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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

awesome!! Loved the 2nd part!!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

lovely update sad to see kushi so broken update soon

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

this is amazing.continue soon plz😊

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

I like the concept, please continue :)

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

very beautifully written babes.. lykd how the scenes were compared wid the past n the present... very well written.. was choked !! end mai milaaoing them right!! :)

thnx for the pm... update soon pls!!

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Annie

@ayaniie-chan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Rae!! No need to mention it, I'm glad you like it!😳

Coming to the story, beautifully written!🤗 I loved how you have managed to put across both their state of mind so clearly, this is too creative yet at the same time pretty realistic because of the character's nature still being intact, makes it much more easy to visualise, needless to say, I really enjoyed reading it! Great job! 👏Gosh, I'm being spoilt here, reading your ff everyday!.. hope you'll update soon! 😉😆

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

I loved the second part!!
And I really like the way u have written it. Its very well written!!
Do continue!!!

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

wonderful update..

awww felt bad to c see Khushi in pain..

hmm Arnav's remorse...

plzz continue soon

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

I guess people on the forum have vouched to make me go mad behind their writings...
As if the list wasnt long enough I open this post and here starts one of my new addictions...
This one was so amazing...I dont knowif I could actually comprehend with their pains...but ya there are bits and parts I could feel...And I guess thats what keeps the reader hooked on to such wonderful writings...
Poor Khushi...or poor Arnav I dont know...Both these characters confuse me these days...But still I guess the OS dawne some light on me...Both seem to be justifies in their positions in their actions ...And I am waiting to read more asap...
loved it