Hamesha Tumko Chaha ArHi 5Shot - REMOVED. - Page 35

Originally posted by: kritz11

That was so beautiful and very emotional...loved it!

For a moment I was dreading the end,as it reminded me about the scene in devdas and you even added that song, but heaved a sigh of relief at the end( I can never digest sad endings😔)

It was perfect! I would love a pm for your future works😊

Originally posted by: farfar319

I love the way it ended. Great job!!

This whole jealousy thing - new guy entry everyone's been buzzing about recently, if it turns out to lead to something like this is the only way I'd be ok with it... This intense (written amazingly by you!) scene? I'm all for it.

Love, love, love it.

Originally posted by: Nmyra

I am so sorry for being so late in catching up with this...or maybe i did read this...but hun i was just going through it now and wow!!

The payal sequence is what stole my heart - so perfect...i could see it playing out, KKG in a shaadi ka jora and ASR bending down to tie the payal once he'd realized he had to let her go...beautiful...

And of course thank you for the special mention <3

Originally posted by: koolgurl

awesum

Originally posted by: arshiarnav14

☺️aaaw sooo beautifully written...really bought tears to my eyes...😭

but it was sooo perfect!!!!

keep writing u r an excellent author...add me to ur pm list too

😊

Originally posted by: BellaMasen

Hi,

I don't know what to say. I am honestly speechless right now. I just read this all in one go, and all I can say is it's beautiful. It made me cry. Honestly. When Arnav was helping her get ready, there was a lump in my throat. I actually felt like someone I love was being snatched away from me. You have a way of making people feel what you write. So kudos to you, it really is a gift to write that well.

Do u have a pm list? Can u pm me for ur future works, and do u have an index? I'd love to read more😊