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Ok, here goes my crappy long comment on Chapter 8:
Oh gosh, I loved the beginning... Him feeling again so helpless like in the past. So many things hitting him at once. His love on the one side, and his Di who means the world to him. Gosh, I totally feel for him...
Awww, Khushi...I love it when she shouts at him, just shows how much she cares for him.
"Giving her all the time in the world to vent it out, he waited... simply waited. But something in heart stirred when he noticed tears in those angelic eyes. "
EEEKKK!! This bit I loved the most. I love him for being patient, for just listening to her...to her heart, her concern for him. You know, totally faraq padta hai types! ;) But then again, he can't see her crying... never!! Not his Khushi!! So sweet he is... eventhough he's in pain, he doesn't want her to feel his pain...
And I totally totally adore Karan in your FF!! I like the fact that he wants to talk to him at his office, and not at home. That's the only place where Arnav is rational!
Hahaha, I know it's not funny, but that is SO ASR-ish, see!!! I told you!! He is totally being rational there when he suggests Karan that they can talk abt family issues at home, not at his office! Ufff.
OH MY GOD. The parallelism is AMAZING! I didn't realize that earlier. And it's even more fascinating that Arnav actually notices that. He sees himself in Karan. That's just WOW. Brilliant idea, Rachuuu!! <3
Yep, it'd would definitely be easier for him if he first talks to Karan abt this... not sure if our reasons match, but I always felt that there's a big communication problem btw ASR-Khushi. Especially ASR...cause he never finds the right words, says the wrong things at the wrong time. So if he'd at least try to talk to someone else before talking Khushi...there's a chance of a real confrontation btw them. And not only a ...'Woh...Mein...Khushi...' types. You know?
At the same time, it's nearly impossible to apologize with words... I could totally understand when Arnav wanted to apologize, but felt in a way ashamed, cause no words could really convey his repentance...
Aaah, I knew she'd overhear their conversation. At least she heard that he was actually falling for her, sharing mutual feelings before Payash's wedding!! I don't know, but I honestly didn't mind her overhearing that part. Cause that's exactly what she needed to know. She knows it was an impulsive decision, and he did it because in the end, it would be Anjali who'd be suffering. So...somewhere... I know what he did was unethical, but maybe there's some hope that she might understand him eventually... It would have been worse if she just heard him saying she was basically trying to snatch Shyam from Anjali. THAT would have been terrible...
But gosh, how she must have been feeling after that confession! He ACTUALLY thought she betrayed him? She didn't love? Gosh...I feel for her!
That bit where he says I need to make her believe in love, cause I know she does was so touching... he who never believed in love, not only admits he's fallen in love, but now wants to make someone else believe in love again. That is remarkable... so many layers this ASR has got!
"Have you ever met a woman who inspires you to love? Until your every sense is filled with her? You see her. You inhale her. You taste her. You feel her. You see your unborn children in her eyes and know that your heart has at last found a home. Your life begins with her, and without her it must surely end... That woman, in my life, is Khushi. As simple and as complicated as that..." Arnav didn't know if his answer was convincing but he was sure of his honesty. After days, he felt as though a burden was taken off his chest.
THAT WAS: <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
NO WORDS...!!!!!
One month time... but I love that he's so confident abt getting her back. On the other hand, I hope he's just not being dominant there... I guess he really really does want to prove his unconditional love for her now...if he didn't love her truly, he would have probably let her go...
The man who makes my heart go dhak-dhak hates me. The city full of hustle bustle makes me feel lonely. The ironies of my life...
--> FAB FAB FAB!!!!
So ASR takes a whole month off!! HAH. I'm looking forward now what exactly he's going to do...
Ohooo, what's cooking btw Karan and Anjali??? ;)))
OKAYYY. This is such a crappy comment, Rachuuu!! But you must know I have totally forgotten how you comment on FFs...it's been more than 1.5 years alreadyyy!
BUT TOTALLY LOVED READING THIS FF, and I just got a little bit of time right now, so thought of commenting! And yes, I really DID want to write a long comment on your FF...cause I love the way you're developing the story, the characters, at the same time keeping it all so simple... <3 Love you!
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