surely be commenting on it
My ff has not been written further but yup will be done with it till monday
nikki
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...gr8 yar...luved it...continue soon n plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolsaleha

Awesome...gr8 yar...luved it...continue soon n plz pm me

thnx n accept my buddy request n then u surely will recieve the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start sound interesting can't wait for more please add me to you pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woow, Totally Different 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

awesome start sound interesting can't wait for more please add me to you pm list


yup i hav added dear from next update u will receive pm
n thnx for ur comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THE DARK WORLD

PART 1 (b)

"Khushi I am quite sure now that kerela is the place where dad pointed us to go, it was the reason he had once told you the story of fairies n for our further hints u have to recall the story Khushi you have to, I have a feeling that our contact with dad is completely going to be broken in the near future" lightening the tense atmosphere Khushi spoke "di jab tak hum saath hain humara koi kuch nahi bigaad sakta right n see we are together so smile". The girls hugged each other n got to the packing work as after they had quite a lot of things to be done before their departure to kerela the next day.

"Woow di this place is one of its one of its kind ,all around what I can see is dirty n dirty books" said Khushi stomping her feet irritated she regretted doing such a thing as she started sneezing due to the dust she had raised , Riddhima smiled seeing her dear sister , "di see your at least smiling whole heartedly" " Khushi I meant it when I said that this place is a treasure ,we are not the only ones of this kind there are quite a few more like us n if these books gets in the hand of those who haven't joined our clan they can use it for the destruction of our world, Khushi you still haven't realized the importance of the power we have got, umpfhhh! In the last 48 hrs u have made me a 'bhashan queen' (lecture queen) for sure" "I love this side of my di too" exclaimed Khushi side hugging riddhima.

Riddhima smiled again and then said "ok! Now enough of chatting, lets get to some serious work, see(pointing towards the book shelves) the books here have the history of our clan and along with it most importantly they have the 'mantras' written without which our powers our useless, now we are over here at the attic to change our cent, because if they are the ones I am thinking of them to be, then they would be tracking us down by our smell or rather our fragrance" "Di r they some kind of dogs" on hearing this riddhima let out an whole hearted laughter and then suddenly stopped and then with a serious face said "Khushi dogs are mans best friends but they, they are the worst enemies humans can ever have" and then riddhima signaled Khushi to intertwine their hands and then she chanted a few mantras n at the end of it they could feel a new wave of freshness in them "done" said riddhima and then as if she forgot something she again intertwined their hands and read out a few more mantras and then at the end said "Khushi pick up your bags dear, its time for us to leave" "di what was the last mantra for?" "to make our house dog proof" said riddhima laughing at her own little joak,it took a little while for Khushi's brains to let the meaning sink in then she lightly punching her di at the shoulder said "di ap bhi na humesha mera mazaak udati rehti hain, u never leave a chance of pulling my leg" .Khushi wished how her di wouldn't have changed, why had god done the cruel thing of dragging their father away from them and thereby putting all the responsibility of our so called clan on riddhima di, once upon a time riddhima was the one whose laughter would make their house homely but now her di rarely smiled, but yup in the last two hours she has seen her di happy in an ages time maybe her di is excited about their first adventure on the own, kushi just wanted her sisters happiness back and she had a feeling that "kerala had something in store for them,that would change their lifes for ever"

By now they had left their house behind and they were on their way to the railway station, they were leaving to kerala today by the 1.00 clock train and they were pretty late because it was already 40 mins past 12.

On the other side "So this is their house right bhai" saying so arnav was about to enter the gate when armaan pulled him back and said "stop I am sure those unseen witches are smart enough to guard their house by some mantra". Armaan closed his eyes and concentrated hard and then he had an evil smirk on his face.

To be continued

This was again a small part but the next part is for sure super long and wont be draggy because it would have the Ar n the arhi meet.

I know that this is a draggy part but please do leave ur comments n do suggest the possible improvements I could be doing, n don't forgetr to hit the like tab

Love

nikki

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