OS: And It Was Over

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Posted: 13 years ago
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One shot: hope u all like it :)

"I hate you! More than I have ever hated anything and anyone else in this world."

She looked into his eyes as he said those ugly words, trying to search for that tiny sign that will tell her he didn't mean what he said. What she saw in his eyes at that moment made her go numb for few seconds. He was dead serious. He meant every word he uttered and he didn't regret it. Instead she saw his face relax as if he always wanted to say those words to her.

"There, I said it. Is that enough proof for you? Or do you want me to say more?" he asked her while his hand was still tightly holding her arm, more from anger than passion like many times he held her arms before. And just like that in a moment, he pushed her away from him as if disgusted to be near her.

At that moment she knew it was over or rather she felt it was over. All the dreams she saw, all the hopes she had were nothing but just mere dreams and hopes. While tears fell from her eyes, she took few steps back. The hatred she saw his on his face was enough to make her hate herself. Until today, she has seen herself from his eyes and after this, she wasn't sure if she still existed.

She took few more steps back, turned and ran. She ran as he turned and took her into his arms. She ran as she saw him kiss her forhead like he used to kiss her before. She ran as she he uttered those special worlds to her. She ran so the reality of what has just happened wouldn't catch up to her. She ran as she heard his voice over and over again in her head. She ran as she remembered the old times, the times when she was his world and he was hers. She ran as far as she could, from this ugly truth while he walked toward his bright future.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good effort...keep writing 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os but please continue it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mina420

good effort...keep writing 👍🏼

Thanks. It was just something that was my head and I decided to write it down :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowers4u

great os but please continue it soon

Thank you :) I don't think i m gona write more for this one. Maybe I will write another longer one soon :)

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