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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely character sketch..
waiting for d update..
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awsum soni !! this is amazing !! pm karna mat bhoolna aur jaldi update

karo !!! <3 <3
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very beautiful...!!!!! really love it..!!!
but sneha ka naam change kyu kiya...let it be sharon only na...pleaseee..!!!!!

please pm me again when u update...!!!!
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wow awesome sonia👏..awesome characters...looks interesting...pm when u update ok :)
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wow awesome characteristic of all
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wow amazing luv d charecter sketch,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,plzzz pm me
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nyc intro..pls do continue soon..
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AWWW SONI LOVED IT ... SUPER LIKE U NAILED IT LOVE U FOR DIS WAITING WAITING WEN IS D FIRST UPDATE CANT WAIT ITS FREAKING AWESUM REY IS SUPER COOL VAMP OH GOD I LOV VAMP SO DO I LOV REY LOLZ ND IS KRIA A VAMP YA YET SHE CULD BECUM ONE😉 lolz understood vicky neha nd kkria r not vamps ohhh good rey is gng to make her one wow soni update karo me becuming despo😉
LOADS OF LOVE SONI THNX FOR D PM ND IF U DNT PM I WILL KILL U ...
Edited by sujucoolstar - 13 years ago
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The dream

It was a full moon night. The place was serene, never seen a beach so beautiful. The moon light perfectly placed itself on the sea water, giving a visible reflection of the moon. My bare legs were placed on the sand. The sea water was black but was enlightened because of the moon light whereas the sand seemed to be bluish white. It was heavenly, everything felt so pure. I have never felt so good. It was asif everything was placed perfectly, just for me. I felt special. This was the best feeling ever.

I knew I was dreaming coz such places do not exist in reality. I wanted to make the most of it; I wanted to live in that dream. I inhaled taking in the scent of purity. The fragrance was enchanting, like my own brand of perfume. I was scanning the whole place and that's when I saw him, he seemed to be like an angle dressed in white, he was near the sea shore facing the sea, so I couldn't get a perfect view, I started walking towards him. I knew he was a stranger but could sense the urge of wanting to know who he was. He was like a dream, a beautiful one. My legs were unstoppable moving towards his direction and that's when I noticed where he was leading me. His legs were already in those chilled water going deeper n deeper. "listen, it's a dead end" I said trying to stop him but there was no reaction asif he didn't listen. I tried again "excuse me" but again a no show. I couldn't stop myself from following him so I left my conscious mind behind n followed him'even if it was suicide. With in no time I could feel the frenzy water surrounding my legs. The water was quite chilled and I was freezing but nothing mattered at that moment'my legs were going deeper n deeper into the sea, the water level rising every second, I could feel the water rising and covering my body beneath it, with in no time it reached of me asin below my chin, was I walking so fast, I thought but to my concern he was gone, vanished like a ghost. I blinked continuously to see if he was still there but he wasn't. It took me no time to realize that I was deep into the sea or wait I was drowning, in no time my face was under water'as I was struggling, I was lacking for breath as I was not a good swimmer. There was water everywhere, it was like I was waiting for my death, I felt dizzy, my eye lids narrowed and tats when I saw him, he was pale or was it the moonlight, he was gorgeous, his skin was shining, his beautiful eyes were carefully stuck to mine, I was drowning in them, I wanted to see myself in them, we didn't blink for god knows how long'but is that even possible for a normal human being? His perfectly shaped lips totally kissable, I couldn't read his expression. I was under water but I could still smell his scent, it was mesmerizing, he was the definition of perfect, everything was just up to the mark. Can someone be so perfect? I questioned myself but later I realized these questions could wait, right now being with him was more important, yes he was important to me, very precious but why I don't even know him. I again ignored my brain which was full of queries. I wasn't chocking anymore. He then gently moved his hand ahead, poisoning it perfectly so that my hands could fit in. My heart beat pumped; I could sense a desire in me, a desire of wanting him. I dint know who he was but I trusted him more than anyone at that particular moment, don't know why asif he meant everything, there was no world beyond him asif we were meant to be and no one could stop this. I blushed a bit but then controlled myself; I leaned forward to place my hands into those perfect pale hands, wanting to place my hand in his.

"Good morning sweets" she said with an enthusiastic pitch in her voice and she had done it again.

"Good morning mom" I frowned as I was still thinking about him'

"Get up now come on" she pulled off the blanket and damn it was cold, how did I forget I was in dehradun.

"Go and freshen up fast, first day of college don't be late. I m waiting for breakfast" he voice fading as she left the room.

I couldn't figure out what was going on with me, from the past 1 week, actually since my birthday I have been dreaming about him. A guy I never saw in reality, does he even exist? If yes who is he..? And if no, why am I dreaming about him..? What connection do we have..? Why do I lose my senses when I am with him? Why is this happening to me? Is this even normal? There were so many questions running all over me but all were unanswered and therefore I was disappointed.

I then saw the time n realized I was already late.

"ohh shit! I am late, neha's gonna kill me" I panicked as I ran in to the washroom.

Edited by Kriyansh - 13 years ago
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OMG SONI I REALLY LOVED IT OH SHIT U WIRTE AMAZING ND AWESUM THIS IS A YET BEATIFUL ND PERFECT START FOR MY KRIYANSH OH GOD OUT OF DIS WORLD SUPER COOL I MUST SAY FRM HERE ON WARDS ITS NOT HAWWT FOR ME NLY COOL COZ VAMP R REALLY COOL LOLZ ND KRIA IS SO FALLEN FOR HIM
I JUST WANT TO SAY PERFECT BEGINING FOR D MOST PERFECT COUPLE EVER
THNX FOR D PM IF U DID NOT HAD PMED ME I WOULD HAD KILLED U LOL😉
THNX FOR D PM ND LOVE U SONI😊😊😊
Edited by sujucoolstar - 13 years ago

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